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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 18 2004, 02:28 PM (145 Views) | |
| Akashic | Dec 18 2004, 02:28 PM Post #1 |
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Wangcaster Lov0r
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Last night, there was a sky against the line There was a bond above all else Through our sickness and in our health you turned your back against ourselves But when the falls Cascade through minds awake And i just cannot see Wake up! I dont think i am left behind Oh no! Theres nothing that i cannot find Fall down! The fires never raged this was before... yet again creativity only stretches me to one verse but there ya go |
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| FallenAngel | Dec 18 2004, 03:51 PM Post #2 |
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I like it - just keep at it,. Imo that would rawk more if finished =o |
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| Akashic | Dec 19 2004, 04:39 PM Post #3 |
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yet again ur judgement is impeccable(spelt wrong) :P thanq |
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