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| Si's songs; any songs or things that i make | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 12 2004, 12:39 PM (461 Views) | |
| Si | Feb 12 2004, 12:39 PM Post #1 |
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these are all just for your enjoyment, though most of you will be able to figure out what they are about. I would really like you're input like: 1. whether you like/dislike a song 2. any improvements on the songs...lyrical etc 3. how the song makes you feel my newest chorus: hanging by a thread, one little slip, and all will be gone, i stumble i trip, the abyss is black, im falling off track the darkness is coming i'll never go back |
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| Si | Feb 12 2004, 12:41 PM Post #2 |
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Si's newest song....Keano knows what its about, sluyky you'll be able to guess from earlier, and the rest i'll explain later..(zebrahead stlye) The one for me: (Si/04) v1 Walking down, that dark street again, and the pain, of seeing people looking at me, They don't know what to do, what i've been through, they just stand and stare rap god what to do, how to get through, its been long since i loved somebody like you, its long like japan, sounds like a plan, helps me to be all that i can, thinking of you, in all that i do, i ask you out, you ask me too, but there's a waste of mind, she'd there all the time pissing me about and i don't know why!! chorus in the corner of my eye, i see you're smile and i know, that you're the one for me, across the crowded room you're face stands out a mile and i know,you're the one for me and I see you just beyond the corner my heart feels just a little warmer, i see, that you're the one for me v2 Running round, in my brain and the way, people treat me is not ideal they dont know how i feel, pain is so unreal, they just stand and stare. repeat rap repeat chorus bridge rap blacked out, i dont know what to do, i'm wasted passed out in my room, she pissed me off and its a killer, so i sit drinking my slush and miller, i'm gonna slap her face right off, coz she wont stop pissing me off, i'm sitting thinking of "her" instead thinking of that day soon we'll be wed repeat chorus |
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| Si | Feb 12 2004, 03:59 PM Post #3 |
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Splitting - by Si 03/04 The dark is splitting through the morning, its power waning through the trees It takes me down without warning I fall, fall upon my knees (you cant help me, I cant take it) *bridge* get me through this, get me outta here, afraid of the dark, i cannot see i feel myself falling, the black it surrounds me, it wont let me free, wont let me be me *chorus* And I, I'm all alone, wont you listen can i confide in you And I, I cant help it it wont escape from me my past it haunts me can you see verse 2 my sides are splitting from the pain the feelings i have getting stranger my thoughts they take me down the drain they take me further into danger *repeat bridge* *repeat chorus* thats it so far anyway *i aint finished, its about that general feeling you get when you think you're life is over* |
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| Si | Feb 12 2004, 04:13 PM Post #4 |
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though not done this is about a b*tch that i once thought i knew. i wrote it today at 3.50 so its going nowhere......yet. the ***** (angel that i once knew) *verse* you changed, send mixed signals all over the place, yet you wonder why theres all this highnosity, you dont act the same, tears run down you're face you think the way i act is such an attrosity *rap* get to f*ck, you've ran out of luck, if i swing for you you have to duck, cry in the common room, feeling the heavy boom, moaning at all, want me to start talkin soon you're acting like a little kid, you dont know what you did you just want us to be sorted leave me alone, in my own home, its my own life, not you'res, be gone *chorus* you sit and cry, thinking you feel the worst, do you know that i was gutted first i thought you'd understand but you seem to have changed you're not the girl that i once knew and so i cannot keep on talking to you. |
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| sluyky | Feb 12 2004, 05:21 PM Post #5 |
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dude u sure have talent when it comes to writing |
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| Si | Feb 12 2004, 05:38 PM Post #6 |
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hahah thanks dude i apreciate that, its niced to know thats what my songs are for though, for you guys to like |
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| Si | Feb 12 2004, 07:43 PM Post #7 |
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Saturday Night by si 03 Verse The way she looks out, she doesn't have any feeling She can't remember, and now her head it is reeling Head in her hands, she tries to understand Head in her hands, she tries to make a plan He's looking, crying, the sun sets in the horizon, *bridge* She cant describe, how she feels about him he cant describe how he feels about her such a blur Chorus Two people, with such a connection she looks in the mirror, stares at her reflection he lies on his bed, he wants to see her she wants him, wants him to be near her verse2 She cannot understand, his love it seems to be fading but it doesnt, coz he can never stop caring doesnt matter, if she becomes his wife doesnt matter, where they go in life coz he loves her, they feel the same inside repeat bridge repeat chorus *Rap* the clouded sky, she dont know why she feels this for him, makes her cry he looks down, stares at the ground his thoughts for her he feels dumbfound she writes a letter, writes a poem he sits at home and writes a song they send them out, envelopes white both them title "saturday night" repeat chorus *this is about 2 people un-able to show their affection for each other, and believing that one hates the other.eventually they realize through words, both titles the same* |
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| Si | Feb 13 2004, 02:20 PM Post #8 |
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This one was aimed at the person from the above song (***** - angel i once knew), but for the total opposite reasons. Death Awaits You V1 a lonely room crowded late at night, a troubled mind alone in the corner, waiting blood from you're eyes, they run down you're face, drips on the floor, i'm falling, hating ---------- and i know i've said this before but i run, hide, wait and lock the door, i love you, miss you, want to kiss you, but i feel inside that death awaits you Chorus 12 minutes, 12 rounds, running through my head i'm singing flashlight in my face, cant run the race, no space, you're falling from grace 12 minutes, 12 rounds, taking all the hate you're bringing see more spirit, see more fire, you the angel lights my desire V2 A 5-star hatred in my inside, it wont disapear, from the fear im running black inside, turn to stone i know, i cry and i wonder i feel it burning, ---------- and i know i've said this before but i run, hide, wait and lock the door, i love you, miss you, want to kiss you, but i feel inside that death awaits you Repeat Chorus *rap* i see you smile the light from my nightmare the thing i most despair is you if you dont care i see your face i feel your grace but without you i feel im dying in this place (repeat) repeat chorus |
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| Si | Feb 15 2004, 03:46 PM Post #9 |
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so doe nobody like have any opinions "you people are made of stone" :angry: |
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| nomey | Feb 15 2004, 03:49 PM Post #10 |
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your songs are brill si |
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| Si | Feb 15 2004, 03:54 PM Post #11 |
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yas acknowledgement, cept for sluyks small bit earlier, wooo |
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| Fiji_666 | Feb 15 2004, 04:37 PM Post #12 |
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hey Si! just wanted 2 let u no i luv ur songs. theyre so true! n e way c u 2moz |
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| sluyky | Feb 15 2004, 09:03 PM Post #13 |
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yup Si , there awesul mate , were so doing some of them |
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| Si | Feb 15 2004, 10:06 PM Post #14 |
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of course we are sluyk, hiya fij glad to see u joined, keep posting |
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| nomey | Feb 16 2004, 10:03 PM Post #15 |
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ur songs are amazing si and ur very talented, u and sluyky will def be in the top 10 :P |
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