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My deepest wish
Topic Started: Feb 10 2004, 03:02 PM (151 Views)
Adam
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TO understnad this poem you should know what i mean. My freinds and my family were going throuhg a rough time (( not between us with there familys)) and my family is still going throuhg a rough time so i wrote this poem for them all



From my deepest soul

If i had one wish

I would ask almighty god

to give me your burdon

with all my heart

i want your pain so you can live

in peace and contentman
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nomey
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awww thats sweet ^_^


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aaron
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aww i dint know we were alowwed to put poems in here,alright with you if i put some in adam?



:mosh:
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Si
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damn adam thats some good shit, i'd love if someone took my burden but god thats good.

"Hello tomorow, and goodbye to yesterday,
we've been waiting for this moment,and still don't know what to say,
we may never find the answers, or know the reason why,
why we both decided we should say goodbye"

taken from "hello tomorow" by zebrahead

some of you will know what i mean by this one

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Adam
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sure mate

Also on a personal note i am saddened to say the person that inspired me to write this song will soon pass away and probably wont last till next weekend so ill be away monday and tuesday
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nomey
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sorry to hear :(
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Adam
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this was when life was going down hill i wrote this

I lay my bed and wonder
why god why
i pray to god every night
but yet he doesnt answer
god why me lord why me
All my life i have carried this burdon
why lord why me
i pray to you god that you will answer my prayers
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sluyky
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good stuff here , sorry botu that person mate :(
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