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| A Writing Exercise; ^--^ | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 27 2004, 07:59 PM (81 Views) | |
| solip__x3jjCM | Sep 27 2004, 07:59 PM Post #1 |
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be my lazarus song
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pwhaha i got this idea from the special program im in, called SOA ((school of the arts)) but YEAH. OKAY :] :] this is challenging, and your brain is prolly gonna hurt after this. >_> mine did okay write down ((NOTE ONLY ONE)) ---- or in our case type *A* color a body of water a fruit an emotion a street name . . . . okay, you got it? good good! :] :] :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo: NOW, write a POEM using those words, on the absolutely random subject of ... ehh gimme a random thing *looks around* ehh cant find anything, so might as well do LOVE okay, now you can not change ur answers, you cant go back or ANYTHING, cuz thas cheating, and thas NAUGHTY :] lol, you cannot fathom how stumped us SOA students were mann.. >_> anywho, heres mine.. it was a color: red a body of water: lake a fruit: passionfruit an emotion: regret a street: broadway passionfruit dreams living the life of an ancient broadway star. no regrets. red venom love, destroy the week, blind the strong. dropped to your knees, surrender to the hand of GOD. Lake of fire ((hope of all nations)) Love is forever see, its horrible, its short, it doesnt make sense, its fun ... lol, but i LIKE english, so maybe its only fun for me? .... never thought about that till now. well oh well, im feeling hyperrrr so~~ :] :cheerleader: |
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| daywalker2k2 | Sep 27 2004, 08:28 PM Post #2 |
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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uhhhhhhh are you alright alyssa...i am starting to get a little worried about you.. |
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| freshmint | Sep 28 2004, 12:15 PM Post #3 |
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sinisterly bitter
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what an interesting exercise... when i get home, i'll do it and post it up... xD |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Sep 28 2004, 06:24 PM Post #4 |
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H.O.T's Wu Jiok
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Cool idea, lady Alyssa! a color: Blue a body of water: River a fruit: Apple an emotion: Hope a street: Miracle Theme: A second chance Swept by a river That in the end made me felt so blue Had a taste of an apple That maybe wasn't my cue Waterfall nears the end of my sight Was i wrong. was i right? Fell and hope as i fall That a river's end, is only the begining of it all Now that would be a miracle :) Your right...my head does hurt. heh |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| freshmint | Sep 28 2004, 08:20 PM Post #5 |
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sinisterly bitter
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a color: white a body of water: sea a fruit: raspberry an emotion: relief a street name: Ocean Drive Standing on Ocean Drive Here I am, standing on Ocean Drive, my eyes closed, my mind wandering free. I can hear it, I can hear the sea, it's waves crashing gently upon a beach of pure white sand, which crunches softly under my tan feet. I can smell it, smell the fragrance of ripe raspberries riding upon the crests of waves. And I feel it, feel relief flowing through my very veins as I stand there, eyes closed, on Ocean Drive. ------------- wow... this was a strangely 'creative' exercise... very interesting.. lol.. |
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| Michyu Girl | Sep 28 2004, 09:09 PM Post #6 |
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Don't test me.
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Okay, I have exactly two minutes before my computer time is up! Let's see if I can do it!! a color: green a body of water: brook a fruit: apple an emotion: regret a street name: Memosa Lane All those years I've wasted longing to be with you Longing so much just to hear you whisper my name Tears of pain and love streak down my face As I wonder down Memosa Lane, lost in your memory The tears trickle from my eyes like a brook Yet you will never see the pain I have for you I see you with her everyday, and I cry I can't help but to be green with envy And feel regret for not making my move sooner You are my life; I need you to survive If only I were Snow White and you were the prince Then, I could choke on an apple and you would save me Alas, it's too late... and all I can feel is... Regret |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Sep 29 2004, 06:30 PM Post #7 |
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H.O.T's Wu Jiok
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So far, my favorite is lady Jiyung's. But, the everyone elses are great too. :) |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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