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Poems!; The worst nightmare for some. haha
Topic Started: Sep 14 2007, 05:40 AM (641 Views)
Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Sep 14 2007, 05:40 AM Post #1
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	Back in the day the wonderful Jay began a "Poems" thread but due to the forums lost of posts most of them got erased and since Kev brought it up not so long ago but was too coward (jk lol) i decided to start one again. Yes, me, the king of poetry. haha Anyone feel free to write poems but mostly likely you'll see me and Kev duke it out. heh My first poem is called "A Night's Tale". As i describe to you all this night I swear it couldn't have been more right Stars even aligned for us tonight And skies open so we began dancing tonight Passes of song melodies played in sync to every move we made Follow by the beats of our hearts as we dance and dance away It was our private getaway And not one easily to fade away If we happen to stumble and miss one single beat This wonderful night would bring life back to our feet Composing tunes with every single stroke of wind Leading waves near the sea carry the songs to sing As we taste this moment we bring joy into our life We look forward and forward and not past our lives And while one thing is clear another is not This night this moment is drawing closer to a stop Walking away from this is the farthest thing Only opposite to the kiss this night can bring With each second minutes never seemed more alive Anxiously waiting the big moment of the night And as the moon steers far and far away We reach the moment where there’s nothing left to say The falling leaves, the silent wind, and the waving sea stop motion Yet our kiss can be witness from across the ocean It was the first time we danced together And it couldn’t have been more right The moon shined so bright It lighted our path all through the night I held you and you held me It was the closest thing to heaven That I could ever wish it be… C'mon Kev, bring it!
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


Angel	Sep 14 2007, 07:03 PM Post #2
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	wow...great job, edwin! really flows nicely ^_^



The Sound Boy	Sep 14 2007, 09:10 PM Post #3
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	hahah! coward eh? Here's a song I wrote a few weeks ago Bad Actress Are you tired of cliches yet? I can't remember the lines you forget. you're pretty lonely at the top, your smile fades when the film stops. You may not share a star with the rest, but I think you look fine standing in that dress. and maybe if our roles flipped, someday, I can write your script. The critics are out already, they'll take shots at every beat. It's not the spotlight that makes you pretty, but it's got you staring at your feet. Just pretend that no one's watching, every moment to scale your mistakes. We'll run far from the cinema, but we'll watch the scenes we create. The critics are out already they'll take shots at every beat. It's not the spotlight that makes you pretty, but it's got you staring at your feet. another one I wrote last night Coffee The book on your desk is open, but what about your heart? I find myself broken, starting is the hardest part. I had my cup of coffee, but you had your sip of tea. I thought of all the mornings you haven't spent with me. When will I learn the fix? Rootbeer floats and guilt won't mix. I tried giving you a call, left a voice mail in the hall. These telephone lines never end so I never called again. All those postcards never helped, you wrote me feelings you never felt. One day I woke up in California, but felt like an east coast bloke, Your past self has whispered words of smiling folk. that last song seems short, but it was 3:41 when we recorded it!
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Angel	Sep 15 2007, 10:16 PM Post #4
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	^_^ really nice, kev! deep lyrics! i think you just brung it



The Sound Boy	Sep 16 2007, 01:31 AM Post #5
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	yessir. I'm no coward! :)
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Sep 17 2007, 03:08 AM Post #6
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	That's some really really good songs their Kev. I think "Bad Actress" was very cleverly written and i love how you use the aspects of an actor along with the words in the song. Now where the other one was kinda simple "Coffee" is way way deep. It definitely had some flow and it's so meaningful at the same time. And it was so good it almost feels improvised which i can't tell you how much of a good thing that is. Well done!
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


The Sound Boy	Sep 17 2007, 09:39 AM Post #7
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Thanks Ed! It's nice to have the poetry corner back up. Your turn Ed!
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


The Sound Boy	Sep 21 2007, 10:38 PM Post #8
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Written with the piano At Least You Were Mine For The Night Truly, Madly, don't you know I hardly sleep anymore? again it's after 4. I go Slightly Crazy nightly, thinking of how to win your love But the best I can do is dream of you. If only sleep would find me I could hold you near until you disappear in the morning light, at least you were mine for the night. There's no other underneath my cover, but thoughts of you keeps me warm the whole night through. And even if there really is no place where dreams come true, my heart is still with you But it's through star dust, I imagine us. If only sleep would come then I could hold you near until you disappear when each new day takes you away, I'll hold you near until you disappear when each new day comes to take you away.
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Angel	Sep 21 2007, 11:08 PM Post #9
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	thats really beautiful, kevin... :[



Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Sep 27 2007, 08:33 PM Post #10
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	Nicely done, Kev. Very cool. I read it a few times over cause at first i wasn't getting it. But, after realizing it i understood everything and i was taken by surprise as to how simple it seems but so rich in words. Good work!
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


The Sound Boy	Sep 29 2007, 11:52 PM Post #11
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	thanks a bunch Ed! I'm going through this melancholy stage, so I apologize for the slight mood swings in my writing. Here's a song I wrote on the ukelele. or however that's spelled. written after a cool day. Happiest When I'm With You I think I met you in the summertime, we went to discos and got drunk on wine. I couldn't tell if you were gay or strait, but you were different from the girls I hate. I guess it's positively true I'm happiest when I'm with you. You were the only one to notice me, and I could feel the electricity. I didn't know if you fancied me, I though you liked that guy beside me. But I don't care because it's true I'm happiest when I'm with you. And now you say that you're in love with me, and that I make you funny in the knees. But then I found out it was just a dream, and I can't tell you cause you'd laugh at me, I guess it's positively true, I'm happiest when I'm with you. Hahaha, sorry, I'm really into indie-pop so it's not all emo and stuff.
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Angel	Sep 30 2007, 02:03 PM Post #12
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	nice! you 2 are really talented...i wish i could poetic



Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Oct 4 2007, 01:37 AM Post #13
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	Woah Kev! I totally and immediately felt that! Awesome! It was just so cool! I mean at first i was like "It's this like Will Smith's summertime" but it was not and you added your own flava and made it very spontanous.
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


The Sound Boy	Dec 18 2007, 11:12 PM Post #14
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	here's a song written in the autumn. I want to make a short film based on this story. Long Distance Good Friday, I'm miles away and missing you already. From a backyard in Balmain, to the post office and back again. I bought a postcard, it's getting close but I haven't got around to it yet. I know I said I'd write, and maybe I might... You know I'm thinking of you in the bookstore, in the laundromat Guess how much I love you, much more, more than that. More than that. Better Saturday, and it's been that way since I spoke to you this morning, from a payphone near a pub. here's the rock n roll and there's the rub. And when I spoke to you, you said "I'll see you soon" but I won't see you for ages. And your voice sounded so small, it's the loneliness of a long-distance phone call. You know I'm thinking of you in the book store, in the laundromat Guess how much I love you much more, more than that. More than that... Here's me Here's you, draw a line between the two. This is cartography for beginners. On a map the gap's three fingers but it's more than that, it's more than that.
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Angel	Dec 19 2007, 02:55 AM Post #15
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	good stuff, lil bro



Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Dec 21 2007, 09:48 PM Post #16
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	I love the part "much more, more than that, more than that". You're saying so much with those words and giving the reader an understanding how big the love is. It's like hearing musical score in a stadium, you really get the sense of how big is the room even if you're watching it from your TV. All in all, Kev, well done.
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


The Sound Boy	Dec 21 2007, 09:54 PM Post #17
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Thanks guys. That song means alot to me.
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


The Sound Boy	Mar 8 2008, 03:31 AM Post #18
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Here's a song I wrote about being sick of living in a rich neighborhood, because of how everyone acts and I'm no rich kid. Probably the longest song I've ever written. Sick of Suburban Skies Upstairs the neighbors are moving in, hammering nails into their beds. You can hear them falling in love again, three times this evening. While they were asleep in bed, jealous of how they were so content, jealous of the money they spent, three times this evening. She was born in New Orleans, he made his money on Long Island, out on Montawk, sold used cars, paved parking lots. They bought a cigarette boat then they bought a truck to move the cigarette boat from lot to lot. Oh but I saw their girl Ruthie, she was running through the streets in her bare feet. Someone ought to be ashamed of her, someone ought to be ashamed. Their daughter stepped on glass again, her foot bled red as dye, through the floorboards, through the floorboards. You could hear his hand drop, they split the estate, it was againts the law, it was againts the law. Oh but I saw their girl Ruthie, she was running through the streets in her bare feet. Someone ought to be ashamed of her, someone ought to be ashamed. we were dreaming of the green trees, oh we were just dreaming of getting by. We were dreaming of making ends meet, oh we were just dreaming of getting by. I fell in love again tonight, my heart bled red as dye through the floorboards, through the floorboards. While they tried to sleep in their beds, jealous of how they were so content, jealous of the money they spent three times this evening. Oh but I saw their girl Ruthie, she was running through the streets in her bare feet. Someone ought to be ashamed of her, someone ought to be ashamed. We were just dreaming of getting by!
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


The Sound Boy	Mar 8 2008, 03:37 AM Post #19
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Another melodramatic song, my expertise. Books For Girls You can compliment me on the style of my hair. Give me marks out of ten for the clothes that I wear. You probably thought I had more upstairs. I disappoint you, I can't see through your perfect smile. He likes to read books written for girls. He takes pride in being a man of the world. In the darkest of places he gets his thrill. He will disappoint you if you see through his perfect smile. But I think separation is okay, cause you're no star to guide me anyway. You only wanted me to play, how fool. Played by your rules. Now my door has swollen from the rain. God knows I'll never see her face again. People get thwarted in many ways. They will disappoint you, if you see through their perfect smile. Still I think separation is okay, cause you're no star to guide me anyway. You only wanted me to play. How fool. Played by your rules.
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Angel	Mar 10 2008, 12:56 AM Post #20
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	both of these songs are really good, kev ^_^ the skies one is deep



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