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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 10 2004, 03:02 PM (151 Views) | |
| Adam | Feb 10 2004, 03:02 PM Post #1 |
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TO understnad this poem you should know what i mean. My freinds and my family were going throuhg a rough time (( not between us with there familys)) and my family is still going throuhg a rough time so i wrote this poem for them all From my deepest soul If i had one wish I would ask almighty god to give me your burdon with all my heart i want your pain so you can live in peace and contentman |
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| nomey | Feb 10 2004, 08:50 PM Post #2 |
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awww thats sweet ^_^ |
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| aaron | Feb 10 2004, 08:54 PM Post #3 |
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aww i dint know we were alowwed to put poems in here,alright with you if i put some in adam? :mosh: |
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| Si | Feb 10 2004, 08:55 PM Post #4 |
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damn adam thats some good shit, i'd love if someone took my burden but god thats good. "Hello tomorow, and goodbye to yesterday, we've been waiting for this moment,and still don't know what to say, we may never find the answers, or know the reason why, why we both decided we should say goodbye" taken from "hello tomorow" by zebrahead some of you will know what i mean by this one |
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| Adam | Feb 10 2004, 08:55 PM Post #5 |
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sure mate Also on a personal note i am saddened to say the person that inspired me to write this song will soon pass away and probably wont last till next weekend so ill be away monday and tuesday |
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| nomey | Feb 10 2004, 09:00 PM Post #6 |
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sorry to hear :( |
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| Adam | Feb 10 2004, 09:35 PM Post #7 |
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this was when life was going down hill i wrote this I lay my bed and wonder why god why i pray to god every night but yet he doesnt answer god why me lord why me All my life i have carried this burdon why lord why me i pray to you god that you will answer my prayers |
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| sluyky | Feb 10 2004, 09:43 PM Post #8 |
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good stuff here , sorry botu that person mate :( |
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