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| [poem] ~for My Friend's Bd | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: May 4 2004, 07:31 PM (50 Views) | |
| Naruta-chan | May 4 2004, 07:31 PM Post #1 |
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here's the poem i wrote for her: Environmental Changes The Rose has became one with the sun The snake now has a new coat to wear The berries, apples, and bananas are ready to be collected as the rainbow luminates The Fair Everything has evolved to greet a fascinating site The moon has rotated 12 times And the time finally came The butterfly left its cocoon just to acknowledge the evolution of the mouse into the rabbit Indeed, the time did come 365 days total She is no longer a mouse But a beautiful hare Happy Birthday Amy by: Valz.h. 05/03/04 any interpretations? or maybe it's simply straightforward. |
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| Angel | May 4 2004, 08:48 PM Post #2 |
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C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa))
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wow, very descriptive! does it mean the changes one makes from the last birthday to this one? a year long? nice job, val! ^_^ |
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| Deleted User | May 4 2004, 11:40 PM Post #3 |
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very beautiful poem!! ---splitty |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | May 4 2004, 11:56 PM Post #4 |
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H.O.T's Wu Jiok
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Wow. Caught my by surprise, though. I mean, how beautiful it is. As i finished reading, i was like "Awwwwww". In someway, i wished it was longer. :) Still, great job, lady Velerie. I know for sure your friend's going to be feeling very special with your gift. :) |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| jinnie | May 5 2004, 06:56 AM Post #5 |
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`goodbye...
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aww. . thats really cute!!` |
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