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| fighting the blade&bitter sweet pain; 2 lil poems | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 18 2004, 11:23 PM (190 Views) | |
| distanced_angel | Jun 18 2004, 11:23 PM Post #1 |
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Bitter sweet Pain Why Can't I do it? Its all I want, all I long for my whole body aches for it the cool sting of the blade the soothing trickle of blood over and over and over again covering all of me a sign of the pain internal becoming external the only way I can deal with the screaming in my head the anguish in my soul is it never again to be real just a bitter sweet memory so distant yet so new Fighting the blade The hour is close at hand yet I run for shelter hide my eyes to try and escape but even there it follows me I dare not run I cannot hide I feel it again calling my heart compelling me to come closer however hard I fight however loud I scream theres no escaping it I know who will win this battle I already lost years ago not enough has changed this time it's only a matter of time before the blade has its way again. |
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| sluyky | Jun 18 2004, 11:47 PM Post #2 |
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Once again a good writing style :) Poem one has very good descriptive work in it. To me poem two relates to some sort of victory over something |
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