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[poem] ~for My Friend's Bd
Topic Started: May 4 2004, 07:31 PM (50 Views)
Naruta-chan
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here's the poem i wrote for her:

Environmental Changes

The Rose has became one with the sun
The snake now has a new coat to wear
The berries, apples, and bananas are ready to be collected
as the rainbow luminates The Fair
Everything has evolved
to greet a fascinating site
The moon has rotated 12 times
And the time finally came
The butterfly left its cocoon just to acknowledge
the evolution of the mouse into the rabbit
Indeed, the time did come
365 days total
She is no longer a mouse
But a beautiful hare

Happy Birthday Amy

by: Valz.h. 05/03/04

any interpretations?
or maybe it's simply straightforward.
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wow, very descriptive! does it mean the changes one makes from the last birthday to this one? a year long? nice job, val! ^_^
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very beautiful poem!!

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Wow. Caught my by surprise, though. I mean, how beautiful it is. As i finished reading, i was like "Awwwwww". In someway, i wished it was longer. :) Still, great job, lady Velerie. I know for sure your friend's going to be feeling very special with your gift. :)
"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val-

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credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling)

Caliente like a volcano
But beautifully bright as the sun
She's my angel sistah
Her name is lady Madison


Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin

Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin)

Hurry now
Don't wait for time to pass you by
Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive
Hurry now
Don't let that someone pass you by
Make the passion esscalate
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aww. . thats really cute!!`
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