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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 11 2004, 12:28 PM (66 Views) | |
| Davie | Feb 11 2004, 12:28 PM Post #1 |
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Desire I know you want the best for me and thanks for that You understand my hopes and dreams Yours and mine are totally different But that’s good all the same You know your generation has affected mine quite a bit Your frustrations are what affect me most I’m being held hostage by your dreams I can accept that but our ambitions are different You should maybe listen to me sometimes I do care about your views But they are not mine Oh how many times I have wanted to tell you that The amount of paper wasted by me writing imperfect sense I wish I could tell you I’m a prisoner to what you have did I am judged on what you have done We find it hard to agree We are always defending our generations But we need to admit that we don’t see eye to eye But this will end up opening a quarrel about the present and past We can easily come to blows which solves nothing I admit you are a superior fighter to me But hitting you is like hitting me Except you can’t understand that The difference between us is obvious I have desire and you don’t You had desire but lost it Please don’t kill mine |
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| sluyky | Feb 11 2004, 04:45 PM Post #2 |
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nicely done mate , ive read it before - this alwasy makes me think real hard :) |
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| Si | Feb 12 2004, 12:43 PM Post #3 |
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dave i like it its really good man i like it |
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| Adam | Feb 12 2004, 07:26 PM Post #4 |
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ohhh i have one about desire too When your near my heart beats faster When you speak my soul leaps in joy but at the end of the day i am sad for i know i can not have a person as lovely and kind as you |
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