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Deepest feelings; pls keep this to yourselves
Topic Started: Feb 11 2004, 06:28 PM (120 Views)
aaron
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Deepest feelings



(y'all know who this is about)



When daylight fades and darkness loomes
This person i can always know
Will break me from my internal tombe
These feelings hidden for none to see
Are forever haunting me

I cannot speak for the world will know
That this lack of love is bringing me down
She toys with me and breaks my heart
But still it aches for her

The power i need is long forbiden
Love spells for the lonely written
I want nothing more than this ones love
but that is not in the stars above

For if god has his way i'll be alone
While he sits mocking on his throne
I have done nothing and been through much
and he rewards me with emptiness

My friends they try and try in vain
to make me happy once again
But until my desire is finally fulfilled
My spirit shall be forever killed.
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Adam
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*pats aaron on the shoulder* that is touching man so touching
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Si
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yeah man thats some good shit, mine is shorter, and you'll all know what mine is about

Deepest Feelings
As they stare down at me,
and want me to be all i can be
i still feel bad and sit and cry
and wonder why they did not say goodbye
the power inside of me rushes and burns
and asleep at night i toss and i turn
for it wont escape me and i need to know
why did you have to leave me and go
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aaron
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powerfull dude.
















:mosh:
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sluyky
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Really deep guys , im liking it
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