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fighting the blade&bitter sweet pain; 2 lil poems
Topic Started: Jun 18 2004, 11:23 PM (190 Views)
distanced_angel
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Bitter sweet Pain
Why Can't I do it?
Its all I want, all I long for
my whole body aches for it
the cool sting of the blade
the soothing trickle of blood
over and over and over again
covering all of me
a sign of the pain
internal becoming external
the only way I can deal
with the screaming in my head
the anguish in my soul
is it never again to be real
just a bitter sweet memory
so distant yet so new

Fighting the blade
The hour is close at hand
yet I run for shelter
hide my eyes to try and escape
but even there it follows me
I dare not run
I cannot hide
I feel it again
calling my heart
compelling me to come closer
however hard I fight
however loud I scream
theres no escaping it
I know who will win this battle
I already lost years ago
not enough has changed this time
it's only a matter of time
before the blade has its way again.
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sluyky
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Once again a good writing style :)

Poem one has very good descriptive work in it.

To me poem two relates to some sort of victory over something
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