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[ S ] Gamma Terra / Gamma Krynn
Topic Started: Feb 15 2005, 11:17 AM (262 Views)
sluyky
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As some ofyou prob know, ive been playing NWN for some time.
I managed to get myself as admin for www.game2xs.com , and thus decided id make a server for them.

Now ive wrote a basic story out, im needing help with it being more refined, infact i need story writers, and maybe other ppl whom would help me in building of this world.
If its needed i could "supply" a copy of the game.

heres the current story, yeh i know its cheesey and ripped off from many films/books etc , but hey it works ;)

History and Present

The Realms of The Past

In previous times the lands of Westwood were lush and green as far as the eye could see,
Species of every race had there own peaceful way of life and many of the towns had trade routes interconnecting them to one another. To the North lay Haven and its surrounding towns full of all types of adventurers looking for fame and fortune in the new lands, the river of Earldom ran straight through the peaceful and small town of Westwood where people lived a simple life, those who didn’t wish to live in peace either ventured off else where or if they were found to be more gifted they were enrolled into the mages guild .To the South lay the barren town of G'horn first founded by a lone barbarian Bubolas Rilo, these lands were rough and dangerous, most adventures who went there never returned . In G'horn there were no rules only chaos thus it was to be known as the Bad Lands.


The Day of Change

Many wizards came to Westwood’s mage guild in search of power and to learn from each other, a young Half-Elf named Ania Silvermoon ran the guild. Ania always kept and taught self control and founded rules in which each magic users within
The mage guildhalls must abide by a rule set that has been sent down in the ages gone past.

If these rules were broken then these mages would be rejected from the guild.
Bazmarok, Ania’s youngest student was the strangest magic user she had ever encountered unlike normal he did not need to study books to learn the ways of magic, although he had this great gift he was wreck-less and engulfed by his own power.
After only 2 sessions of his training Bazmarok was banished from the guild for killing another mage in a conflict of potions, he soon fled the lands of Westwood to escape execution from the king of Haven.
Bazmarok fled south into the Bad Lands; into the heart of G'horn seeking refuge...more than he knew this would be the change of all the realms.
As Bazmarok’s power grew so did his desire for control over the evil city. At night he struck and left no chance for Bubolas Rilo to defend against the youngsters mighty magic.
As Bazmarok's evil spread across the Bad Lands orcs, goblins, and outcasts of the other realms fled to G'horn. Still Bazmarok’s thirst for power was not done; he was so desperate he would do anything to be greater than the ones who sent him away.
With the aid of his own apprentice Zanorif he opened a portal tapping into the Outer Planes, with this he summoned the great the demon Van'zura.

The Great Battle

With the demon Van'zura summoned he engulfed the young mages mind and took control. The demon free from his off world prison now united with Bazmarok’s power and thoughts intended to carry them out. He summoned all inhabitants of G'horn to unite and to obey. He sent Zanorif to take an army of orcs to Westwood to bring Ania to G'horn. The army arrived at Westwood in the night and attacked the unexpecting town but were pushed back by the powerful forces of the mages.
Ania took a small council to the King Gavernal, they decided a counter attack was the best option and Ania was chosen to lead. Thousands of troops of all species were gathered and marched off to the Bad Land. Men and creatures fell by the hundreds, leaving the battle equal. Ania could sense Bazmarok’s presence but it was some how different, then she saw it, a huge demon ripping men apart with ease, she ran to him and engaged in a fierce battle, Ania was hit to the ground and as the demon hit his final attack to her chest, her sword plunged into the demons heart...unfortunately Ania had died. The battle still raged on, and extended onto the grounds of Haven,
Most of haven was destroyed but the army of G'horn was defeated.... but at a great cost.

The Realms Of Today

Through the great battle a lot of the lands were left tarnished with a great desert forming, and a great black cloud forming over the south. The world’s inhabitants became less trusting and a depression covered all the realms. When King Gavernal died his son prince Gavernal didn’t have the funds to return Haven to its old self, so it became a port town, thus making links between the port and other unexplored continents. Westwood stayed with almost the same way of life with the mages controlling mostly everything and keeping old customs. It is said that after the great battle body and sword, which is said to hold Van’zura’s spirit within it, were hidden inside the mage guild itself. After the great battle it is also said Zanorif retrieved Bazmarok’s body and buried it under G'horn castle. G'horn's streets filled with lowlife of every type with the faint of heart not welcome, the city is harsher than before and passes execution as a custom. Many unseen races have been seen in large groups, could this be from the unexplored lands?
There is a natural hatred between The port of Haven and G'horn, where as the mages of Westwood have tried to forget the horrible past and forget, but still suspect ions of battle grow nearer. The fate of the realms lay in each new adventurer; will you obey and live for the fight of the Bad Lands and G'horn? , Will your fight for justice and good of the Port Of Haven? Or will you try living in peace in Westwood. The choice is yours.!!!



Cheers for any one who helps - please note grammer is not an issue at this point ( as you may see )


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I read it this morning, and tbh, I don't think you need much hellp =p

Sounds great so far.


Plus if I write a story, everyone tends to die =(
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Sexy, stories where everyone dies are fun as well :o I agree with your lack of needing helpness, and also with your grammar :P
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comon mofo's help meh
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Tip:- Add porn.
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FallenAngel
Feb 17 2005, 07:35 PM
Tip:- Add porn.

cant, PG-13 on the game, :P
IF i go anything higher its breaking the licience with the game = bioware come for me.
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