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The "Edwin Competition".; Write a poem.
Tweet Topic Started: Feb 17 2006, 03:25 AM (1,146 Views)
Seoul Survivor	Feb 24 2006, 04:50 AM Post #21
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	Well, Edwin, it's been quite a while, I've allowed you to poemicide, mile after mile, Sitting here, controlling myself, all the while, not getting my dandruff up, not getting in a rile, I've behaved myself with grace* and style, Not commenting anything was vile, Not saying anyting was bilge, nor bile, I've allowed you to enjoy yourself, with a smile! Next word: lamp //Seoul *Title of Lee, Soo-young's newest album!!! (and I drink Diet Coke, and prefer Diet Pepsi!)



QUEEN A	Feb 24 2006, 04:11 PM Post #22
Close your eyes and run~ Posts: 5,039 Group: Advanced Members Member #6,181 Joined: December 19, 2004	It always seems a while Before you try to bash on me Honey understand, You got nothing to see Try to check my profile You'll only get hurt Watch your back, 'Cause I'm coming to get you. Study
	_sometimes...it's better this way


The Sound Boy	Feb 24 2006, 07:31 PM Post #23
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Walking to school, the path a-muddy, Shivering in shorts and a sweater, hoping the day would be nice, but it won't, you can tell by the weather. There hasn't been any sun for a week or so, I'd say and getting ready for spring, in this very unusual way. But when you think it starts to chill, the clouds will part, and the sun will fill, the void between comfort, and fussy chats you have with your friends, which talk fast, fast as a cat. So I guess it's okay, that the days have been lukewarm, because with sun comes the girls, and with girls, it's a swarm. Lady
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


QUEEN A	Feb 25 2006, 02:40 AM Post #24
Close your eyes and run~ Posts: 5,039 Group: Advanced Members Member #6,181 Joined: December 19, 2004	You are the one The one that I'll ask to Sadies (..) We'll catch a plane And head towards Haddies We'll change the world Just you and me One plus another So we equal two Even if your with that girl Katie I know your mine I can see it in your eyes Once we get that chance We'll we together Just you and I Dude.. I can't think @__@ So tired.. Reply
	_sometimes...it's better this way


Angel	Feb 25 2006, 02:51 AM Post #25
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	all i wanted was some kind of reply her deafening silence was a scream goodbye i reached for her hand then she started to cry i wish i could've helped her dry the tears from her eye i had asked for her hand in marriage, but i did not know that she had found another guy i waited too long her love for me, now dry how could i have let our love gone so awry next word: love



The Sound Boy	Feb 25 2006, 04:57 AM Post #26
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Looking at the fluttering dove floating in space. Brings me solace, Can't you see it in my face? My dove, I hope you see, That you, only you, are my only love. It's been over a month, but it seems like an eternity. So If you last, I'll always say those words, but if you won't, I'll let you free, dove fly like a bird. Ball
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Feb 26 2006, 12:07 AM Post #27
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	I look i look into my crystal ball I see someone who's not having a bawl He said he allowed me to give my all Did he suddenly opened up a curtain call? He must've been dancing poka at the mall Saying this saying that waiting for me to fall And even though i don't think, i don't recall I think he was the owner of Angelo's Feeling Up On You Hall ... heh Close
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


The Sound Boy	Feb 26 2006, 01:01 AM Post #28
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	(( I'm going to use Close as in "phew! that was close!" )) I hate sitting in bars, waiting for the host. I hate how I can't drink. Just watch others get the most. I hate bars. I'd leave in a second, cause I hate to see them boast. Sink
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Seoul Survivor	Feb 26 2006, 02:41 AM Post #29
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	Sometimes poems can really stink, If, at first you don't stop and think, Before you put them on paper with ink, They can make people barf, in the sink, Once in a while, poetry is in the pink, Nary a word, that makes a clink, Normally not written by a dink, Those poems, get my wink. Next word: right //Seoul



The Sound Boy	Feb 26 2006, 01:08 PM Post #30
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	I squint my eyes, shield them from that light. Out of curiousity, I followed it that night. I wished I'd known, what I know now. Because if I did, I woudn't leave them on their own. I walked right up, to that terrible sight, it was him, He didn't put up a fight. Boom! Bam! I knocked him on the floor. I told him to get up, I told him there was more. "No, no more" he cried "Why, Why not?" I replied then I realized who I had supplied, it was my brother, "OMGSH! YOU COULD'VE DIED!" safe
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Mar 2 2006, 01:12 AM Post #31
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	Yo, Kev, nice! I look around and i see those with haze Haze in their eyes of words unsafe They call their soul and ask for a raise But all they do is walk around a maze They try but cannot reach high They see but are blind to the lie Written words give them self-gratification But they're just having one big hallucination Someone asked me if i liked what he said I answer "No, i rather shoot myself instead" In the end he is just the same as myself Worser rhymes couldn't have been said by anyone else Girl
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


QUEEN A	Mar 2 2006, 04:37 PM Post #32
Close your eyes and run~ Posts: 5,039 Group: Advanced Members Member #6,181 Joined: December 19, 2004	Whenever I see your face It makes me squint with disgrace Boy you like chocolate that's gone bad It makes me wanna hurl. You say that it's you and me No singles but plurals But you don't know what you saying You just need to see. Yo udon't know what you doing There ain't no 1, 2, or three. ajsfl;uajfekjd;uf I need poetry lessons! I'll be holding interviews this Friday!
	_sometimes...it's better this way


The Sound Boy	Mar 4 2006, 12:21 AM Post #33
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	I'm assuming the word is Friday hahaha I'm molding my feelings, in rebuild mode, she says. I was Clueless, knowing the fact, that it was HER that ended our ways. It was kind of funny seeing her act like she cried It was really funny how she told the world she tried, tried to keep us together she says. Never wanted to leave she said. Never wanted to leave she said. Check
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


QUEEN A	Mar 4 2006, 02:21 AM Post #34
Close your eyes and run~ Posts: 5,039 Group: Advanced Members Member #6,181 Joined: December 19, 2004	Her name was Beck And she had a duck And Becky was her name-oh B-E-C-K-Y B-E-C-K-Y B-E-C-K-Y And Becky was her name-oh. There was a bet on the duck And Beck didn't like it B-E-C-K-Y B-E-C-K-Y B-E-C-K-Y And Becky was her name-oh There was a duck with a cat And CATTY was his name-oh C-A-T-T-Y C-A-T-T-Y C-A-T-T-Y And Catty was his name-ohhhhh. Fung
	_sometimes...it's better this way


The Sound Boy	Mar 4 2006, 02:47 AM Post #35
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	^ ROFL In a wretched voice she sung, to me, expressing her fake, oh so fake love, Made me think she was sprung. even if it was sung so bad Something within it told me to go with it and when I fell right into your trap you realized I was the wrong prey so you sent me right back. or something. ARGH. I hate this week poop
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


QUEEN A	Mar 5 2006, 08:13 PM Post #36
Close your eyes and run~ Posts: 5,039 Group: Advanced Members Member #6,181 Joined: December 19, 2004	^ HEHE You said poop :P Ohhh there's a doop poop moop In the stooop of the kitchen There's doop poop mooooooop And I said that there's a D-O-O-P! P-O-O-P! M-O-O-P! Yeah, uh, now Everyone listen up There's a poop in the doop I tried to scoop up the moop It was impossible I can't believe it Doop, poop, moop Now everyone say DOOP!! POOOP!! MOOOOP!!! Star
	_sometimes...it's better this way


Angel	Mar 6 2006, 01:50 AM Post #37
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	^lol...cute! i wanna hear u sing that!!!



QUEEN A	Mar 6 2006, 03:04 AM Post #38
Close your eyes and run~ Posts: 5,039 Group: Advanced Members Member #6,181 Joined: December 19, 2004	Never :]
	_sometimes...it's better this way


Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Mar 6 2006, 04:49 AM Post #39
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	One move one look and there we are Singing, dancing, and having fun like a star Though the distance is very very far The night makes us stand out from afar As the morning sun begins to set itself in We do more than just sing but write from within With fogs getting ticker by the minute We believe in our words and submit it From a huge mountain top we look to the city One guys says "wow" and one girl says "pretty" I say "we're crazy" and the other says "you stink" I'll admit i'm lazy but i am begining to think Us Kevin, Jay, Vic, and i are prettier than pink lol Jay Never :]
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


The Sound Boy	Mar 6 2006, 10:52 PM Post #40
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Never? okays I love how whenever I think of you, your ghostly being surrounds me, ever. Even though you're gone, you've left our sight I always know that you watch us, you're there alright. I kiss your picture every morning before I go to school, remembering how you beat me in pool. Especially when Dad was away, you were always there, every single day. Whenever my Mom was weak, you gave her a break, you took us away for 3 long weeks. My uncle, oh my dear friend I know you're still here, you'll guide me to the end. So when I see you in front of the pearly gates, I'll tell you I missed you, and that it was worth the wait. I miss you Uncle Jim! altar
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


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