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| there ever was a time; my poem, based on personal stuff | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 2 2004, 08:15 PM (113 Views) | |
| Si | Mar 2 2004, 08:15 PM Post #1 |
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Ultimate Poster
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if there ever was a time, when i knew the world was mine i'd trap it for one second, i'd hold the thought devine id store it in a safe somewhere to bring back out again, and help me through the heartache, and help me through the pain if there ever was a time, i could see your face once more, id cherish like a picture, that thought for ever more, and wish for a second, that i got one glance, to remember that inage, to have one more chance if there was a time, when you never betrayed me, i'd live for you and talk to you, and hope that you would see how much ive had to live with, how much i have been hurt and wipe the specs of tears, right of my tattered shirt the love i have has all run dry, the feelings lost inside to never come back out again till ive been purified and when i make it out the pit, the hole fades of from black you can look and point and say "there's Si" thank god hes finally back Si o2/04 discuss if you will, thank you please |
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| Predslayer | Mar 2 2004, 08:28 PM Post #2 |
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That's really good Si :) I don't know you very well,but in the time since I've met you I've notied ure rather handy at writing songs etc, I have no clue as to any of the hardships that you've had to go through, but I can say I hope you get through them :) |
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| sluyky | Mar 2 2004, 08:53 PM Post #3 |
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dude , your l337 at writing :) well done again man |
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| Si | Mar 2 2004, 11:17 PM Post #4 |
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ta mates, ta pred, i'll make a seperate topic bout it in the problem forum, name it my anguish or something, fill you all in |
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