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Most beautiful heart
Topic Started: Sep 24 2004, 03:18 AM (175 Views)
precious_girl
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One day a young man was standing in the middle of town proclaiming he had the most beautiful heart in the whole valley. A large crowd gathered and they all admired his heart for it was perfect. There was not a mark or a flaw in it. Yes, they all agreed it truly was the most beautiful heart they had ever seen. The young man was very proud and boasted loudly about his beautiful heart.

Suddenly, an old man appeared at the front of the crowd and said, “Why your heart is not nearly as beautiful as mine.”

The crowd and the young man looked at the old man’s heart. It was beating strongly, but full of scars, it had the places where pieces had been removed and other pieces put in, but they didn’t fit quite right and there were several jagged edges. In fact, in some places there were deep gouges where whole pieces were missing.

The people stared – how can he say his heart is more beautiful, they thought?

The young man looked at the old man’s heart and saw its state and laughed. “You must be joking,” he said. “Compare your heart with mine, mine is perfect and yours is a mess of scars and tears.”

“Yes,” said the old man, “yours is perfect looking but I would never trade with you. You see, every scar represents a person to whom I have given my love – I tear out a piece of my heart and give it to them, and often they give me a piece of their heart, but because the pieces aren’t exact, I have some rough edges, which I cherish, because they remind me of the love we shared. Sometimes I have given pieces of my heart away, and the other person hasn’t returned a piece of his heart to me. These are the empty gouges – giving love is taking a chance. Although these gouges are painful, they stay open, reminding me of the love I have for these people too, and I hope someday they may return and fill the space I have waiting. So now do you see what true beauty really is?

The young man stood silently with tears running down his cheeks. He walked up to the old man, reached into his perfect young and most beautiful heart, and ripped a piece out. He offered it to the old man with trembling hands.

The old man took his offering, place it in his heart and then took a piece from his old scarred heart and placed it in the wound in the young man’s heart. It fit, but not perfectly, as there were some jagged edges.

The young man looked at his heart, not perfect anymore but more beautiful than ever, since love from the old man’s heart flowed into his.

They embraced and walked away side by side saying “Only God” can make a beautiful heart!


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nice...
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Kesha
very touching
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Yeah very touching thats why i posted here
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Nice.. thanks for sharing :Left:
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i will read it later or tomorrow
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Read it now it won't take time
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very touching..tfs
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kashish
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its touching..... i think i have read it b4.but true
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Sep 24 2004, 11:10 PM
very touching..tfs

:cheeky: :Left:
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reallyy v nicee
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nice...thnx 4 sharin :D
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yehhhhhh
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precious_girl
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thanks for reading
I know i don't read if its long
thanks
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i didn't
but i did said sumthin so u dnt mind [oops]
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Sep 25 2004, 09:39 PM
i didn't
but i did said sumthin so u dnt mind [oops]

wat did u say??
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i didn't read it really...
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precious_girl
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i knew it
Don't worry abt it
I don't read if its long
but i post this cause' i like it
Very touching
When i read it for the 1st time, i was thinking i should give a piece of my heart to some1
I don't want beautiful heart cause' if its perfect then u would not love any1
Its just a story
Read it whenever u get time
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awwwww
sweeeet
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Sep 25 2004, 09:59 PM
i knew it
Don't worry abt it
I don't read if its long
but i post this cause' i like it
Very touching
When i read it for the 1st time, i was thinking i should give a piece of my heart to some1
I don't want beautiful heart cause' if its perfect then u would not love any1
Its just a story
Read it whenever u get time

wow
nah i am walys free
i ll read it now
sis n/p
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yazminx
i red it
and i really like it
but ia y got beautifull heart
wut abt u
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precious_girl
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thanks for reading ashi
I think i got beautiful heart
but i want more beautiful
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precious_girl
Sep 25 2004, 09:10 PM
thanks for reading
I know i don't read if its long
thanks

i read it
i hope when i get old i have a beautiful just like the old man
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Sep 26 2004, 04:58 AM
thanks for reading ashi
I think i got beautiful heart
but i want more beautiful

hmmm...
how can u say that?
u don't really know
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Sep 26 2004, 09:42 PM
precious_girl
Sep 26 2004, 04:58 AM
thanks for reading ashi
I think i got beautiful heart
but i want more beautiful

hmmm...
how can u say that?
u don't really know

yeah but i know wat i want
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kashish
Sep 26 2004, 03:28 PM
precious_girl
Sep 25 2004, 09:10 PM
thanks for reading
I know i don't read if its long
thanks

i read it
i hope when i get old i have a beautiful just like the old man

same here but i want it now
don't wanna wait till i get old
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Sep 27 2004, 07:49 PM
Mrs Khan
Sep 26 2004, 09:42 PM
precious_girl
Sep 26 2004, 04:58 AM
thanks for reading ashi
I think i got beautiful heart
but i want more beautiful

hmmm...
how can u say that?
u don't really know

yeah but i know wat i want

what u mean :unsure:
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Sep 27 2004, 10:32 PM
precious_girl
Sep 27 2004, 07:49 PM
Mrs Khan
Sep 26 2004, 09:42 PM
precious_girl
Sep 26 2004, 04:58 AM
thanks for reading ashi
I think i got beautiful heart
but i want more beautiful

hmmm...
how can u say that?
u don't really know

yeah but i know wat i want

what u mean :unsure:

I want a beautiful heart like that old man's
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Sep 27 2004, 10:37 PM
Mrs Khan
Sep 27 2004, 10:32 PM
precious_girl
Sep 27 2004, 07:49 PM
Mrs Khan
Sep 26 2004, 09:42 PM
precious_girl
Sep 26 2004, 04:58 AM
thanks for reading ashi
I think i got beautiful heart
but i want more beautiful

hmmm...
how can u say that?
u don't really know

yeah but i know wat i want

what u mean :unsure:

I want a beautiful heart like that old man's

hmmm
hope so u get one
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Mrs Khan
Sep 27 2004, 10:39 PM
precious_girl
Sep 27 2004, 10:37 PM
Mrs Khan
Sep 27 2004, 10:32 PM
precious_girl
Sep 27 2004, 07:49 PM
Mrs Khan
Sep 26 2004, 09:42 PM
precious_girl
Sep 26 2004, 04:58 AM
thanks for reading ashi
I think i got beautiful heart
but i want more beautiful

hmmm...
how can u say that?
u don't really know

yeah but i know wat i want

what u mean :unsure:

I want a beautiful heart like that old man's

hmmm
hope so u get one

evry1 should get a beautiful heart
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