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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 16 2004, 08:19 PM (74 Views) | |
| punky chic | Feb 16 2004, 08:19 PM Post #1 |
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Writer's Curse There's things out there to keep you alive contray to belief electric shocks arent' one of them. there's times when vodka seems the best cure but as my arm hangs over my guitar the drugs have all worn off again and common sense replaces desires and tell tale lines appear on my face where the tears have ran their salty paths and all is dire. i wanted to be the one you'd come home to at night life on the rocks we all thought but id get you through it half a chance. now i can see doubt in your eyes and your voice holds so many secrets i roll a dice but no luck again I'll just hitch up my guitar and leave here bound for sleepless nights and half cut mornings tell me how too determine love. as i wander the memories of my mind their spiteful, twisted paths are in unison with hell and god and i cant help but cry and wonder would you ever question me again? given half a chance, could you ever love me again? so, as i write this and wonder were you are i cant find any means or reasons in keepin one alive except to dream and torment whats left of my heart and soul as any good writer or poet should. my writer's curse; forever without you. :( |
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| Andy | Feb 16 2004, 08:48 PM Post #2 |
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That is one of the best poems i've read so far I especially liked this part near the end,made a lot of sense especially the "given half a chance, could you ever love me again?" part. "I cant help but cry and wonder would you ever question me again? given half a chance, could you ever love me again? so, as i write this and wonder were you are i cant find any means or reasons in keepin one alive except to dream and torment whats left of my heart and soul as any good writer or poet should. my writer's curse; forever without you. gd stuff ;) |
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| sluyky | Feb 16 2004, 10:10 PM Post #3 |
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wow nicely wrote :) |
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| Si | Feb 17 2004, 09:02 AM Post #4 |
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yeah i really like that, what a poem |
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| Adam | Feb 17 2004, 10:00 AM Post #5 |
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that is really nice lisa |
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| nomey | Feb 17 2004, 10:12 AM Post #6 |
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yeah, its brill :) |
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