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| The "Edwin Competition".; Write a poem. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 17 2006, 03:25 AM (1,144 Views) | |
| Seoul Survivor | Mar 6 2006, 11:42 PM Post #41 |
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Thanks Jay!
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"Altar"?? That's hard. Lemme try: So when ever Edwin's about to falter, and fall off the poetry-annon wagon Or he sees any girl wandering around in a halter I have to bring out the evil dragon! For he isn't just some Jim or Walter, About his poetry, he keeps on braggin' Until we find him a woman, and join them at the Altar Or his poetry will keep us a gaggin' Mouse //Seoul |
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| QUEEN A | Mar 7 2006, 02:47 AM Post #42 |
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As I sit in this empty house Thinking of you and me I try to piece together The strangness of this mystery. You said that you loved me That I was your all Without me is A world without all. I promised that my love will last Put that just seems to be in the past No matter how hard I grasp It just seems to pass. Baby I confessed my love The freedom of us both You and I swore That we would last a lifetime. As I sit in this empty house I try to piece together This unsolved mystery Of two people Just like you and me. Credit |
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| The Sound Boy | Mar 7 2006, 10:52 PM Post #43 |
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Just a few things about you that I just can't wait to edit, I hate how you ignore me. Everytime our eyes meet, you know that if you stared into them again I'd sweep you off your feet. You try to hold back, but your friends tell me that you've kept me on track. Yeah, you give me fake smiles, but you know you want to cry right into my arms, just for awhile. It's wrong, but I feel right when your bestfriend, tells me everything you say about me, and it's really funny that your bestfriend is also mine. So baby, I know you miss me I know what you feel. But even without our friend I know what you think, You just have to make it real. THAT WAS REALLY RETARDED! Boo |
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| QUEEN A | Mar 8 2006, 08:56 PM Post #44 |
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You know what's kinda scary? I wrote BOO first, then put CREDIT 'cause I thought BOO was used -__- Roar. And your poems are never retarded :] Boo hoo hoo hoo You make me cry Boo hoo hoo hoo You want to make me die Boo hoo hoo hoo Oh how I despise you Boo hoo hoo hoo I wish you'd just know Boo hoo hoo hoo It's just the way it is. LOL, I'm like really @__@ right now. Tea |
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| The Sound Boy | Mar 8 2006, 09:28 PM Post #45 |
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I see the sky, Clouds looking back at me, Pondering on the fact that fate probably hates me. and just when I think, this has all been a dream I wake up, Not surprised to see things wrong again, destryoing me to the very core, I've waited and waited for something more. Waiting never earns anything worth waiting for. and it never returns the time I waste waiting. log |
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| QUEEN A | Mar 8 2006, 10:08 PM Post #46 |
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^ That's a sad poem >T Didn't we do log?? oO.. Walking through the fog Of this empty world Searching for that one thing To keep me from bleeding It's just obvious Your running from me As I run towards you. Charm |
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| The Sound Boy | Mar 9 2006, 12:06 AM Post #47 |
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^ Whoops, sorry Oh you fool don't be alarmed. You swear like it's the end of the world. You all scream, you all swarm. It's just a little mishap, with the technicians and the wires. So stop running you frantic laps, It's not like the house is on fire. There's tons of things we can do, to turn this bad into good. Like hide and seek, peek a boo and maybe eat cold food. So please, oh please, stop your crazy yelling. Your voice melts my ears, Your pitch rings so high, You shatter bottles of beer. You swear like it's the end of the world. You scream and you shout. Goshdarn Child, It's only a blackout!!! Mishap |
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| QUEEN A | Mar 9 2006, 12:40 PM Post #48 |
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@__@ I can't think of a word that rhymes with Mishap T___T The stupid little bap Was such a mishap He liked to eat Kimchi and rice Oh how much he loved bap Always sitting on his papppy's lap He would always try to tap His pappy's belly for good luck Rub rub rub, tap tap tap One day He became a million air And it was all thanks to that tap. LOL.. I need to take poetry lessons!! :P Fruit |
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| The Sound Boy | Mar 11 2006, 11:52 AM Post #49 |
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Does anything rhyme with fruit!? when the sun shines, the rain falls, the seed will take root. Both happiness and Disaster, will make this seed grow a foot. You see, being only happy and being only sad, Will eventually get pretty lonely, and could make one go mad. Life itself balances, your feelings never one. You need to face both consequences, until your life is done. Rate |
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| QUEEN A | Mar 12 2006, 07:57 PM Post #50 |
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Yes, root, toot, moot, loot, boot, goot, koot, HEHEHE
:D Whenever I meet you Why do you say, "Hello mate"? Whenever I see you It's always with a rate? Whenever I'm in English Why do we read about Kate? Whenever I try to tell you Why are you always late? Whenever I try to rhyme words It's always so tate >< HEHEHE!!!! Pin |
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| The Sound Boy | Mar 12 2006, 08:05 PM Post #51 |
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Oh Father please forgive me, for I have committed a very cruel sin. I thought I could control myself, I thought I could be less trouble. I thought I'd stay around her house, and leave when her Dad comes on the double. I guess you can say, that I screwed up big time. Cause when her dad walked in We were snuggled up, feeling oh so fine. Her Dad walked over to me, and I let go of her oh so instantly. His mouth moved, but i didn't hear a word. I started twitching, like that weird A$$ nerd. And when his words finally came across, I then realized what I've done, the sin I have thrown. I always thought that he was the Dad, I always thought that she was his child. But I looked at their fingers. Damn. She was his bride. Call |
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| QUEEN A | Mar 13 2006, 03:55 AM Post #52 |
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^ ROFLLL!!!! Kinda sad, but funny :P Nicely done :] (didn't we do call? oO??) The world stops to hear About his miserable fall. Silence becomes louder As they all listen close. It doesn't make sense to them He was always the one. The joy in his voice His purity of the soul. No one could understand About that simple phone call. Hello and goodbye He found it harder than it should be. The only thoughts that cloud his mind Was how it was so simple. As he climbed the mountain The mountain of stairs. That one endless mountain It kept him apart from her. Finally he reached the top He screamed at the top of his lung. GOOD-BYE and HELLO GOOD-BYE and HELLO. Not hello and good-bye But Good-bye and Hello. It was then That he took the fall. The jump of his life Just to be with her. It was then that everyone understood Not hello and good-bye, But Good-bye and Hello. Fill |
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| The Sound Boy | Mar 13 2006, 11:28 PM Post #53 |
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^ oh.. i thought we didn't. mah bizzle! The key to playing my game, is to never lose hope, never lose your will. When you're down by two, and your shooting touch is lame, Drive the lane, pass it out, have teammates shoot their fill. Whether you score Twenty, or whether you score Two, As long as you get the W, Never will your day turn blue. Zero points and Twelve assists, is better than scoring Eighty, when the win doesn't Excist. So if you're losing, if the rest of your team seems ill, Go ahead, take a bruising. But never, ever lose will. Rotunda |
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| The Sound Boy | Mar 19 2006, 07:14 PM Post #54 |
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Fine. I'll do another. It's still monday, and you're feeling a little under, But just wait it out til Friday. and when the day comes... It's already Friday and soon it'll be friday night! If you've got something planned, I suppose I'll understand. But give me half an hour and I'll meet you in the Gardens. I'll probably be waiting Next to the dumpster if it's raining. and somewhere near the sea-saws if it's not. We can walk around the Football grounds as the sun sets on the GrandStand. if it gets a little cold there, we can hold hands in the golf square. It's getting dark and baby don't the shops shine bright? I've been here for hours I can see the Flourist for the flowers. And I don't see the point in hanging around. I know we've done all this before. But again won't hurt, so let's do it once more. Bereft of ideas we live here but we're sightsee-ers. Somewhere over the railway line, there's a light on in your lounge room. do you remember when i found you fast asleep? You were so slow to your feet. I didn't mean to yell, it's just that I'm a little jealous. Cause you went with him on Friday. i relied on front-face and dumb luck. But eventually the stickers were unstuck. I know we've done all this before. But once more won't hurt, so let's get to the floor. Bereft of ideas we live here but we're sightsee-ers. Darn |
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