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| Is this the end?; Thoughs & most inner thoughts | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 13 2004, 07:57 PM (120 Views) | |
| Andy | Feb 13 2004, 07:57 PM Post #1 |
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This is just basically a lil' bit of my inner thoughts When I'm alone,i'm lonely,When I'm with friends,i'm lonely. Staring blankly,as they sit laughing. Do I dare ask where my next fall will be? Likely to set me free of these chains,When will the pain end? Walking through a graveyard,upon the graves,I see my name on each & every one. Do I belong here? Is this the last stop? As night falls,I feel tense,the shadows creep up on me,as I lie,thinking of what's to come.Being haunted by past memories of death,life & love,When will the pain end? Is there a way out? Who knows? When,I ask,When will my time be up?Sitting,staring blankly,into a deep trance,where thoughts,thoughts of no life beyond death... Wasting,just only 5 minutes every day,staring into a deep trance,could it be used for a more practical way? As I lie awake at night,my body trembles,as through an open curtain window,the clouds get darker & darker as the rain thunders down,cracking off the window pane,the deep,dark shadows hide something,that I,only I could possibly understand,Something so dark & mysterious,it could only be saved for death,When will the pain & haunting thoughts be gone? Will I be forever haunted of past memories of life,death & love? Who is to know? When will I ever know? Darkness hides the truth,mabye someday it will be uncovered,but,today,& forever more,I will be haunted... :evil: >:) >:) >:) >:) >:) >:) >:) |
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| Si | Feb 13 2004, 09:46 PM Post #2 |
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this is really good man i like it |
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| Andy | Feb 13 2004, 10:54 PM Post #3 |
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It took me a bit of time,but it paid off.I'm glad you like it,as i explained why that its all deep thoughts |
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| sluyky | Feb 15 2004, 12:36 PM Post #4 |
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it seems really deep , u done a good job at expressing :) |
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| nomey | Feb 15 2004, 01:23 PM Post #5 |
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good piece of writing andy :) |
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