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poem; Lisa
Topic Started: Feb 16 2004, 08:19 PM (74 Views)
punky chic
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Writer's Curse

There's things out there to keep you alive
contray to belief
electric shocks arent' one of them.
there's times when vodka seems the best cure
but as my arm hangs over my guitar
the drugs have all worn off again
and common sense replaces desires
and tell tale lines appear on my face
where the tears have ran their salty paths and all is dire.
i wanted to be the one you'd come home to at night
life on the rocks we all thought
but id get you through it half a chance.
now i can see doubt in your eyes
and your voice holds so many secrets
i roll a dice but no luck again
I'll just hitch up my guitar and leave here
bound for sleepless nights and half cut mornings
tell me how too determine love.

as i wander the memories of my mind
their spiteful, twisted paths are in unison with hell and god
and i cant help but cry and wonder
would you ever question me again?
given half a chance, could you ever love me again?
so, as i write this and wonder were you are
i cant find any means or reasons in keepin one alive
except to dream
and torment whats left of my heart and soul
as any good writer or poet should.
my writer's curse;
forever without you.
:(
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Andy
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That is one of the best poems i've read so far
I especially liked this part near the end,made a lot of sense especially the "given half a chance, could you ever love me again?" part.

"I cant help but cry and wonder
would you ever question me again?
given half a chance, could you ever love me again?
so, as i write this and wonder were you are
i cant find any means or reasons in keepin one alive
except to dream
and torment whats left of my heart and soul
as any good writer or poet should.
my writer's curse;
forever without you.

gd stuff ;)

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sluyky
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wow nicely wrote :)
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Si
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yeah i really like that, what a poem
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Adam
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that is really nice lisa
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nomey
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yeah, its brill :)
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