A poem dedicated to a lady of KMR

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A poem dedicated to a lady of KMR; Click and find out... :)
Tweet Topic Started: Sep 19 2004, 05:30 AM (463 Views)
Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Sep 19 2004, 05:30 AM Post #1
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	Poem called: You are the Sun in midst of the rain Open rain Could never cloud your name For you are the rain That rains everyone’s names You are one of my many smiles Throughout a thunderstorm A feeling so comforting It can take any form Withstand I’d be able to do With a simple thought of you You bring that through As clear as my view Why is it Beauty like yours Doesn’t always comes knocking on a door? Because yours is unlike anyone’s before Happiness runs through my heart As I watch thoughts of you apart Good thing it never ends Cause is impossible not to start Even though an impression Can lead to a bad perception With you Is always that of affection So little I know So little you show I take each day Not wanting you any other way This poem is dedicate to lady Twitty, a.k.a Mallory. :) P.S. Would have posted this in the love/hate section, but i thought it be better here so that her would be able to see it easier.
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


freshmint	Sep 19 2004, 01:08 PM Post #2
sinisterly bitter Posts: 4,959 Group: Admin Member #511 Joined: October 11, 2003	lol... nice use of rhyme, edwin-san! xD very well written, i think... i'm sure mal would think so too! ^^
	you know you want to feed it D<


Seoul Survivor	Sep 19 2004, 01:52 PM Post #3
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	Here, I thought we had broken him of that habit. But NOOOOOOOO! I guess I instigated it, by imitating his rhyme. (Mine was substantially better, tho!) That must have re-ignited that flame (albeit, about as bright as a candle...) Whoa is me!! Here we go again....... (All in good fun!!) //Seoul



HyesungLover	Sep 19 2004, 03:04 PM Post #4
Back in Action. :) Posts: 1,171 Group: Advanced Members Member #594 Joined: October 18, 2003	Aww, Oppa, that's such a beautiful poem! I like the rhyme scheme.....AABA......so pretty!!!! You are definitely the best of the best, the Romeos of Romeos! Hehe!!! (And Seoul Oppa......F16 right over my head...... :cry: )
	She's back, the one and only, HyesungLover.


Seoul Survivor	Sep 19 2004, 03:42 PM Post #5
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	DON'T ENCOURAGE HIM!!! He's a poemaholic. He is on the "twelve step" program, to get away from that. He's just fallen off the wagon, so to speak. He was doing so well, for such a long time, then he slipped. It's a disease and we have to help him with it. He is very sick. We need to help him get well. He CAN die from this. So it is super important that we give him all the support we can. You CAN do this Edwin! You can get over this awful thing. Just one step at a time. Give yourself a reward, each day you go without committing a poem. You CAN do it!!! Help our fellow KMRian. We may need to start a collection to finance his being in a treatment program, in case this doesn't work. (And I KNOW how cheap you guys are, so help him stop on his own!!) //Seoul



freshmint	Sep 19 2004, 04:05 PM Post #6
sinisterly bitter Posts: 4,959 Group: Admin Member #511 Joined: October 11, 2003	lol... you guys are weird... xD anyways, edwin and vic, i have a message from her ladyship, Mallory-sama... Wow. I didn't expect a poem by you, Edwin. I would've known about it if Jiyung didn't inform me. I'm absolutely shock that after all this time I've been gone from Korean Music Realm, you still manage to remember me and wrote me a poem. Thanks so much for the poem, Edwin. I enjoyed reading it. Vic, I still see you're still trying to get rid of Edwin's poem. Haven't succeed, huh? ^^ -Mal i have delivered the message... she was going to reply but her comp. wouldn't let her... ^^
	you know you want to feed it D<


Angel	Sep 19 2004, 06:47 PM Post #7
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	very nice poem, edwin. ^_^ who's mallory?



Seoul Survivor	Sep 19 2004, 07:13 PM Post #8
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	Angel Sep 19 2004, 10:47 PM very nice poem, edwin. ^_^ who's mallory? Two problems with that post. "Who's Mallory"????????? Are you stoned? Mal is one-third of the Evil Trio!! She walks on water. She glows in the dark. Evil groups have a "MALLORY" award, for first place evil-doings. (And I have never earned one of those yet!) And the second problem is that idiotic remark about "very nice poem....". Have you been nipping at the "holy water" AGAIN??



Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Sep 19 2004, 07:46 PM Post #9
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	ichigO tenshi Sep 19 2004, 12:05 PM Wow. I didn't expect a poem by you, Edwin. I would've known about it if Jiyung didn't inform me. I'm absolutely shock that after all this time I've been gone from Korean Music Realm, you still manage to remember me and wrote me a poem. Thanks so much for the poem, Edwin. I enjoyed reading it. Vic, I still see you're still trying to get rid of Edwin's poem. Haven't succeed, huh? ^^ -Mal I'm glad you liked it, lady Twitty. And, that's why i did it. In the midst of not having electricity, i got the inspiration to write a poem and the first name brought to my mind, was yours. You see, because you're no longer that active here, i wanted to dedicate something just so you know you haven't been forgotten by any of us. This message goes out to everyone, just because you stop coming here, that doesn't mean you're gonna be forgotten. And, this poem was just a friendly gesture to put a smile on your face. :) Oh and Vic, you know why 'Twelve Step' does not work with me? Well, it's because Twelve Step's foundation is religion and if you're not a very religious person, it might not work as efficiently. Therefore, sorry, there might never be a treatment to rid me of my beautiful disease or addiction. lol Anyway, thanks to those who enjoyed the peom and your comments. I might do this again choosing the dedication to someone else or i might not at all. :)
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


Seoul Survivor	Sep 19 2004, 07:57 PM Post #10
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	Twelve step programs aren't religious. Twelve Step program is from Alcoholics Annonymous. The are very non-religious, non-affiliated, very independent. So you can be on the wagon, and cure yourself. You know, it just might be the awful poetry that drives women away! You might keep that in mind. Most guys in relationships don't commit bad poems. //Seoul



freshmint	Sep 19 2004, 08:23 PM Post #11
sinisterly bitter Posts: 4,959 Group: Admin Member #511 Joined: October 11, 2003	Angel Sep 19 2004, 05:47 PM very nice poem, edwin. ^_^ who's mallory? HUK! O_O!!! angelo, you did not just say that, you friggin baka of a kappa!!!! falls to her knees in utter and complete shock ahahaha, just kidding... oy, oy.... i prolly got a 'MALLORY' award! xD since she and i both talked to each other alot... lol... but, ya know... i think edwin-san's poetry is rubbing off me and i feel like writing one of my own... isn't that shocking!? i'm ashamed of myself... -_- -Jiyung
	you know you want to feed it D<


Angel	Sep 19 2004, 11:00 PM Post #12
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	ichigO tenshi Sep 19 2004, 08:23 PM but, ya know... i think edwin-san's poetry is rubbing off me and i feel like writing one of my own... isn't that shocking!? i'm ashamed of myself... -_- -Jiyung :love: aaawwww!!!!! you're gonna write a poem about ME???? that is sooooo sweet of you, jiyoung!!!!! hehe, i know i'm about to die for making that last comment. >.< in all seriousness, you definitely have a great talent when it comes to writing, Jiyoung, and i believe a poem from you would be nothing less than spectacular and moving. i look forward to reading your poetic expressions. i miss Mallory. :cry:



Seoul Survivor	Sep 19 2004, 11:29 PM Post #13
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	Angel Sep 20 2004, 03:00 AM :love: aaawwww!!!!! you're gonna write a poem about ME???? that is sooooo sweet of you, Well, if she won't, I will be HAPPY TO!!! Oh Angel, oh Angel, your name is so false Groping all those ladies, with "Angel Hugs" I'm surprised you still have a pulse. Animal tendencies in you do empower I'm surprised you won't wrestle me! Instead you run and cower. Rat and Chicken in you are animal drives indeed, I good WHACK on the nose is something you need. Poor Hyori, a woman, you about often lust, "Keep your tendencies a bay!" It's something you MUST. Obnoxious behavior is something you enjoyed But many others find they sometimes get annoyed. Happyier now?? //Seoul



Angel	Sep 19 2004, 11:46 PM Post #14
C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa)) Posts: 10,993 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: June 22, 2003	Seoul Survivor Sep 19 2004, 11:29 PM Happyier now?? //Seoul yes, i'm HAPPYIER now, Vic!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh, i don't grope when i give an ((angel hug))...i wrap my wings around them, ever so gently, as i warmly hug them. aaawwww!!!! Da Vicster Oh Angel, oh Angel, thats what Hyori says to me, in a really sexy, seductive voice.....:love:, in fact, she said it to me last night...ooooh yeeeeeeah, hehe thanks for the bizarro-poem, Vicster!!! now i can't wait for Jiyoungs!!!! HAHAHA^_^



Seoul Survivor	Sep 19 2004, 11:50 PM Post #15
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	Angel Sep 20 2004, 03:46 AM //Seoul yes, i'm HAPPYIER now, Vic!! Thanks for the spelling correction Royal Highness... in fact, she said it to me last night...ooooh yeeeeeeah, And then the alarm clock went off, and I looked outside, and well, it was still September, and I was still in Central Pennsylvania... [/QUOTE] Jeez... What's gotten into him??



SCORE*	Sep 20 2004, 01:33 AM Post #16
iamcool. Posts: 2,476 Group: Advanced Members Member #400 Joined: September 27, 2003	Quote: "Who's Mallory"????????? Are you stoned? Mal is one-third of the Evil Trio!! She walks on water. She glows in the dark. Evil groups have a "MALLORY" award, for first place evil-doings. (And I have never earned one of those yet!) Ahahahaha. The Evil Trio are a legendary group of three. We never die even if one of them shall not return, we never die. Quote: I'm glad you liked it, lady Twitty. And, that's why i did it. In the midst of not having electricity, i got the inspiration to write a poem and the first name brought to my mind, was yours. You see, because you're no longer that active here, i wanted to dedicate something just so you know you haven't been forgotten by any of us. This message goes out to everyone, just because you stop coming here, that doesn't mean you're gonna be forgotten. And, this poem was just a friendly gesture to put a smile on your face. :) Well, I'm glad that even when I'm gone, I'm still remembered. Thanks Edwin. Quote: ahahaha, just kidding... oy, oy.... i prolly got a 'MALLORY' award! xD since she and i both talked to each other alot... lol... A "MALLORY" award? O.o What happened to everyone when I was gone. Likewise, you guys are still weirdos. ^^ Again, thanks for the poem Edwin. I'll come back to visit often, if I can. -Mal
	Yellow Starburst is the new chocolate.


Seoul Survivor	Sep 20 2004, 03:18 AM Post #17
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	crimson_vision Sep 20 2004, 05:33 AM Again, thanks for the poem Edwin. I'll come back to visit often, if I can. -Mal MAL!!! You were doing just fine, up until this point. You do NOT want to encourage this sort of thing to happen. It's like if you find a rat at your back door. If you keep feeding it, it keeps coming back. I had him broken of that awful habit, up until last week. Then it snuck back in. I spray my computer with "Bad Poetry Repellent" every single day. All of the work, the thousands of members of PEST, and the thousands of members of SOAP have done, has been gashed by your remark. Shame!! (Nice to see you back. You really were missed!!!!!) //Seoul



freshmint	Sep 20 2004, 01:49 PM Post #18
sinisterly bitter Posts: 4,959 Group: Admin Member #511 Joined: October 11, 2003	ahahahahaha... we're all so dorky... (bet mal will agree with me)... and no, angel, sadly it's not about you... -_- so deal with it... speaking of poetry, my english teacher invited me to this poetry festival thing.. hahaha... should i go or not? xD -jiyung
	you know you want to feed it D<


Seoul Survivor	Sep 21 2004, 12:40 AM Post #19
Thanks Jay! Posts: 3,000 Group: Member Member #6 Joined: June 21, 2003	ichigO tenshi Sep 20 2004, 05:49 PM speaking of poetry, my english teacher invited me to this poetry festival thing.. hahaha... should i go or not? xD -jiyung [/SIZE] You know, you might get to sneak in an evil poem!!! We could start a trend! Maybe start with a tender one about pulling the wings off of flys, then migrate up the food chain one-leven, and highlight the love life of one hapless wonder in Puerto Rico. This could be the start of a trend that is bigger than hip-hop. //Seoul and a GREAT KMC tonight. I have a dorky question for the wizzards: is the woman in the new Classiquai video (Bossa Nova) the same woman as in the Jo Sung Mo Video, (To You)?? AND (as if that weren't enough) we may get a peak at Yim, Hyun, next week. as Dallas battles the Red Skins on MNF!!!!!!!



Yo-Tai-Keizuke	Sep 21 2004, 02:56 AM Post #20
H.O.T's Wu Jiok Posts: 8,472 Group: Advanced Members Member #18 Joined: June 23, 2003	I've been laughing so hard, i don't know what's going on. lol As for lady Jiyung, yes you should go to that festival! And, lady Twitty, you're welcome! :)
	"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate


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