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there ever was a time; my poem, based on personal stuff
Topic Started: Mar 2 2004, 08:15 PM (113 Views)
Si
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if there ever was a time, when i knew the world was mine
i'd trap it for one second,
i'd hold the thought devine
id store it in a safe somewhere to bring back out again,
and help me through the heartache, and help me through the pain

if there ever was a time, i could see your face once more,
id cherish like a picture, that thought for ever more,
and wish for a second, that i got one glance,
to remember that inage, to have one more chance

if there was a time, when you never betrayed me,
i'd live for you and talk to you, and hope that you would see
how much ive had to live with, how much i have been hurt
and wipe the specs of tears, right of my tattered shirt

the love i have has all run dry,
the feelings lost inside
to never come back out again
till ive been purified

and when i make it out the pit,
the hole fades of from black
you can look and point and say "there's Si"
thank god hes finally back

Si o2/04

discuss if you will, thank you please
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Predslayer
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That's really good Si :) I don't know you very well,but in the time since I've met you I've notied ure rather handy at writing songs etc, I have no clue as to any of the hardships that you've had to go through, but I can say I hope you get through them :)
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sluyky
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dude , your l337 at writing :)
well done again man
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Si
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ta mates, ta pred, i'll make a seperate topic bout it in the problem forum, name it my anguish or something, fill you all in
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