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| Seoul Survivor | May 2 2004, 01:54 AM Post #81 |
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Thanks Jay!
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Thanks for watching the film Edwin!! I greatly appreciate that, and certainly thank you for your respect! In very basic terms, what the film, and what I are saying, is "Don't let your life be average." Go Beyond. Remember the line from the film "Most men live lives of quiet desparation." That is so incredibly true. "The cat sat on the mat". That's average poetry. DO NOT BE AVERAGE/ORDINARY. 100% of my criticism of your poetry is not because is it BAD, it is because it is "The cat sat on the mat". It is aveerage. And I KNOW YOU can do more!!!!!!!!!. //Seoul Oh Captain, My Captain!!!! "Gotta Do More, Gotta Be More" |
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