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[P] Desire
Topic Started: Feb 11 2004, 12:28 PM (66 Views)
Davie
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Desire

I know you want the best for me and thanks for that
You understand my hopes and dreams
Yours and mine are totally different
But that’s good all the same

You know your generation has affected mine quite a bit
Your frustrations are what affect me most
I’m being held hostage by your dreams
I can accept that but our ambitions are different

You should maybe listen to me sometimes
I do care about your views
But they are not mine
Oh how many times I have wanted to tell you that

The amount of paper wasted by me writing imperfect sense
I wish I could tell you
I’m a prisoner to what you have did
I am judged on what you have done

We find it hard to agree
We are always defending our generations
But we need to admit that we don’t see eye to eye
But this will end up opening a quarrel about the present and past

We can easily come to blows which solves nothing
I admit you are a superior fighter to me
But hitting you is like hitting me
Except you can’t understand that

The difference between us is obvious
I have desire and you don’t
You had desire but lost it
Please don’t kill mine
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sluyky
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nicely done mate , ive read it before - this alwasy makes me think real hard :)
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Si
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dave i like it its really good man i like it
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Adam
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ohhh i have one about desire too


When your near my heart beats faster
When you speak my soul leaps in joy
but at the end of the day i am sad
for i know i can not have
a person as lovely and kind as you


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