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A Writing Exercise; ^--^
Topic Started: Sep 27 2004, 07:59 PM (81 Views)
solip__x3jjCM
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pwhaha i got this idea from the special program im in, called SOA ((school of the arts)) but YEAH.

OKAY :] :]

this is challenging, and your brain is prolly gonna hurt after this. >_> mine did

okay write down ((NOTE ONLY ONE)) ---- or in our case type

*A* color
a body of water
a fruit
an emotion
a street name

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okay, you got it? good good! :] :] :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo:


NOW, write a POEM using those words, on the absolutely random subject of ... ehh gimme a random thing *looks around* ehh cant find anything, so might as well do LOVE

okay, now you can not change ur answers, you cant go back or ANYTHING, cuz thas cheating, and thas NAUGHTY :]


lol, you cannot fathom how stumped us SOA students were mann.. >_>

anywho, heres mine..

it was

a color: red
a body of water: lake
a fruit: passionfruit
an emotion: regret
a street: broadway

passionfruit dreams
living the life of an
ancient broadway star.
no regrets. red venom love,
destroy the week, blind the
strong. dropped to your knees,
surrender to the hand of
GOD. Lake of fire ((hope of all nations))
Love is forever


see, its horrible, its short, it doesnt make sense, its fun

... lol, but i LIKE english, so maybe its only fun for me?



.... never thought about that till now.


well oh well, im feeling hyperrrr so~~ :] :cheerleader:
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uhhhhhhh are you alright alyssa...i am starting to get a little worried about you..
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freshmint
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what an interesting exercise...
when i get home, i'll do it and post it up... xD
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Cool idea, lady Alyssa!

a color: Blue
a body of water: River
a fruit: Apple
an emotion: Hope
a street: Miracle

Theme: A second chance

Swept by a river
That in the end made me felt so blue
Had a taste of an apple
That maybe wasn't my cue
Waterfall nears the end of my sight
Was i wrong. was i right?
Fell and hope as i fall
That a river's end, is only the begining of it all
Now that would be a miracle

:)

Your right...my head does hurt. heh
"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val-

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But beautifully bright as the sun
She's my angel sistah
Her name is lady Madison


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Hurry now
Don't wait for time to pass you by
Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive
Hurry now
Don't let that someone pass you by
Make the passion esscalate
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a color: white
a body of water: sea
a fruit: raspberry
an emotion: relief
a street name: Ocean Drive



Standing on Ocean Drive

Here I am, standing on Ocean Drive,
my eyes closed, my mind wandering free.
I can hear it, I can hear the sea,
it's waves crashing gently upon a beach
of pure white sand, which crunches
softly under my tan feet.
I can smell it, smell the fragrance
of ripe raspberries riding
upon the crests of waves.
And I feel it, feel relief flowing through
my very veins
as I stand there, eyes closed, on Ocean Drive.

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wow... this was a strangely 'creative' exercise... very interesting.. lol..
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Okay, I have exactly two minutes before my computer time is up! Let's see if I can do it!!

a color: green
a body of water: brook
a fruit: apple
an emotion: regret
a street name: Memosa Lane

All those years I've wasted longing to be with you
Longing so much just to hear you whisper my name
Tears of pain and love streak down my face
As I wonder down Memosa Lane, lost in your memory
The tears trickle from my eyes like a brook
Yet you will never see the pain I have for you
I see you with her everyday, and I cry
I can't help but to be green with envy
And feel regret for not making my move sooner
You are my life; I need you to survive
If only I were Snow White and you were the prince
Then, I could choke on an apple and you would save me
Alas, it's too late... and all I can feel is...
Regret
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Finally, someone tells the truth.

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So far, my favorite is lady Jiyung's. But, the everyone elses are great too. :)
"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val-

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credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling)

Caliente like a volcano
But beautifully bright as the sun
She's my angel sistah
Her name is lady Madison


Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin

Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin)

Hurry now
Don't wait for time to pass you by
Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive
Hurry now
Don't let that someone pass you by
Make the passion esscalate
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