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North Eastern Corner Of Badger Boulevard; Appointed area for dark behavior...
Topic Started: Aug 31 2004, 11:11 AM (306 Views)
The Grand High Squidgyness
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"They're watching you"

SCENE 1.............AQUA MOUSE KIDNAPPING


*Squidge sneaks up to a rubbish bin and places a suspicious looking holdall inside, that done he lights up a cigar and gazes intently into the gloom of the surrounding buildings."Its cold tonight" he thinks as he lifts the collar of his mac .

to the right theer is a rustle in the undergrowth...a small black cat emerges .it stares at him with its saucer like eyes , a hiss escapes it mouth.
squidge looks and takes the cue to leave...disappearing into the dead of night*
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SCENE 2 AQUA MOUSE KIDNAPPING

*sighting his scope at the glowing embers ogf Squidges finished cigar the 'Mechanic' adjusts his sights. hidden amongst the buildings and gloom he is totaly hidden from prying eyes

his nicotine stained fingers pull out a malboro from the knee pocket of his cams , He carefully cups his hand over the Zippo Lighter as he sparks up

next to him lies a family pack of kentucky fried chicken and a strong black from Fudgie's Coffee shop...*

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The cat was nearing its prey, a young rat too busy cleaning itself to notice its impending doom. the cat crouched, its mouth twitching inadvertently ,eyes as large as saucers focused solely on the rat .....nothing else existed ...nearer and nearer it crept crawling low to the ground it took up position behind a small gorse bush,its eyes manic with the instinct to kill..................the cat changed position its hind quarters raised , the cat was ready to pounce

"tthhffft!!"......the cat felt a sting then dropped dead just as it was leaping .The rat starled by dead cat landing almost on top of it scurries off

A small curl of smoke that drifts lazely off the barrel of the MV47 Egalant rifle. "the Snipers prefered rifle". is the only indication that the rifle has fired , the silencer had taken care of any sound
the mechanic grunted quietly and adjusted the sights "Damn was aiming at the rat "

he takes a slug of coffee and opens the fried chicken......he waits
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SCENE 3 AQUA MOUSE KIDNAPPING

There is a sudden commotion off to the right ..

The mechanic starts, putting on some night vision goggles he creeps around the shadows that conceal his deadly lair.

adjusting his NV goggles he zooms in on the commotion .At the end of the Boulivard there are several police cars and foot police surrounding what looks like a chinese take-away.

At once his back starts to crawl,he senses something is amiss."damn"
he retreats into the shadows...making his way back .As he was doing so he glanced at his rolex...he had been gone now for 1 minute 17 seconds ..within seconds the Mechanic was back st hi hide out. He scanned the Area......"nothing, not a damned thing" disgruntled he settled back into rythmn...

in the darkest smallest corner of his mind a small voice tugged and pulled at him..."have you just been conned?....did you fall for the most basic rule of all"

(if i have been duped ..then this becomes personal!),his teeth grind and he pulls another tab....and waits!
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FINAL SCENE---------------The Aqua Mouse investigation-----------

setting.......................outside Fudges Coffee Shop


Sipping his singapore sling the Chinese gentleman watches Maguire's office intently

He watches as a black Sedan arrives and THe High Squidge gets out

shortly after the Squidge leaves with a Aquamouse in a cage .



he pulls out his mobile phone and hits his autodial......

"He's back"


A van pulls up and the Chinese gentleman gets in........
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SCENE 1 THE MURDER

-----------------------------later that night


Mrs Miggins out walking her two maltese teriers through the small ornamental garden that leads out of the Boulivard......


"hurry percy , no dawdling ..."

the little terrier oblivious to the words, keeps on tugging and pulling at the canvas holdall that is semi burried underneath some gorse bushes .

"Come now !" she cried "i wont tell you again "
walking up to the terrier she clipps on the lead and tugs him away from the bushes.

protesting he is dragged back and in doing so the flap on the hold all falls open revealing a hand
"Oh my gosh!!" screams Mrs miggins and she staggers back.

-------------------------------Soon after

amongst the reporters ,policeand nosy spectators a columbian man listens to the conversation between the coroner and the crime scene investigators

"Bloddy wierd , thats what it is. No blood anywhere!, not even IN the corpse"

"musta drained all the blood before sawing the torso up eh"

"whats the estimated time of death ?"enquired the leading investigator

"well judging by the state of rigamortis hmm , i'd say around 10 hours. but you want to know whats got be freaked?"

"whats theat?"

"The guy has a smile on his face!"

everyone who had over heard and was standing close enough creened their heads to stare at the smiling chinese head that was sticking out between the legs in the holdall.

"hey hey hey ..lookie here " O'Mally ( a 50 something detective nearing retirement, one of the old school) bent down and picked up a small card from next to the holdall....

MAGUIRE'S INVESTIGATIONS
No job too big ,No job too small

On the back was written

2.30 pm don'follow TM wait for HS followed with some kinda chinese symbol h‘å‰q

"Well that figures" murmered the old Irish detective "wherever theres trouble he 'aint far away"

Looking around he pockets the card............................
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Do not follow me, for I am lost...

Don't forget to pick up your ParrrrTay' SCANDAL magazine
this weeks feature headlines....

MURDER ON BADGER BOULIVARD
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Could Tom Maguire of the famous MAGUIRE'S INVESTIGATIONS be tangled up in this murder? According to Detective O'Mally a Maguire Investigation card was found at the scene of this gastly crime.

CORRECTION:
The article should of read;
Could Tom Maquire of the famous Private Investigations be tangled up in this murder?
Detective O'Mally was mistaken when he told the reporter it was a Maquire Investigation card. Private Investigations is the name of the establishment in which Tom Maquire works.

*mumbles to self....can't even count on a Detective for correct information these days*
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Caer Rialis
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The balmy evening weighed heavily upon the market square. Word of the murder, and charges that I was involved in I ran through the strets like tumbleweeds in a ghost town, rolling every which way but to the truth. Add to that the Delegate being seen in my offices, well, it doesn't take a complete ignoramus to assume this is a political hit.

I inspected the scene of the crime, the bushes where the small little yappie dog found the body. No blood there, none of the leaves of the shrubbery, nothing on the ground. Intriguing, but I always get intriguing cases. Well, no rest for the weary, as my Mother always said.

I located an old informant, a Mr. Y_________, a drunk who lived not far from the Boulevard.
What do you got for me?

Eyes all clouded with drink, he mumbled, Saw 'tall, but the cops don' ask an old, hic, man like me. Not like, hic, youd does, Tom.

What did you see?

His bloodshot eyes locked to mine an istant before he replied Don' like it Tom, not 'tall. Lots o'men in black hangin' round here. You gots to be careful, Tom.

It's tough getting pertinant information from a drunk. Strill, promise of more hooch got me more than enough to make this worth my while
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Do not follow me, for I am lost...

*front page of the new edition of ParrrrTay' SCANDAL*

BLOODHOUND SEEN in CRIME AREA!
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Could this Bloodhound be employed by Private Investigations?
Could this be Tom Maquires idea towards taking the bite out of crime?
If so, there was no blood found at the scene, so why the bloodhound?

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Fudgie's 'Fronk'...

Hidden in amongst the discarded cardboard boxes, the BIA Agent could clearly overhear the partly slurred and stuttering conversation...Everything was transmitted to the main operating team of Agents a street away and recorded for detailed analysis...

Tom and his informant parted company and as Mr. Y stumbled deeper into the darkened alley Tom made his way to the street, mounted and kick-started his Jawa and pulled out into traffic...
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Back in the alley, just as the Agent was about to break cover the air became disturbed...The Agent took no chances and remained safely hidden away...Suddenly a loud crack and what could only be described as an electrical disturbance disrupted the void left by Mr Y...

Mr Y. turned and shielded his eyes from the brightening light. The 'Man in Black' stood and watched as Mr Y. began to cower...

The Agent knew they had to act quickly...Pressing the Agent In Distress (AID) button on the Badger Communication device saw to it that the 'Man in Black' would do no harm to Mr Y...Swiftly the crack interception team had distracted the 'Man in Black' and The Agent had got Mr Y to safety...

An interesting development, needless to say not unexpected but the timing rather sooner than anticipated...Mr Y upon being checked into the Setts Hotel was safe and the trail of Tom and Dave was protected...Well safe for the time being anyway...
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