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[p] Fall Down
Topic Started: Dec 18 2004, 02:28 PM (145 Views)
Akashic
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Wangcaster Lov0r
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Last night, there was a sky against the line
There was a bond above all else
Through our sickness and in our health
you turned your back against ourselves

But when the falls
Cascade through minds awake
And i just cannot see

Wake up!
I dont think i am left behind
Oh no!
Theres nothing that i cannot find
Fall down!
The fires never raged this was before...

yet again creativity only stretches me to one verse but there ya go
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FallenAngel
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I like it - just keep at it,. Imo that would rawk more if finished =o
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Akashic
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Wangcaster Lov0r
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yet again ur judgement is impeccable(spelt wrong) :P thanq
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