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Vic, i challenge you!; To a freestyle battle! It's WAR!
Topic Started: Mar 29 2004, 01:40 AM (630 Views)
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missing yoOh <3*

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daywalker2k2
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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hehe thanks sarah, i try :) At least i made a pretty girl smile. that is always good ;)
Thanks mal :) oh and about that question i try to rap it :)
Thanks vic i am taking on the suppodesly the man here ;) And also thanks angelo :) as for you edwin..i see you recharged your poem and wrote another one..i see well then here i go again

Me followed by cops
please edwin around here they are called clops
me pray
come one now i got to stay
who said this was a game
why are you so ashamed
to be looking at the hall of fame
listen one more time
you little dime
soo is mine and so is shoo
so why do you just get out of her and take a poo ;)
or maybe you need to buy a clue
me wearing a ring
yeah but that just means i am just the king
give it up
or go to the kitchen and get a cup
drink it and then think about getting a pup
cause man you should retire
and just chill by the fire.

I am Marbin and i am out.. :)
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Yo-Tai-Keizuke
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Marbin Marbin Marbin
One could easily confuse you with Calvin
Who am I talking about?
A celebrity unlike you no doubt
But, Marbin have you been listening to yourself?
Are you alone in that room with nobody else?
I ask cause you’re playing my game
I speak, you play the same
I mean, are you in my head?
You’re saying the same things I said
Shouldn’t you try to come up with something new?
I don’t need help, you do
It’s true
No, I can’t lie
Heck even if I tried

Glad you made someone smile
It’s been a while
That’s less than I can say for you
Heck, it’s even a miracle that you knew
After all, you are a music composer am I right?
Yeah, you alright
Wish I could say more when you’re with Shoo holding each other tight
But, lady Twitty, you were correct
And, how could Shoo forget?
I mean, I too never thought he had it in
Funny, Shoo said the same thing
"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val-

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Caliente like a volcano
But beautifully bright as the sun
She's my angel sistah
Her name is lady Madison


Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin

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Hurry now
Don't wait for time to pass you by
Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive
Hurry now
Don't let that someone pass you by
Make the passion esscalate
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chee -- cina
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O.o . . . makin' me dizzy . . . all these poems . . . verries kyutes and goods! hope everything works out for u vic (i'm behind as u can see :D) . . . no more poems! i'm already dizzy . . . O.o

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BUT ORIGINALLY
--Chee.
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Yo-Tai-Keizuke
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Sorry, lady Cina. Just take your time when reading our freestyle poems, don't rush it. And, you know something, i think i know Vic, okay i do. lol He says he's had it with poetry yet he aplauded Marbin when he did his thing, therefore i figure out, there's only one kind of poetry he can withstand and that's any or by any who's saying something against me in a funny way. lol
"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val-

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Caliente like a volcano
But beautifully bright as the sun
She's my angel sistah
Her name is lady Madison


Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin

Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin)

Hurry now
Don't wait for time to pass you by
Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive
Hurry now
Don't let that someone pass you by
Make the passion esscalate
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Seoul Survivor
Thanks Jay!
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Oh GAWD, now we have TWO of them doing this. We really need SOAP to clean this place up!!!

//Seoul
Tune into your Evil Side. The reception is better!!
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Seoul Survivor
Mar 31 2004, 08:05 PM
Oh GAWD, now we have TWO of them doing this. We really need SOAP to clean this place up!!!

//Seoul
Tune into your Evil Side. The reception is better!!

Vic, are you going to make one for Mabin too?

Puahaha. I like to rap to it, I think I can get it better that way. lol. Edwin and Marbin battle it out to see who rules when it comes to this. lol.


-Mal
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Seoul Survivor
Thanks Jay!
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Yeah, Mal, which ever one wins, their title will be SUPREME AWFUL POETRY KOMMANDER [/span] Wouldn't that look nice on a business card?? The looser will be SUPREME AWFUL POETRY ASSISTANT...
Actually Mal, I don't think I will do anything against Marbin. He's picking up the axe to defeat Edwin's awful poetry.

//Seou
GO MARBIN!!!!!!!!!
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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hehe i see well then time to fire back

You know edwin you are crazy
but hey some people call you lazy
the question is have you been listening to your self
cause you write like a elf
Yeah i am playing the game to win
not like you..you play like a peace of tin
all rolled up in ball waiting to come out
man is that stain on your shirt better get shout
Whose is in whose head
keep talking and your new nick is going to be ted :)
i told you edwin go to bed
dream and you might think about getting some lead
something new
if fixing to be apon you
so watch out edwin or i might pawn you
yes i am a music composer at heart
unlike you, you eat pop tarts
One more time you mention shoo
and i am going to give your eyes the big blue
this is so true
once again want to buy a clue
or maybe you would like a see a cue
If you are smart enough you would give
but knowing you, you are going to forgive
i dont forget and i dont plan too
once again my girl's name fixing to be named shoo
so give up the crown
or you may frown
working at burger king does not make you a king
unless you think the toys at buger king are bling bling


Hehe now what edwin :) Yeah :) Mal what is vic going to make me???

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oh boy! what's with you two?
I'm not coming back. For my own reaons....
I'll protect my friends from a CERTAIN person on the site here.
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Puahaha. Whoa, Marbin. That was pretty good. I give you props!! Oh, Vic isn't going to do anything only because you're the one who's going to get rid of Edwin's poetry, according to him. =D

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oh boy! what's with you two?

It's called insanity.


-Mal[/SMALL]
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You know what, Marbin? You're right
Your predictions followed me tonight
I was just trying to hold SooJin tight
When all of a sudden i felt like "this is not alright!"
Had to hold SooJin even tighter cause she was scared with fright
Little did she now i'd soon put an end to her darkness with my light
To think i almost had a fight
If i had not listened to my friend, i would've taken a huge bite
But, he could never measured up to my height
I'm the sun and he's the moon by night
Compared in size, i sure am a prettier sight
Although is alot safer at night to ride a kite
Wait, it sin't...it's quite...
Deadly...well...be, it might
And, yeah, i be having a blue eye while he be completely white

And, lady Madison, it's all in good fun! lol
"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val-

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credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling)

Caliente like a volcano
But beautifully bright as the sun
She's my angel sistah
Her name is lady Madison


Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin

Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin)

Hurry now
Don't wait for time to pass you by
Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive
Hurry now
Don't let that someone pass you by
Make the passion esscalate
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I told you edwin to watch out
seems like you took my advice and you alright
but that does not mean i am going to let you out my sight
this may be my chance to take flight
vic says i am going to take you out..vic
you sure you dont want a shoo pic
and no it is not safe to fly in a kite
unless you know something about tonite
so lets get this straight i am the teacher
and you are more like a preacher
just talking this and that
and no you are not that phat ;)
who is calling it quits
come on edwin trip and fall in the pitts
for vic i got my axes
but hold up and got to fill out my taxes :)

Yeah madison it is all fun..you know run and gun :)

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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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Thanks sarah i think we do this better when there is a pretty girl like you around us ;)
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^^ PUAHAHAHA. That was funny.

hmm...very nice. Although, some parts didn't actually make any sense.


-Mal
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sure it did some of it was inside stuff between me and edwin :)
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Apr 3 2004, 05:32 AM
Thanks sarah i think we do this better when there is a pretty girl like you around us ;)

awwwiez thanq' =) :love:
missing yoOh <3*

i go by__mz.sarah

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Thanks Jay!
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Quote Mal=
... Although, some parts didn't actually make any sense.


-Mal

SOME parts?? Like EVERYTHING from the beginning to their signatures.....

WE go from one eruption of Awful poetry to another eruption of awful poetry. IF Robert Frost were to read any of this, he'd shoot himself.....

These guys poetry isn't ART work, it's F@RT work.....

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^ Puahhaha. I can always count on you for a good laugh, Vic. lol..


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