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Topic Started: Jun 18 2004, 11:15 PM (161 Views)
distanced_angel
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ancient scars hear my cries,
burst forth new hope from old fear
a reunion of aged with youth,
a twisted sign of life long grief.

Fresh marks now blending with the old
stronger now, but soon the same
carpenter pick up your tool now cold
carve new signatures of pain

released from reality, finally home
final security, tempting fate.
drifting away, into a world all my own
a place free from the sting of hate
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nomey
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:) very well written
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sluyky
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I agree , well written the 2nds stanza ( verse ) sticks out to me in my head . I Could see you wrting good song lyrics :)
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distanced_angel
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Thanx nomey :)
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distanced_angel
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thanx, my songs always seem to suck! lol, but then i havent written anythin in a long time before today when i did these so ya never know! thanks for the support!!
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sluyky
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no problem :)

wow freeky we posted at exactly the same time :o

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sluyky Posted on Jun 19 2004, 12:24 AM


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distanced_angel Posted on Jun 19 2004, 12:24 AM

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distanced_angel
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ooh cool...well ya know great minds n all that jazz lol :D :D
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