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Si's songs; any songs or things that i make
Topic Started: Feb 12 2004, 12:39 PM (465 Views)
Si
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this is my newest concotion, sluyk you said it should be heavy and well, you could tell by this that it is:

Fight by Si/04

Verse 1 (rap)
What a minute, f*cking waste of time,
you call, you fall, a petty crime,
you run away, travelling through time,
I'll catch you, fight, fight, fight
You b*tch, tough luck you're so dead,
i wont rest till my hands are crimson red,
with you're blood, evil in my head,
I'll kill you tonight, night, night,

Bridge
I suffer, go under, but now i'm fightning back through the pain,
a booster, injection, adrenaline, trying to regain
like murder, i wonder, if we were ever meant to be,
but now i know we're not,
so get to f*ck, don't terorise me.

Chorus
you just fight (you can't take it, dominate it)
you just fight (you can't take me, dominate me)
you just fight (you can't have me, go leave me)
you just fight.....and I can feel it all inside

Verse 2 (rap)
What a day, f*cking waste of life,
you're here, you fear, feeling so much strife,
teething seething, domineering,
fairing, wearing, heart is tearing,
you sl*t, give me one good reason,
not to slit you're f*cking throat,
i'm gonna kick the ass of everyone around,
and then i;m gonna laugh and gloat

Repeat Bridge
Repeat Chorus

I feel it rise inside (fight, fight, fight)
I know you want to hide (tonight, night, night)
need someone to confide (right, right, right)
be there for me tonight (whoooooah)

Repeat Chorus
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nomey
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u and ur talent! u and sluyky should def get together ;) hehe :P
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sluyky
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Right si , tomorrow im gona nrip apart your songs ,give gud and bad comments on them :) i'll do a analysis of your work :) sorry its taken so long , been busy
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Si
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haha right im back y'all:

torn between two hearts si o2/o4

verse1
he wants to go, wants to go, find his way to her,
she doesnt feel the same he does inside,
he goes to someone else, to find out how she feels,
the others jealous telling him pure lies

but he wont know, everything she tells him is just sh**,
and she wont know, how much it means to be with her one bit

chorus
torn between two hearts, and there's nowhere left
your right bang back at the start
torn between two hearts, it scars inside
but to them its all just art.

Verse2
he wants to say, wants to say, the way he feels
cause the pain inside is just unreal
he talks to her, she just slaps him away
for him to try again another day,

but she wont know, time is always gonna be on his side
but he wont know, her friend likes him, shes the one who lied

Repeat chorus (x2)
bridge
2 years gone past is he still trying,
that stupid friend is she still lying,
what does happen to them all,
will they rise, crumble or fall,
it turns out okay, he gets the girl,
his whole world flies by in a whirl,
the other half she feels alone,
she dials his number when she picks up the phone

you liar, you never wanted me to be happy,
you wanted me for yourself,
and now hang up and never call back,
coz honey its for the good of your health

repeat chorus

brought out by a little life experience with friends, though its not all true......hope you dont mind brown. :lol:
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nomey
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good song :)
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Si
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double dose for you now children, thats what happens when you get study leave:

End of the Line by Si o2/o4
Verse 1
I never thought i would see the time,
that i would stand un-fine,
and never know what was going on,
i'll never see the way you look at me,
the glance that sets me free,
knowing all the time that you were wrong.

Now, i see you running through my head, running through my mind,
now, i've lost my self control, lost my only goal, will you help me find,

Chorus
The end of the line,
it has to be found, leave's me dumbfound,
the time has come to discover the edge,
you cross the line, you fall.....from that ledge

V2
I didnt think i would find my soul,
and find my only roll,
in life was to be pissed off,
you sit and play your stupid games,
play me like your slave,
so get lost, f*ck off.

Now, i see you running through my head, running through my mind,
now, i've lost my self control, lost my only goal, will you help me find,

Repeat chorus

Bridge
Why then do you play me for the fool,
did you think that you were cool,
i think you've become a whole lot stranger,
your a burden, here comes my ANGER...

Chorus

again discuss if you please...
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Si
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Final thought by Si o2/o4

Verse
no control, let my emotions go,
self control will only help me grow,
my only will to live, is the friends that give,
the support that i love, it helps me live

The final thought is all i've got,
I fall to the ground, its my time to rot.(x2)

Chorus
My time has come, life is over,
time to end the time i have,
a story written, i was so smitten,
her final thought i had to have.

V2
My last hell, why cant you tell,
from heaven i thought you once fell,
and then my god, he let me go,
that thought i left, to hell i'll go,

The final thought is all i've got,
I fall to the ground, its my time to rot.(x2)

Repeat chorus

Bridge
you changed your image, changed your mind
to you i'll talk to one more time,
leave me at peace, i was never yours,
just like you know you were never mine,
my privacy you'll learn to respect,
or silence will be the desired effect,
i'll leave,.. your tears like a viaduct
but its best or else i'll self destruct

Repeat chorus
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You know, you wud get payed a looooot of money for some of these songs tbh, I especially like torn between two hearts ^_^
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nomey
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ur songs are brill :) keep writing
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Si
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i'm glad you all like them.

Sly im gonna need your help for this....im wanna make a small lp type thing a few songs recorded and see what i can get from it....we can make up music coz i know i want aquired styles, and i have stuff already. right now i have a planned track list of:

1. Splitting
2. torn between 2 hearts
3. end of the line
4.
5.

any suggestion from what i post or any further posts please say...itll take a while to do it anyway


also fiji a bonus track of "we hate fo" seems to be on the cards too
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nomey
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im sure he'll back online soon :)
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sluyky
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how about we let the good folks here decide? Dude you give me a rough tune and i will make it up with alot more ;) if you allow me ?:P
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yeah we can get some done and let people here it, tell us where we should go with them
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yo b*tches and gentlemen, i has returned:

my next offering is thanx to aaron, from when we talked on the way home frome work on monday...ta bud. its about past girls and the shit, and about new girls and the lack of confidence..

Crazy Lady: dedicated to aaron... SI o3/o4
v1
I'm falling apart,
after my girlfriend left me for another man,
I'm trying to start,
my life again but i don't think i can

get your head set, get your head set,
I'm trying to but how can i forget,
staring off into sunset,
i'm lost, has my head been blown off yet,

*Chorus*
what to do, i can't forget about you,
you drive me crazy, lady,
what to say, i can't forget your ways,
you got me poisoned baby,
and i'm going blind, i've lost my mind,
to get me passed someone i should find,
but what to do, i can't forget about you

v2
i'm trying to begin,
a new life away from terror, away from sin,
the plight from within,
my heart, the feelings for her are kept within

get your head set, get your head set,
I'm trying to but how can i forget,
staring off into sunset,
i'm lost, has my head been blown off yet,

repeat chorus

baby, you dont know what its like,
to have a mind like mine, messed up all the time,
can you save me baby,
or are you just my crazy lady

crazy, maybe, f*cked up, baby, shady, jadey, f*cked up lady

repeat chorus

so what do y'all think then :lol:



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aaron
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I think it rawks,relates to ma thoughts anyways.

Doubt the rest will get it really but still i luv it.


another good 1 by the Si master


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