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a Vampires vengance
Topic Started: Feb 10 2004, 02:53 PM (130 Views)
Adam
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A vampire's Vengance by Adam Gearad McCourt

Chapter 1

it was a stone pasage lined with now dead bodies a woman can be seen uphead she holds a sharp stake in her hands and on the other a pale faced man. You can see the terror in the man's eyes but he doesn't beg. without a second look at the the man she thrust's the stake deep into the center of his chest with some force . She thought to herself "13 there should'nt be many more till the count of this clan". She looked around the corrider thinking typical vampires. the clan sign was placed on the wall all the way down the corrider but it was now smeared with vampire blood. She proceeded with pride down the bloody corrdier the dim laterns on the wall lighting her path until suddenly the dim light shined on the end of the corrider. the woman hit her hand againest the wall causeing several stones to fall down. she looked up and around reveiling her cold pale face and thought " come on now caktanny there must be a way ". her cold eyes shifted from brick to brick till she noticed something strange at the bottem stone it was in slightly.

caktanny kicked the stone and jumped back just as the end of the corrider turned the noise echoed throughout the stone passages. behind the stone wall stood a man with a crossbow before she could react though he shoot it. the bolt when flying through the air and pirced her dircetly in the heart moveing in a inch. she winched in pain for a second then through her head back and laughed. Caktanny began to speak in a noble voice.

" foolish underling i have slayed more counts that you have had to feed you really think there blood would not have given me support againest feeble aarows".

caktanny put her hand to the bolt twisted it back and pulls it out easily she then snaps it as if it were a twig. she let the bolt fall to the ground. but before it could land she ran striaght forward his eyes filled with terror like the ones before. caktanny grabed him in the chest sticking her fingers deep. the man simply fell back still alive but barely. she squessed her fingers together causeing him to yell out in pain.

Caktanny = " with everyone of you i kill it brings me great satsifaction"

the man manages to look up at her mumbleing words.

" but you are one of...................."

the man spits blood out and falls heavly onto caktanny who simply lets him fall to the ground and kicks him.

" 14 now "

she grins evily and contuines forward. very soon she reachs a door and reads the sign.

Count kelaztr patron of the sertale clan.

She grins evily and throws off her cloak and letting all her weapions fall into a bandle at her feet. It is clearly seen there is several stakes a cross bow with strange looking bolts several shere bottles, throwing knifes , a long sword and a travelrs bag. She stands there in her red underclothing with a dagger hanging from a belt attached to her pants. caktanny undoes the pony tail letting her black hair fall to her shouldrs. she slowly draws the dagger stareing at it carefully , it is curved slightly about 9 inchs. the blade is covered with small nicks in it and the rest is covered in rune's she thinks. " if i snap this blade it relises sunlight so bright even i would not survice this is what i shall use to kill the count of this clan i have used it ever since they killed my family in a petty blood fued" caktanny shudders at the memory. She cleared her mind thinking " this will have been the 17th count " caktanny hit her leg againt the dorr snapping it in half and throwing it of its hinges. she moved in slowly calmly and saw the count of this clan. He was nothing specail his skin paler than most his hands bore large claws he stood up speaking in a harsh and angry voice.

Count : " WHO DARES KILL MY CLAN AND VIOLATES MY CHAMBER SPEAK NOW FOOLISH ONE "

Caktanny: " I AM CAKTANNY LAST SURVICEING MEMBER OF THE FAMILY YASTORN. I AM HERE TO TAKE YOUR LIFE"

they glared at each other each filled with hatred. they circled each other calmly the count made the first move trying to stab his long claws into her. caktanny ducked and grabbed his arm and attempting to thrust the dagger into his chest. the curved dagger went in a few inchs then before caktanny could thrust in and deeper the count began to float up. caktanny quickly let go and stared up thinking. " he is one for surpised ". he floated fast towards her. caktanny ducked but not fast enough and his claw cut her face. she growled lowly and stuck her tounge out and licked some of the blood out of the cut on her face. the count quickly turned around and moved round for another strike. this time she jumped up and smashed her hand through the ceiling getting a firm grip , the count again turned around for a attempt at her life but as he went by she grabbed his neck with her legs and twisted. a loud snap is heard and the count twists in the air and his body slides across the stone surface eventually hitting into the wall. but yet the count still spoke he uttered a grim threat

" YOU BITCH THAT HURT YOU WILL PAY FOR THAT WITH YOUR LIFE "

he raised his body up his back againest the wall. caktanny jumped down and ran towards him the cut on her face letting blood flow behind her as she ran. She raises her foot just before she reached him and it smacked the dagger still hanging from his chest deeper. the count let out a hugh yelp of pain then slummed downed to the floor. caktanny moved towards him checking if he was dead. when she was satisfied that he was she pulled the dagger from his chest letting out a hugh cracking noise. caktanny then grabs his lifeless corpse and thrusts it up againest the wall and quickly opens her mouth relvieling vampire fangs huge ones able to snap bone. her jaw clamps down heavly on his neck and large snapping noises are heard. she eventually lets go and lets out a hugh yell.

" RARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR"

the sound of screams come from down the passage as long with the distant sound of feet hitting againest the stone floor the sound becomes more and more distant. after a few mins something strange happens to caktanny her finger nails grow longer and her skin slightly paler. she sits there stareing at them focusing on them then they slowly retract into her skin.she head back to the corridor and places on her cloths again and draws a black book out of her bag and a feather and ink.She writes fast

" day 453 of my campagin for venagnce : today i killed the 17th clan.it was nothing big so none of my powers were needed the count did have a intresting abltie he had claws and could float i drank his blood it was sweet and from it i gained his claws they will be a vauleable accest for my next battle it is to bad his blood could not give me the ablite to float nor could the others this angers me greatly. the past still haunts my rest and my nightmares grow more intensece but still i will contuine i must seek vengance for what the vampires did to my family........even though i am one of them they still do not desver to live. my next battle will require me to join the clan i know where to be recuirted but i must travel during the day to get there quickly i must wrap well or i may be burned badly like last time."

she moves the book to the back and a list is there she adds something to the list.

Blood power list :

blood rage

stone ribs

nightvision

fast reflexs

increased strength

increased speed

garilice restinace

claws.

caktanny moves quickly out of the passage and through masses of tunnels untl she reachs the exit. The sun is riseing in lighting all things in its way cutting the darkness like a saber through skin. She sees the dead bodys of vampires in the middle and laughs. " holy water traps well worth the clerics fee". she runs out through the entrance into the forset striideing through the woods quickly.




Chapter 2



it was dark now caktanny looked around she was resting on a bed the room was dark the walls stone and cold. the sound of people speaking comeing from the next room. She crawled slowly out of her bed opening the door a bit...........

there she seen them her family. Her father tall with short cut hair he wore the unifrom of a cavern digger his lean body sitting down heavily on a wooden chair. Her mother's slean figure and long black hair at a burning fire with a pot over it the smell of animal blood and organs cooking into a fine stew. and her older bother sitting on a high stool looking around with big eyes takeing in everything from the room. caktanny seen the other objects the knife from her father's day's as direct familar to the count of the clan. the old tattered family crest hanging over the fire it had seen many members of the family pass through there ages till they eventually took there life's when the time came for them to pass onto the next life. caktanny watched with awe for many mintuies. Then she heard crys from behind the door in the liveing room. loud noises steel clashing on steel the sound of bones breaking and the screams of people as they were taken before there time. The next thing her father was shouting for to her mother to get away but she wouldent leave him. a loud crack sounded as a foot smashed the door in half and three tall men walked through. They dressed in long robes lined with red clearly they were assians from another clan the deaths of many souls in there eyes they knew what to do. She watched as they grabbed her father and pinned him to a wall and forced a stake through his heart.

caktanny's mother cried deeply hugging caktanny's brother tight her voice pleading to them with a shivering voice " please not my son please " tears flowed down her eyes. caktanny could not take anymore she turned around and ran to ther other side of them room of the room her mother and brothers screams filling her ears. She moved a large stone floor tile reveiling a small compartment with toys and other child hood things she threw them out quickly scrambleing fast then she crueled up into a ball and placed the large tile over her. she contuined to hear the screams of her mother till long after, her eyes filling with tears as she sobed to herself crueled into a ball. it may have been mintuies or hours or days she could not tell but it felt like months. caktanny slowly lifted the stone of her compartment and crawled slowly out still crying. she moved into the liveing room slowly opening the door.................................................

caktanny moved slowly over to the body of her mother holding her cold dead hand speaking softly " mama please wake up mama please " she crys deeply and crawls over to her father crying move and holding his hand. " papa please be alright please your so strong you have to be alive".she looked around the walls were covered in blood the family crest in tatters on the floor her fathers dagger stabbed through her brothers chest. she slowly moved over and picked up the remains of the family crest and pulling the dagger out of her brother . she held them tight too her and moved back and wrapped her arms around her mother crying so very deeply.


it was at this moment caktanny woke up in a dark cavren and began to cry heavly....................


Chapter 3


it was night now the sun had set. She must have had that dream all night before she awoke. Caktanny stood up slowly clearing her tears there was much to be down and the last thing she needed was a crying session there would be plenty of time for morning after all the vampires were dead. the fire in the cave had gone out and it was dark she could still see well enough though as she gathered her things , this time she could not take them with her. It would be soon she must meet in the basemnt of the local inn if she was too successfully be ingreated into the this new clan which she knew little off. Caktanny dug a small hole placeing everything except the cloths on her back and the nice near her pants then she walked out of the cave and slowly into the town.

The town was dark now most of the houses had no lights and the few houses that did had only dim light comeing from it. The sounds of the night were loud in her ears the sounds of wolfs otuside the gates, the crys of pleasure from local whores and of course the cutting of skin with steel. Caktanny contuined to look around and noticed on the top of a hill which overshadowed the town a temple of some sorts strange caktanny thought haveing a temple out by these parts. She put it to the back of her mind and eventually reached the inn. It was nothing like the rest of the town the crys of patrons drinking and the sounds of music boomed from the place as did the bright lights. It was amazeing that this inn was being used for vampires to recuirt. Vampires hated mortal's haveing fun. She opened the door quietly and closeing it quickly behind her. The stench rushed her nose and it smelt like something had died. As she gazed she noticed two vampies already standing in the shadows it was easy to tell there expersions were blank and there eyes filled with disgust it looked as though at any mintuie one might snap and kill everyone in the inn. The crowd itself was danceing happily and drinking with joy clearly they knew not what was going on benth them. Caktanny moved quickly through the crowd slideing between danceing couplese , stepping over drunks who had had a little too much till she reached a door at the back of the inn. She simply opened it with it reveiling a dimly lit curling stair case of stone leading down.

She stepped slowly down them makeing sure to step loudly the last thing she needed was for them to not hear her comeing. Surpiseing a vampie was never a smart thing to do. She walked down the dimly lit stairs till she reached a steel door with no handle. Her hand slowly raised and hit the cold steel causeing a sound to echo through the stone passage. A small opening appeared with a set of eyes who looked caktanny up and down then they disappaered and the door slide open. She walked in proudly gazeing at those around her. There were about 20 other vampires here most looking tired some with there hands burnt clearly these were the remains of the last clan she had killed and they were seeking a new master. She sat down near the door thinking never know when you might need to make a quick run and waited. It seemed like hours before eventually all of a sudden the ground rumbled and zombies began to raise from the floor breaking through the stone floor , Caktanny jumped to her feet and looked around. The other vampies were just as shocked and a few who had nodded off were already zombie food. The zombies began to advance on the others and on her within a few seconds one was in strikeing distance she simply stood waiting till it tried to leap forward for a attack and then kicked its head causeing it to seprate quickly from its shoulders and roll along the floor. The next two were a not as easy they leaped forward and one managed to bite into arm she quickly shook it off and then ducked as the other one tried for her other arm. As she crouched Caktanny spun her leg knocking them both on there backs , quickly standing she jumped swiftly on there skulls watching with satfication as the green blood ohzed out of there skulls. Caktanny took a quick glance at the other vampires , 13 were laying dead the zombies feasting on them and the others had now drawn steel and bow and were fighting for all they were worth. Only one more came towards Caktanny it limped with a sword in its hand. She watched as it limped forward then brought the sword high over his head and swung it at her. But before the sword could hit her she jumped up and landed on the zombies arm. The bone gave a loud crack and its whole body landed on the ground. she quickly kicked its head swiftly off its shoulders then stood there catching her breath.

After only a few seconds a loud crack was heard in the small room and standing in the center was a tall man drapped in black. One of his arms was decaying flesh clearly he was a the one who summoned the undead. He spoke loudl.

" BE GONE MY ZOMBIE MINIONS"

and just as he said that the zombies crumbeled to dust and it could be seen how many had suriviced............only 4 including caktanny the man spoke again.

" You have all passed the first test but only one can enter this clan. The next test will involve killing the leader of the order above this town and to bring me his head the first one who has it wins and anything goes. The test begins at the sun setting tommorw evening you may do as you wish till then"

he grinned deeply and a loud crack was heard and he was gone again...........................................

Caktanny thinks to herself " good killing humans a easy task for a change" she grins at the others in the room who are too busy bandageing there wounds to see her grin

" yes this will be fun " she thinks again

Chapter 4




The day past quickly and soon the sun was setting for what seemed like forever. The second it was finally out of sight the vampires spread from the inn like rats from a sinking ship. Caktanny had reserched her test well there were only two ways up to the monstary one through the sewars and one through a wineding path up the moutains. But both these were too heavely guarded even for caktanny so she thought of a new way up. She ran quickly out of the inn and ran straight for the moutain where the temple sat on. she kept running and just as she was about to hit it jumped high cutting through the air but even she could not jump this high and just as she began to fall back to the ground her nails extended and she shoved them deep into the moutain getting a firm hold of the rock. This was too easy she thought to herself and she began clawing up the moutain. When she reached the top it was simply another stone wall protecting the monstary. She looked around. four dim lighted towers were stationed around the monstarty wall and already she could see some of the other recuirts running up the wineding path and surely to there deaths. but now was not the time to think of that. she ran towards the wall and quickly jumped up onto the wall. caktanny was lucky there were no guards around. She ran along the wall her nails slideing into her fingers. She soon reached the guard tower and looked in there was only one guard sleeping heavly. She walked through the window and slowly unslide the hatch that was in the middle of the tower reveiling a wooden ladder.

She descended slowly down makeing sure to be quiet. Caktanny reached the bottem slowly looking around. There were tourchs brightly lighting the corriodor. caktanny moved down slowly noteing the way she was going as her feet hit softly off the stone floor. Suddendly she heard two voices comeing towards her and the sound of armor clanking. She looked around there was no where she could go to avoid them so she slide next to the corner where there voices were comeing from and waited her breathing steady and calm. As the first guard came round he was wrapped in heavy armor his sword was not raised. As he came into range caktanny quickly hit his face causeing it to twist and his neck to break with a loud crack which echoed through the corridors. Caktanny quickly slide around the corridor and seen the second guard covered with armor like his freind but unlike his freind his sword was ready. but still he was not match for a Vampire like caktanny. He tried to slash her but she was too quick and ducked hitting his knee with her fist causeing it to break. The guard collapsed he could not support himself with only one leg espically with such heavy armor on. caktanny raised up and looked at the guard she quickly kicked his helmet off his eyes were filled with tears. He spoke suttering

" pppppplllleease i don't want to die i will walk away ill leave just please don't kill me"

she sighed to herself then spoke coldly

" sorry hun can't do that deal besides im hungry "

caktanny knelt down twisting his head to the side reveiling his neck. She licked her lips and her fangs became larger and slowly she moved her lips to his neck and bit him. the man screamed loudly but soon he stopped. The blood came rushing into her mouth and flooding down her throat. after a few mintuies of drinking his blood she stood up licking her lips of all the blood that had been smeared on her lips. Caktanny relised too late she had gotten carried away half the montasry would have heard that scream of his. She jumped over the body and ran down the long cold passage turning round corners and through passages till she reached a large hall. it was empty but she could hear the clattering of armor comeing from all around there were many entrances to the hall and there was a second floor walk way undoubtably this was where they prayed. Within a few mintues archers had taken staions around the walk ways and guards hard surronded her. There was at least 10 archers on the walk ways and about 20 guards. They stared hard at her for what seemed like forever but forever didnt last long enough for caktanny and soon one and made a stabbing attempt at him. caktanny side stepped and grabed the mans arm twisting it around and breaking it. But as she did this another guard slashsed at her back causeing her to fall and to her knees. They circled her as she lay there face looking down to the ground.

" Vampire scum time to die "

one of the archers shouted and shoot a aarow whcih landed near caktanny and exploded and smeared one of her arms in holy water. It burnt her arm and she quickly moved away from it.

" Time to die ladie you will pay for the deaths of our freinds"

just then Caktanny's heart began to race. She breathed heavy her eyes became red like blood , her fangs long , her breasts and mucles tightend. Caktanny knew they were already dead. she smelt blood lots of it. the guards didnt know what to do until one of them swung his sword over his shoulders and down to her. But just as it was about to hit her hand raised punching through his armor and comeing out the otherside with his heart in her hand. The other gurads looked at each other then charged towards her. Caktanny swung her arm around causeing the body that was on her arm to fly off and hit one of the walkways with so much force that the body crushed the stone walk way. The blood splattered across the walls and the crumbeling walk way caused three archers to fall and kill not only themselfs but five guard below. As the other guards came closer one tried a stabbing attack but he had not much luck like his freind. Caktanny grabbed his sword arm twisted it causeing the bone to break then shoved his sword through himself. The next one approcuhed more slowly but caktanny was done with playing defense. She moved towards him quckly stood on her hands and grabbded his head between her tight thighs then twisted. The man slummed down to the floor when caktanny let him go. The rest of the guards looked around at the carnage and then began to ran but caktanny didn't want to let them off that easy. She ran towards two of them and jumped up hitting two of them down quickly dodgeing a aarow as she did so and then quickly turned around to face the remaining archers. She ran and jumped up to them kicking one of them againest a wall and stopping his heart. Then she ducked quickly causeing two archers to shoot each other. The rest managed to get away as she then slowly went from body to body drinking the blood causeing there bodys to turn pale.After she had drunk all the blood from there bodys her musles went down and her eyes returned to normal . she then left the hall a bloody mess of bodies and after wandering the halls for a long time she came to a door reading

Master Tersiros

she grinnded heavly as she turned the knob of the door...


Chapter 5





She pushed forward on the door cuaseing the door to slide open. There she saw him master tersiros Adorned in bright gold armor holding a warhammer so big he needed to weild it was both hands.Caktanny stared at him as he stared back at her.The slowly circled each other both ready to strike if the other moved. Then Master tersiros spoke half laughing. " I woman whelp killed all most of my men *laughs* this has to be a joke but anyway your here so might as well get this over with." HE raised the warhammer behind his back and then sent it chargeing down to where canktanny had just been but she managed to dodge it and grab at his arm. But as her hand tighten it began to smoulder she quickly let go and seen that her hand was burnt she growled lowly While the the master looked at her and laughed." Foolish woman did you not think i would be prepared for you grabbing onto me." Tersiros swung the hammer around smashing into caktanny's arm before she could move away. There was a loud crack as the arm broke and went limp at her side. Caktanny moved just as tersiros tried for another blow and barely missed it. She crouched low a safe distance away from him clutching her arm and looking around the room for anything that could aid her. But master tersiros had other plans he held his hand out in her direction and just as caktanny rolled out of the way a blinding light came forth burning the area she has been in. Caktanny stared at him dumbfoudned lost for words while he spoke cruelly to her " Did you really expect the leader of a order not to be a cleric. You are a foolish one even for a vampire." Caktanny new he was partly right how the hell could she have been so stupid as to not be prepaged but now was not the time for regrets. Her hand slipped under to the near the dagger at her waist and she drew it. Master tersiros laughed " What do you expect to do with that little knife cut bread for me". Caktanny spoke harshly back "I have had enough of your sly tounge". She run towrads him with her left arm swinging limp at her side while She began to hit againest his armor with the knife in the right hand. The knife bounced off the armor tiem and time again but it was forceing him back and Caktanny was too close so he could not raise his weapion to counter attack. Soon he was smacked up againest the wall her knife still strikeing at his armor now starting to cuase visable dents in it. " I HAVE HAD ENOUGH OF THIS " Master tersiros shouted at her and he spoke a chant. Caktanny quickly cartwheeled backwards just in time to avoid a surge of divine energy from The master.She began to think and quickly relised her one way to beat him. She noticed that steam was comeing from his armor meaning he must be warm but moreoverly that it was eveporting the holy water from his armor. Tersiros came at her running smashing the warhammer into a table as Caktanny quickly side stepped. Tersiros hammer was stuck in the wreckage of the table he had destroyed. As he struggled to get it free caktanny hit his helmet with her knife causeing him to fall off balance. He rolled and tried to get up but caktanny quickly stepped on him. " well well well I had anouther plan but this one will do" caktanny said to him grinning.She sheathed the dagger and then reached out with one hand grabbing the hammer and pulling it free. tersiros began chanting again no doubt praying for some divine intervention but caktanny with the hammer in one hand smacked it accross is face causeing his jaw to break and his helmet to dent into his skull. But he still was not dead so caktanny straighten her broken arm and with loud crack's it became stiff again. She held the hammer in two hands bringing it back over her head. She grinned down and spoke " You Really think you could beat me" Caktanny laughs manically as she sent the hammer crashing through his armor breaking his ribs and crushing his heart. The cry of pain tersiros let out was most satifesing to caktanny's ears. Caktanny through the hammer to one side then drew her blade and removed her helmet then cut his head slowly off the blood spurting out of his neck causeing caktanny's eyes to get a glint in them but she knew better it was probably full of holy water.

Caktanny left the room carrying the head in one hand. She walked slowly down the the moutain path looking at the dead vampires who had been shoot dead by aarows from affar. She soon was walking through the tavern where she deicded to hide the head under her robe. As she entered the basement there was nothing there and then a loud crack and the man from before returned he looked around and saw her and he grinned " i see you had some fun before you cut his head off " he said pointing to the dents in the man's head. Caktanny shrugged " He was trying to cast a spell now lets got on with this sunrise is comeing and i do NOT wish to spend time with these cattle". The man nodded and walked close to her and wrapped his hand around her arm. A loud crack filled caktanny's ears then a flash of light. Then they were there in a round room dimply lit with candles. the man gesutred for her to follow him. She was light headed and walked a bit wobbley bit didnt fall over. The man opened a hard steel door reveiling a long passage. He walked slowly passing by several people who all looked over caktanny and grinned even the women. He soon stopped and opened a room to the right and montioned her to go in. The room not large but not small was well lit with a desk in the cornor a double bed in the middle of the room. There was a chest of drawers againest the right wall with a mirror and a small weapions rack next to that and a small bath in another cornor. The man spoke to her coldly "my name is Karzark this is your room. I will be in charge of you for the next few days" a grin came across his face and he spoke more warmly. " I will be seeing you soon be prepared " he began to walk out the door and quickly groped her behind as he left closeing the door behind him. Caktanny mummbeld to herself " he will pay for that ".

Caktanny removed her all her cloths and pulled out a stone over the bath. Hot water came from where the stone had been. After a few mintuies the bath was ready and she slide slowly into it. Bathing was a luxury Caktanny didn't often get the chane to enjoy she she planned to enjoy it while she could. a hour passed by and then she decided it was best that she stop bathing. Caktanny stood up letting the water drip off her body feeling every drip from her hear run down her back and down her thighs. Caktanny grabbed a near by towel and cleaned herself off makeing sure she was dry. she then got back into her under cloths and then layed down on the bed wrapping a blanket around her. She needed rest and for what she would have to do next, and so Caktanny slowly dirfted off into a light sleep..


Chapter 6

Hour's passed and eventaully karzark slowly opened the door and moved slowly in his feet stepping lighty barely makeing noise. He crept over to Caktanny who was now in a deep sleep. Karzark perched slowly over he admireing her body and looking lustfully at her. He licked his lips and slowly licked her face slightly. " you will be mine after the master has seen you ". Karzark moved back and snaped his hands together causeing caktanny to jump up right on her bed. She stared at him and spoke harashly " You could have knocked " She Slide out of bed and grabbed her cloak throwing it around herself quickly. He laughed aloud " I tried but you must be a heavy sleeper" He grinned watching every movment of her. " The master wants to speak with you it is a rare honour for newly intaited people to be given this honour so soon Follow me" He moved over to the door and opened it motioning her to follow she followed keeping a swift pace. As they passed through the tunnels she heard the sound of hammer hitting steel and as they passed the rooms she seen many things. People Sewing heavy black cloaks together , Sticks being cavered into arrows and many weapions being forged. Caktanny spoke quietly but clearly to karzark asking him " Why are you makeing so many weapions and cloaks ?". He laughed lightly " Why for the war to come of course the cloaks are so we can fight in day and of course the weapions are for us to use". She nodded slowly.


This place was a maze caktanny thought to herself so many twists and turns. Eventually they stopped at a wall and karzark moved his hands around the wall pushing certain bricks in until the wall began to slide apart by itself. As it sldie apart it made a lot of noise and soon it reveiled a door. The man moved and and slowly slide the door open. Caktanny walked in after him slowly. She looked around the room and seen a small huddled figure in a chair.The room was lit with candles makeing the room well lit.Caktanny slowly began to slide the dagger out and held it underneath the cloak. Karzark spoke loudly " THIS IS MISTRESS REMA..............." Caktanny had learned what she needed to know and stabbed karzark quickly through the chest when she had learned it. " I didn't like him " caktanny said half laughing to herself. " so this is the big mad misstress im surprised its not a male but women are always supioror" Caktanny moved slowly forward un doing her cloak letting it slide down her body to her feet. " nothing to say good that makes your death so much easier".Caktanny held her arm out and pulled the cloak off but just as she threw it to one side caktanny flew back smacking againest a wall with a heavey noise. The stones cracked and some fell down hitting caktanny on her head. Mistress rema stood up. She had long blonde hair tied back. It went past down her back. Her face was pale almost as white as snow with a cut across her eye and her body thin and showing off a impressive sixpack.Around her neck was a small circle with one rune on it.Caktanny glanced at her finding her a bit attractive but then she rememebered what she was and glanced away. " You think me weak well you are the weak one around here" She grinned heavely and Caktanny's arm began to push heavly into to wall causeing more stones to break and the arm to snap the dagger slide down. Caktanny slide limp to the ground. caktanny coughed up so blood and spoke angrly " FIGHT FAIR BITCH WHAT KIND OF WITCH POWER IS IT THAT YOU HAVE ???!?!??!". Rema laughed heavely " why fight fair when i can do this and its so much easier. And about my power well lets just say even i have a master and he grants me my share of powers but i speak to much " rema moved slowly towards caktanny as caktanny slowly lifted herself up againest the wall. But the caktanny's body tightented againest the wall again. mistress rema moved forawrd and knelt down moveing up caktanny's body moveing her tounge around it tell she moved up to her lips and kisses her lightly. " you are imrpessive dear too bad i need to kill you but maybe some fun first". Caktanny reached deep within herself and her hands began to spasm her nails became long. Rema looked at them for a second with a dumb founded gaze which broke her concertion. In this second caktanny lashed forward and cut across Rema's face. The cuts were deep and smeared blood across both there faces. Caktanny knew she had a chance now and did not miss it. Her hands frawled quickly at rema's body and face but rema was focued now and every time she came close a invisable wall seemed to stop her. But caktanny Was doing one thing she was foceing rema back with every blow. Eventaully rema had enough and screamed loudly " YOU ARE NOTHING " a heavy foce hit caktanny in the chest sending her flying back again causeing several bricks to smack in to one of caktanny's leg's breaking it . She screamed loudly echoing through out the small chamber. " This is it my little pretty wench this is it now" Rema moved quickly over to caktanny but just before she got there caktanny grabbed her cloak with one hand throwing it over her and with her broken arm slide the dagger into her other hand and held it high she shouted from under her cloak " FEEL THE PUREFICEYING LIGHT OF DAY " She smacked the dagger hard onto and it snapped. Caktanny could see it through the cape it was a blinding light. She scream loud as her hand was burnt and she heard rema's screams. it was a piecering scream that filled caktanny joy.

After what seemed like only a short time caktanny raised herself up and limped over to the burnt body that used to be rema and grinned and laughed aloud " IT IS A SHAME OUR BLOOD DESOVLES WHEN THE BODY IS BURNT I WOULD LOVE TO HAVE HAD YOUR POWER " Caktanny grinned looking over and noticed that the necklace was still intact she removed it quikcly and held it up " impressive little trinkit" Caktanny laughed but suddendly through the door where she had entered a hour before a man broke through it.He was tattoed and had a firce glint in his eye. He reaked of human but before caktanny could turn to face him properly he ran and tackleed her to the ground. His strength was incredable. He was ontop of her now but he did not speak and immdetally he hit his massive fist across her face causeing a crack and her jaw to break. He jumped up from being on top of her and put a foot on her body. " YOU WENCH YOU FOOL YOU COST US MORE THAN THAT DAMN FOOL ON BLOOD SABER ISLAND " he pressed down harder and caktanny coughed violently spewing a lot of blood. Caktanny thought this is the end i am no where near strong enough in my current state to beat him. the man looked down and saw what she was holding knelt down and grabbed her wrist snapping it with one movevent of his hand. Caktanny dropped it with a yelp of pain and the man picked it up and grinned. " well least i won't be getting punished for this one " He spoke in a relifed tone and raised himself up he gave caktanny a kick on the face that kncoked caktanny out.

She awoke hours later and raisesd her head slowly and stiffly giveing out a small cry of pain. She looked down her body smileing a bit. all of her external injuries had healed except from some of the burns on her hand but she still felt the broken jaw and a bone in her leg that had not been healed yet. She crawled slowly to a wall and raised herself slowly up spitting some blood out of her mouth. She swore " that bastard is going to pay for this" she placed a hand slowly againest hte cold stone wall and used it to help lead her out. " He will pay"



Chapter 7

A far distance away a man walks into a shadowed temple in a desert holding a necklace tight in his hand. He walks into the center room and finds a tall man sitting in the shadows wings can be seen but only dimmly. The man bows speaking quitely and fearfully " here is the second part my lord and the thrid part will be in my care soon but we lost the vampire army to a wench but i disposed of her my lord ragnork"

The necklace came flying out of the mans grip and and clawed hand was seen grabbing it from where the the shadowy figure sat. " YOU MUST BE PUNSIHED THIS TIME FOOL"...................a long heavy scream came from the temple for hours to come that day and eventally a man could be seen limping out of the temple and limping off to the desert to severve his master's will.................



THE END
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Adam
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si can you read this and see if you get any drawing ideas from it please cheers
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