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The "Edwin Competition".; Write a poem.
Tweet Topic Started: Feb 17 2006, 03:25 AM (1,143 Views)
Seoul Survivor	Feb 17 2006, 03:25 AM Post #1
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	OK. So we (sincerely) want to help our resident poet get better. (and he needs help!) So here are the rules. You must write a poem, based on a word, left for you by the previous poet. So if I put up: "She is so sweet, as unlikely as it is for I to meet and, she is so light on her feet as we dance, together in the street" then I put up a word: "Booger" And, say Edwin would start with She is sweet as sugar. ..... Words not allowed Silver, Orange, Mouth, Purple, Angst, Scalp, or any word, ending in "th". go for it! //Seoul



Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Feb 17 2006, 03:54 AM Post #2
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	I insert my finger and out came a booger Did it so it would have to come out sooner Kill me for saying it tasted sweet as sugar I think i'll have more and make a super! LOL!!!!!!! Street
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


Seoul Survivor	Feb 17 2006, 12:48 PM Post #3
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	(Editor's note:) You do not need to use the "word" in your poem. Just rhyme with it!. In a field of humanity, where everyone looks like wheat. It is such wonderful luck, you and I should meet A relationship as wonderful as ours can not be beat While others are frigid, they thrive on our heat. kind. //Seoul



Angel	Feb 18 2006, 03:11 AM Post #4
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	in my dreams i dream my life could rewind and unravel all thats become entwined and i see once again my love left behind i reach out for her and nothing do i find for it was just a vision of my subconscious mind new word: pain



Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Feb 22 2006, 10:14 PM Post #5
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	It rains but i cannot feel the rain My world clouds me from the pain I look and yet i'm blinded by shame My world clouds me from the pain I see yet i'm rid from an unseen frame My world clouds me from the pain I touch yet can't feel the skin of your name My world clouds me from the pain My world clouds me from the pain My world clouds me from the pain... Competition
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


The Sound Boy	Feb 22 2006, 11:56 PM Post #6
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Start the ignition cause i'm a man on a mission looking for fun maybe for fame nonetheless, we're all on the run don't stop, don't wait they'll stop you to create lies that you might believe again until the general gives, and says "At ease, men!" station! this is fun ^^
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Seoul Survivor	Feb 23 2006, 01:08 AM Post #7
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	This poetry here, Staggers the imagination, Other forums, there are stuck in simple stagnation, But AMR members, near, Are such a great explaination, We grow, and fumble, as we make a great nation! New word: Light.



The Sound Boy	Feb 23 2006, 01:14 AM Post #8
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Quick to get into one Quick to start a fight, I was always a spunky boy, never ever mistaken for the girl that loves to play with a Mika toy. Though sometimes I do not mind to play with Ms. Mika, play til my teeth grind. Yes, I am aggressive I love to rumble, But whenever I'm around my Nakashima I grow shy, and humble. Stairs
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Seoul Survivor	Feb 23 2006, 03:19 AM Post #9
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	The quiet, the cold, and the sudden noise below ...on the back of my neck, stood all the hairs. My thoughts were of her, calmly sleeping... Blissfully dreaming quietly, upstairs, The door opened suddenly The mystery soon to end! And my life, as well, as I blindly gazed into the lamp's glares. New word: dog. //Seoul



QUEEN A	Feb 23 2006, 04:08 PM Post #10
Close your eyes and run~ Posts: 5,039 Group: Advanced Members Member #6,181 Joined: December 19, 2004	As we dribble All you do is hog. Like a person with no manners Your snorts are like a log. You jump and hop Just like a frog. The air becames clear As the wind blows the fog. Now I see, That your nothing but a dog. Run
	_sometimes...it's better this way


The Sound Boy	Feb 23 2006, 09:22 PM Post #11
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Over the merriment, over the fun we talked about it over some tea and rum. Singing, laughing, shooting joyous we were, forgetting that we had problems back at home. No matter the trouble, no matter the pain, I'm always happy with you, through sun, through rain. Whenever my sun goes out I always turn to you to fix the bulb. Whenever I find the moon with mold, I turn to you to chop the green, horrific spore. With you I never fail to see that no matter the circumstance, No matter the trouble, You'll be here to bring me peace. So I just have two things to say, the first, "Thank you, to your beautiful soul" and then "I love you, from now, later, and back today" Boom
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


QUEEN A	Feb 23 2006, 10:46 PM Post #12
Close your eyes and run~ Posts: 5,039 Group: Advanced Members Member #6,181 Joined: December 19, 2004	My greatest free loom With the dark dingy doom As I stand frighten alone I look towards you for my refuge You take me into your wings and shield me The rain is just another trial for us And as more come along the way All we do is look back And see where it has zoomed. Easy
	_sometimes...it's better this way


The Sound Boy	Feb 23 2006, 11:54 PM Post #13
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Pretty cheezy to say, that each and everyday, I try my best to come your way. That's the way I used to live, The way I couldn't hide, So I'll let you know with post number Two-Thousand Twenty Five. I see you after class and walk with you home, Just happy we had a chance to be alone. That short fifteen minute walk that I loved, became something much more. Not hate, not sorrow, but none of the above. It's weird how things work, but I'm glad it worked out. For the best it was, No matter what best is about. Poke
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Feb 24 2006, 12:56 AM Post #14
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	Yo, is this a joke? Y'all are about to choke Kev got no money he broke Jay's aight but she barely spoke And Vic does best drinking a Coke lol Leaf
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


The Sound Boy	Feb 24 2006, 01:17 AM Post #15
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	Have you ever noticed? that Ed's lines are as rough as tough beef. I guess he likes picking on younger teens, such as Jay and Kevo, But the thing he needs to know, I'll break him like Legos. Bash 'im, I'll bop 'im, Rip out his wallet, take out the money, make it slim. It's cool I ain't got money, yeah I got no cash, but the thing is, I got me a honey ^____^ Love! ^^
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Feb 24 2006, 02:18 AM Post #16
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	Oooooooooooooooooohhhhhh that was cold, son... time to take the gloves off! lol Oh i see how u play but that aint enough Sure u got a honey but what's the rush? Yeah she fine she holds you, whateva Get it straight like Mika she'll be neva And don't go sayin' cause she is more I've already heard this once before But aight i apologize for takin' shots at yo girl... But why have one when i can have the whole world? HAHA! Booya! Reply
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


The Sound Boy	Feb 24 2006, 02:34 AM Post #17
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	DWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH THAT WAS FRICKEN HILARIOUS! prooops ight Ed, I gotta admit that one right there was from a sick supply from all the other things you coulda said, You got me there, and that's cool, it's fair. But there's still a couple things I got to get off ma chest. Yea, my girl this, my girl that you got the world but do they got you back? I've heard the saying "you mah girl, you just don't know it" but granpa you bring that up to another level. Yeah you got me earlier and you deserve br-A$$, but c'mon dog, have some class! dwahaha! bam
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Feb 24 2006, 02:49 AM Post #18
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	That was so wack i rather eat ham And i know i know they don't know it, man But that's not what this is all about Is about how i'll get them without a doubt You gotta think big you gotta have ambition Sorry bro you aint no competition See you got one and i've yet the world But one plus me equals every single girl lol Fast
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


The Sound Boy	Feb 24 2006, 02:56 AM Post #19
Here's Where the Story Ends Posts: 3,585 Group: Global Moderators Member #6,457 Joined: January 26, 2005	HAHAHAHAHAH! At last, Eddy jeezy admits right now he's last. He got big dreams, and so it seems they'll come true with alotta work. Maybe too much, Maybe too little, I don't care, them girls got no worth cause man, to me Vanessa = the EARTH Spring
	Rain Falls Hard on a Humdrum Town this town has dragged you down


Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Feb 24 2006, 03:22 AM Post #20
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	Awwww aint that sweet? lol She equals the earth of all things She wears a belt like the Ecuador ring? Nah must have been my mistake I bet when he saw her "Ooh a stake!" And she probably is in the right state of mind Sweet, lovable, and all things kind It's just too bad he won't pick her by the station Cause i'll be there until he finishes probation lol Smile
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


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