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| distanced_angel | Jun 18 2004, 11:15 PM Post #1 |
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ancient scars hear my cries, burst forth new hope from old fear a reunion of aged with youth, a twisted sign of life long grief. Fresh marks now blending with the old stronger now, but soon the same carpenter pick up your tool now cold carve new signatures of pain released from reality, finally home final security, tempting fate. drifting away, into a world all my own a place free from the sting of hate |
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| nomey | Jun 18 2004, 11:19 PM Post #2 |
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:) very well written |
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| sluyky | Jun 18 2004, 11:24 PM Post #3 |
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I agree , well written the 2nds stanza ( verse ) sticks out to me in my head . I Could see you wrting good song lyrics :) |
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| distanced_angel | Jun 18 2004, 11:24 PM Post #4 |
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Thanx nomey :) |
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| distanced_angel | Jun 18 2004, 11:28 PM Post #5 |
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thanx, my songs always seem to suck! lol, but then i havent written anythin in a long time before today when i did these so ya never know! thanks for the support!! |
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| sluyky | Jun 18 2004, 11:36 PM Post #6 |
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no problem :) wow freeky we posted at exactly the same time :o
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| distanced_angel | Jun 18 2004, 11:40 PM Post #7 |
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ooh cool...well ya know great minds n all that jazz lol :D :D |
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