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[P] Real emotion; just a little about how I feel
Topic Started: Feb 13 2004, 06:24 PM (145 Views)
Davie
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I decided to write down how I feel in a poem, everyone may take what they want from this

Sitting here time passes by
A laugh, a smile, a tear
I show people what they want to see

Listen to people’s problems
Giving them advice and helping them out
I love to do that but its not always as straight forward

Seems like everything changes by the day
People trust, they hate and they love
If I could enjoy such a simple life

I keep on hearing in my head “We all have sob stories”
Yeah we do
Each one different from the last

Sitting on my bed at night I make many decisions
So what will tomorrow be?
A smile? A laugh? A tear?

People say grow up, get over it
Yeah its easy for them to say that
How I feel I have felt for a long time and it ain't goin away

Sometimes you lose yourself in the dream

But in the end all dreams must end but when will I be allowed to end this one?
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Andy
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I've got to say that girls are totally wrong about the whole "guys not being able to express feelings"-All the guys on here,myself included manage to do it just fine,although there are times where I just haven't got a clue about what I'm feeling.Dave will acknowledge this.

Another thing,all the poems & songs i've read so far on this are really excellent,expressed well & show the real feelings behind most things.

Great job,dave >:) :)
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nomey
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Andy
Feb 13 2004, 07:42 PM
I've got to say that girls are totally wrong about the whole "guys not being able to express feelings

i do not believe that at all..and for any girls that do..they can come on here and see fine well thats a load of bs...cos theres alot of amazing talent in here..and it shows how well guys do expres there feelings

good piece of writing :)
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sluyky
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some guys are just afraid to do so , yeh sure over the net its easy as were not confronted with expressing our feelings visually
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