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| "happiness"; a poem from a friend | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 29 2004, 02:26 AM (91 Views) | |
| Angel | Apr 29 2004, 02:26 AM Post #1 |
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C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa))
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this poem was written by a friend who would like to remain anonymous.
^_^ HAPPINESS Come now, don't cry Look--the sun is rising Over the horizons The sky is burning With a color that is indescribable It's such a ravishing sight The sun itself reaching with the light it deems Making the world bright Lingering in the sky And smiling at us from above Its filling us with warmth Go outside--it's a must Happiness is all around The sun has arisen today It's shiny rays of light Growing lighter as it may Nothing can stop the almighty sun Not even the Universe itself For all we know the sun is rare And we couldn't think of it being somewhere else Is that all? You might think so, yes. But my descriptions Is not done..yet Will the sun One day very soon die There in the deep dark horizons It lies Until the sky turns dark The sun is always there Up in the sky, in space Maintaining it's solar flares While half our planet sleeps The other awakes with a yawn It's a new day everyday Birds are singing their song Dawn arises in one place And dusk awakens in the next The moon and sun in the sky They never will ever rest SO come now, don't cry It's always going to be a happy day Keep in mind the sun's always there And it will always be this way... ....comments anyone?.... |
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| Deleted User | Apr 29 2004, 06:04 PM Post #2 |
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i like it.. |
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| Angel | Apr 29 2004, 06:31 PM Post #3 |
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i thought it was really nice, it definitely had an upbeat feel to it that projected to the reader very well. can i get a few more comments? my friend likes doing poetry, and she would like to hear some, good or bad. ...maybe i'll put this in BABBLE... |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Apr 29 2004, 09:03 PM Post #4 |
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H.O.T's Wu Jiok
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Sure puts a smile to my face. The way she describes "Happiness" is very beautiful. As imagined it all, couldn't help to feel uplifted... :) |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| Angel | May 3 2004, 12:44 AM Post #5 |
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thanks for your comments, eva and edwin! can i get a few more? |
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| AMR | May 3 2004, 01:03 AM Post #6 |
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it's good :) I usually right sad poems haha.. but this was different then mine :cool: |
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| jinnie | May 3 2004, 03:14 AM Post #7 |
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`goodbye...
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woow. . i like it. =) tell ur friend it's very gewd angel =) hehe. |
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