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"happiness"; a poem from a friend
Topic Started: Apr 29 2004, 02:26 AM (91 Views)
Angel
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this poem was written by a friend who would like to remain anonymous. ^_^

HAPPINESS

Come now, don't cry
Look--the sun is rising
Over the horizons
The sky is burning
With a color that is indescribable
It's such a ravishing sight
The sun itself reaching with the light it deems
Making the world bright
Lingering in the sky
And smiling at us from above
Its filling us with warmth
Go outside--it's a must
Happiness is all around
The sun has arisen today
It's shiny rays of light
Growing lighter as it may
Nothing can stop the almighty sun
Not even the Universe itself
For all we know the sun is rare
And we couldn't think of it being somewhere else
Is that all?
You might think so, yes.
But my descriptions
Is not done..yet
Will the sun
One day very soon die
There in the deep dark horizons
It lies
Until the sky turns dark
The sun is always there
Up in the sky, in space
Maintaining it's solar flares
While half our planet sleeps
The other awakes with a yawn
It's a new day everyday
Birds are singing their song
Dawn arises in one place
And dusk awakens in the next
The moon and sun in the sky
They never will ever rest
SO come now, don't cry
It's always going to be a happy day
Keep in mind the sun's always there
And it will always be this way...


....comments anyone?....

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i like it..
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Angel
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i thought it was really nice, it definitely had an upbeat feel to it that projected to the reader very well.

can i get a few more comments? my friend likes doing poetry, and she would like to hear some, good or bad.

...maybe i'll put this in BABBLE...
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Sure puts a smile to my face. The way she describes "Happiness" is very beautiful. As imagined it all, couldn't help to feel uplifted... :)
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thanks for your comments, eva and edwin!

can i get a few more?
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it's good :) I usually right sad poems haha.. but this was different then mine :cool:
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woow. . i like it. =)
tell ur friend it's very gewd angel =) hehe.
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