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| Si's songs; any songs or things that i make | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 12 2004, 12:39 PM (464 Views) | |
| Si | Mar 16 2004, 08:58 PM Post #31 |
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heres an offspring type song i made a while a go, i just struggled for some finishing words: Everything to play for (everything to die for) Si 12/o3 intro something in my head, tells me now, that i've gotta go, tension running round, through the ground, have you got it, no? everything to play for, everything to die for. v1 get up and look around, hear the sound, you know what that is, thats the rushing sound of your future, its your wife and kids, should have not been drunk in the bar when you met her, but you cant turn back the clock now, cant get any better you got your wife, got your kids, now you're life has hit the skids, your 21, cant have no fun, coz u got drunk now u have 2 sons, Chorus whoah, you're life's a tragedy, don't think, just act, you sit all day in misery, whoah, awake with the screams of your baby, thatll teach you, for having a drunken night with her v2 you grow older now, sit and wonder, begin to reflect, look down to the kids, theyre your life, they have your respect, she begins to shout, she walks out, found another guy, the kids are left with you, what to do, you begin to cry, you had your wife, got your kids, still you're life has hit the skids, your 24, she walked out the door, coz u got drunk now your head feels sore repeat chorus nuthin to left you anymore she's went and left you now, alone, left with the kids, you take care of them how, to much alchohol you had, and you sat there out of your face, and now your life is hell and you have fallen frome gods grace repeat chorus repeat intro |
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| aaron | Mar 16 2004, 09:10 PM Post #32 |
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makes u think dont it? |
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| sluyky | Mar 16 2004, 09:18 PM Post #33 |
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as alwasy si posts anotehr one of his great songs :) well done mate |
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| Si | Mar 18 2004, 08:12 AM Post #34 |
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ta buds, glad y'all like them thats nice, makes me feel special :lol: |
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| Si | Mar 22 2004, 04:15 PM Post #35 |
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yo b*tches and gentlemen, Si is back....i wrote this for a someone special in my life, i hope you all like it... J-Si si o1/o4 - o3/o4 soon i may be gone, it depends if i get strong v1 i never knew i'd be so lucky, to find a guy, who understood, how i feel, keeps it real, who'd never break that friendship seal, i never knew what a guy he'd be, to lift me up, try to help me see, i dont want death, i want my mind, he's there to help me all the time i know it (j-si) we're always strong i know it (j-si) friendship forever long chorus there was a time when i thought, everything looked black, but i always knew, that you, always had my back i dont know what to do, or what to say, it doesnt matter anyway, cause soon i may be gone, it depends if i get strong. v2 all these years we've known each other you've always been, the man who knew, my thoughts, my dreams, knew everything that's in between, if i still know you in years, to come, i'll hope we'll still be, so close, so free, and i can help you, like you help me, i know it (j-si0 we meet and greet, i know it (j-si) singing in the street repeat chorus i swear i mean it, i love you j, but in 1 year, if i dont get by, then i might go and find a way to escape you say you'ze love me, you say you'ze care, but i dont feel that, i just feel that you stare, you wouldnt notice if i were gone, but you must know, and really see, i feel alone, no-one cares about me repeat chorus |
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| Si | Mar 29 2004, 09:25 AM Post #36 |
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so i decided to move on to rap for a while, i feel with me just now that it will get me to share more opinions, to voice more fears, i think i'll be able to say more, so here goes then: hell and heaven by Si o3/o4 here we go....new beginning...whether we're up in heaven, or down in hell, v1 I'm running scared in the fires that burn me, turn me, return me, to my past, the thoughts i've lost, while i am tryin to learn, i see that i cannot breathe, too easy to be deceived, the shit received, amnesty in this soceity, no former chartbuster, charttopper, hip hip-hoppes showstopper, i know i don't need this shit, i know that i do not want her, i'm feeling fine, devine this time, shit runs out of my mind, tis not a crime, a job woth jamie down with living design, those golden gates i can see, growing further from me, with shit behaviour, carry-on now you know i cannot see, 2 lights are bright, wanna fight, f*cka get what i'm owed, oh shit, muthaf*cka, i'm standing scared on this road. chorus you never know where you'll end, cant pretend, the trend, will ever change the way you see, you'll never tell, you fell, or if you're doing well, when your fuckin stuck between heaven and hell. v2 the flowing locks in the box, locked up deep in-inside, no matter how bad i act, you don't know how much i've tried, to be me, to return, to be the man i once was, but now i'm hated. crucified, like jesus christ with his cross, i'll be remembered as the f*cka who ruined his own life, and tried to take it just coz he couldnt handle the strife, the rift of parents, they dont give 2 fucks whats going on, they just argue, keep going on-on and on, whats wrong are you scared, the psycho stares in your eyes, you look staring, not caring, you see the glint in my eyes, i sit in pain, lose the gain, no-one will hear my cries, its over, its got a hold of me with lies. repeat chorus so what u think, any good for a rap, or is it pretty sh*t.....just thot i'd try something different :lol: |
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| nomey | Mar 29 2004, 03:36 PM Post #37 |
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brill songwriter is all im saying |
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| Predslayer | Mar 29 2004, 10:15 PM Post #38 |
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indeed....:s...u shud start sendin some of this stuff to erm...whoever u'd send stuff like that too, it's really quite gd Si |
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| Si | Mar 31 2004, 08:49 PM Post #39 |
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hi-di-hoe y'all, me is back again Amnesia by Si o3/o4 vi i can't remember when it was this bad, i can't remember how i washed my life away, i can't remember all the times we had, i can't remember what i wanted, wanted dreams running out and i dont know when, i lost them all, or if i'll find them again, i'm falling, falling, falling through my past, for the answer... chorus i'm trapped inside this body, knowing nothing, feeling everything, don't know where i'm going, can't find my way home.....tonight. vii i wake up confused, in a jaded mood, i can't remember when i ever felt this bad, i wander, endless, leaves me senseless, but i know i'm wanting, wanting, dreams ran out and i dont know why, but i think of one and i begin to cry, i dont know if it'll be the same again, i want an answer... repeat chorus dazed and wasted, life is complicated, and i wish i could end all the strife, never going, but i'm always knowing, who i need to help me live this life, i'm crying, dying, lying inside, for a reason she could want me, i'm reading, needing, bleeding inside, for her touch, that missing touch... repeat chorus that touch arrives. so what dy'all think.......aaron bud, this is what i was doing on the way home from work tonite :lol: |
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| Si | Apr 1 2004, 09:14 PM Post #40 |
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this is mellow sly, i think you'll like it, please respond, i aint sure if its too good.... red rain Si o4/o4 v1 the pools of red, flowing down the haunted river, struggling, against the tide pulling me down, the words you said, printed in my mind forever, i wont let them go... rain is falling, blood is poison, cut me open, when i'm feeling blue, blood is oozing, my heart i'm losing, will you save me.... chorus save me from this pain, save me from myself, save me from the red rain pulling down my health, i wont take my last breath, until i know, that you care....but you'll never care. v2 the dying rain, beating on my broken window, looking, out at the stars above, you call again, tell me something i dont know, i start, to fall apart... rain is poison, blood is falling, feeliing blue, when you cut me open, heart im losing, blood is oozing, wont you save me... repeat chorus i'll never know, the shadows behind me, i'll never go, you'll never make me, i'll never be the same,the same i want to be, i'll never care, until you care about me... repeat chorus so what yall think then :lol: |
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| Si | Apr 6 2004, 11:15 PM Post #41 |
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right buds, though the name might sound stupid this is about that time when you get sssooo wasted you make a right @rse of yourself: get your kit off: Si o4/o4 v1 beauty shop, drunken hop, oh you think you're such a star, money down, you pound another brew at the bar, ten drink slur, such a blur, money going down the drain, too much drink, think you're going so insane. and you never know what troubles brought, when you get so drunk, mind begins to rot, and the time then comes, you go and steal the limelight.... chorus jump up on the table, time to get your kit off, get the party started, people dancing all around, and you soon know, that they all stand and stare, but you're crazy, so lazy, right now and lately, you don't even care.......cause you're a star. v2 up next day, hard to say, just exactly how you feel, head is sore, hangover is just unreal, start to rock, head in shock, cant remember what you did, time to stop, stupid thoughts you must get rid. and you never know what troubles brought, when you get so drunk, mind begins to rot, and the time then comes, you go and steal the limelight.... repeat chorus you're such a fool, its never cool, when you are such an embaressment, and you see her smile, but you acted foolish, and she'll never know what the hell it meant, you'll never tell her how you feel, and so the thought it cant be real, drown your sorrows with drink instead, and now you wish that you were dead... chorus a star is born, one event filled night, just because you got your kit off, they all know your name, life is never the same, all because you blew the lid off. thots and sh*te as usual y'all..... :lol: |
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| nomey | Apr 12 2004, 10:15 AM Post #42 |
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lol funny song, good tho :) well written |
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| Adam | Apr 12 2004, 07:38 PM Post #43 |
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ummmmm dont you have any ummmmmmm cheeiry songs ? |
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| aaron | Apr 12 2004, 08:05 PM Post #44 |
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LMFAO,that is the funniest song EVER. |
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| Si | Apr 12 2004, 09:48 PM Post #45 |
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si's back this is a little thing, im suffering froma song block just now, too much going on in my head: not so amorous: Si o4/o4 v1 concentrated traction, ran down this place, fateful attraction, seeing your face, struggling to grip, losing all hope, i begin to wonder, i begin to choke, boom-boom, DOWN - head is spinning all around, boom-boom, DOWN - head is split i hit the ground, chorus you dont know how i feel, you dont know how love feels, you think you've got it all figured out, you think you know us well, but how can you tell, when you don't know shit about love. v2 manipulated mind, surrounding this place, im dying im crying, tears run down this face, i know how i feel, the love is so real, this broken heart you dont know the deal. boom-boom, NOW - you dont know how i feel, boom-boom, Now - feel, real, steal, deal. repeat chorus falling further, with thought inside, and i know its to hard to confide, you feel it, what am i going through, its the hardest thing i'll ever do, boom-boom, WAIT - you just dont understand, boom-boom, WAIT - i reach i grab your hand, boom-boom, LOVE - i know it i feel it now boom-boom, YOU - dont know sh*t about repeat chorus should i go back, should i go back, should i... this song is a lot more serious (as you can see) so what do you think :lol: |
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