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| [P] Real emotion; just a little about how I feel | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 13 2004, 06:24 PM (145 Views) | |
| Davie | Feb 13 2004, 06:24 PM Post #1 |
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I decided to write down how I feel in a poem, everyone may take what they want from this Sitting here time passes by A laugh, a smile, a tear I show people what they want to see Listen to people’s problems Giving them advice and helping them out I love to do that but its not always as straight forward Seems like everything changes by the day People trust, they hate and they love If I could enjoy such a simple life I keep on hearing in my head “We all have sob stories” Yeah we do Each one different from the last Sitting on my bed at night I make many decisions So what will tomorrow be? A smile? A laugh? A tear? People say grow up, get over it Yeah its easy for them to say that How I feel I have felt for a long time and it ain't goin away Sometimes you lose yourself in the dream But in the end all dreams must end but when will I be allowed to end this one? |
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| Andy | Feb 13 2004, 07:42 PM Post #2 |
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I've got to say that girls are totally wrong about the whole "guys not being able to express feelings"-All the guys on here,myself included manage to do it just fine,although there are times where I just haven't got a clue about what I'm feeling.Dave will acknowledge this. Another thing,all the poems & songs i've read so far on this are really excellent,expressed well & show the real feelings behind most things. Great job,dave >:) :) |
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| nomey | Feb 15 2004, 08:56 PM Post #3 |
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i do not believe that at all..and for any girls that do..they can come on here and see fine well thats a load of bs...cos theres alot of amazing talent in here..and it shows how well guys do expres there feelings good piece of writing :) |
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| sluyky | Feb 15 2004, 09:08 PM Post #4 |
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some guys are just afraid to do so , yeh sure over the net its easy as were not confronted with expressing our feelings visually |
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