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Is this the end?; Thoughs & most inner thoughts
Topic Started: Feb 13 2004, 07:57 PM (120 Views)
Andy
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This is just basically a lil' bit of my inner thoughts

When I'm alone,i'm lonely,When I'm with friends,i'm lonely.
Staring blankly,as they sit laughing.
Do I dare ask where my next fall will be? Likely to set me free of these chains,When will the pain end?


Walking through a graveyard,upon the graves,I see my name on each & every one. Do I belong here? Is this the last stop?

As night falls,I feel tense,the shadows creep up on me,as I lie,thinking of what's to come.Being haunted by past memories of death,life & love,When will the pain end?

Is there a way out? Who knows? When,I ask,When will my time be up?Sitting,staring blankly,into a deep trance,where thoughts,thoughts of no life beyond death...

Wasting,just only 5 minutes every day,staring into a deep trance,could it be used for a more practical way?

As I lie awake at night,my body trembles,as through an open curtain window,the clouds get darker & darker as the rain thunders down,cracking off the window pane,the deep,dark shadows hide something,that I,only I could possibly understand,Something so dark & mysterious,it could only be saved for death,When will the pain & haunting thoughts be gone? Will I be forever haunted of past memories of life,death & love?

Who is to know? When will I ever know?

Darkness hides the truth,mabye someday it will be uncovered,but,today,& forever more,I will be haunted
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>:) >:) >:) >:) >:) >:) >:)
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Si
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this is really good man i like it
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Andy
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It took me a bit of time,but it paid off.I'm glad you like it,as i explained why that its all deep thoughts
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sluyky
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it seems really deep , u done a good job at expressing :)
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nomey
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good piece of writing andy :)
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