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| Vic, i challenge you!; To a freestyle battle! It's WAR! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 29 2004, 01:40 AM (630 Views) | |
| OnE LovE OnE LyfE | Mar 31 2004, 04:27 PM Post #21 |
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Missing yoOh <3*
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..... :woohoo: |
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missing yoOh <3* i go by__mz.sarah aZnality__KorEan repPin thE 7o3 AIM: MisS Ador4abLe MSN: SweetDreamzz_4u@hotmail.com I Love.. KMR | |
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| daywalker2k2 | Mar 31 2004, 04:53 PM Post #22 |
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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hehe thanks sarah, i try
:) At least i made a pretty girl smile. that is always good ;) Thanks mal :) oh and about that question i try to rap it :) Thanks vic i am taking on the suppodesly the man here ;) And also thanks angelo :) as for you edwin..i see you recharged your poem and wrote another one..i see well then here i go again Me followed by cops please edwin around here they are called clops me pray come one now i got to stay who said this was a game why are you so ashamed to be looking at the hall of fame listen one more time you little dime soo is mine and so is shoo so why do you just get out of her and take a poo ;) or maybe you need to buy a clue me wearing a ring yeah but that just means i am just the king give it up or go to the kitchen and get a cup drink it and then think about getting a pup cause man you should retire and just chill by the fire. I am Marbin and i am out.. :) |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Mar 31 2004, 07:52 PM Post #23 |
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H.O.T's Wu Jiok
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Marbin Marbin Marbin One could easily confuse you with Calvin Who am I talking about? A celebrity unlike you no doubt But, Marbin have you been listening to yourself? Are you alone in that room with nobody else? I ask cause you’re playing my game I speak, you play the same I mean, are you in my head? You’re saying the same things I said Shouldn’t you try to come up with something new? I don’t need help, you do It’s true No, I can’t lie Heck even if I tried Glad you made someone smile It’s been a while That’s less than I can say for you Heck, it’s even a miracle that you knew After all, you are a music composer am I right? Yeah, you alright Wish I could say more when you’re with Shoo holding each other tight But, lady Twitty, you were correct And, how could Shoo forget? I mean, I too never thought he had it in Funny, Shoo said the same thing |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| BUDDiE | Mar 31 2004, 07:57 PM Post #24 |
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chee -- cina
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@@ O.o . . . makin' me dizzy . . . all these poems . . . verries kyutes and goods! hope everything works out for u vic (i'm behind as u can see :D) . . . no more poems! i'm already dizzy . . . O.o @@ CiNa |
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--Cina. BUT ORIGINALLY --Chee. | |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Mar 31 2004, 09:44 PM Post #25 |
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H.O.T's Wu Jiok
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Sorry, lady Cina. Just take your time when reading our freestyle poems, don't rush it. And, you know something, i think i know Vic, okay i do. lol He says he's had it with poetry yet he aplauded Marbin when he did his thing, therefore i figure out, there's only one kind of poetry he can withstand and that's any or by any who's saying something against me in a funny way. lol |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| Seoul Survivor | Mar 31 2004, 10:05 PM Post #26 |
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Thanks Jay!
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Oh GAWD, now we have TWO of them doing this. We really need SOAP to clean this place up!!! //Seoul Tune into your Evil Side. The reception is better!! |
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| SCORE* | Mar 31 2004, 10:23 PM Post #27 |
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iamcool.
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Vic, are you going to make one for Mabin too? Puahaha. I like to rap to it, I think I can get it better that way. lol. Edwin and Marbin battle it out to see who rules when it comes to this. lol. -Mal |
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| Seoul Survivor | Mar 31 2004, 10:34 PM Post #28 |
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Thanks Jay!
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Yeah, Mal, which ever one wins, their title will be SUPREME AWFUL POETRY KOMMANDER [/span] Wouldn't that look nice on a business card?? The looser will be SUPREME AWFUL POETRY ASSISTANT... Actually Mal, I don't think I will do anything against Marbin. He's picking up the axe to defeat Edwin's awful poetry. //Seou GO MARBIN!!!!!!!!! |
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| daywalker2k2 | Apr 1 2004, 04:31 PM Post #29 |
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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hehe i see well then time to fire back You know edwin you are crazy but hey some people call you lazy the question is have you been listening to your self cause you write like a elf Yeah i am playing the game to win not like you..you play like a peace of tin all rolled up in ball waiting to come out man is that stain on your shirt better get shout Whose is in whose head keep talking and your new nick is going to be ted :) i told you edwin go to bed dream and you might think about getting some lead something new if fixing to be apon you so watch out edwin or i might pawn you yes i am a music composer at heart unlike you, you eat pop tarts One more time you mention shoo and i am going to give your eyes the big blue this is so true once again want to buy a clue or maybe you would like a see a cue If you are smart enough you would give but knowing you, you are going to forgive i dont forget and i dont plan too once again my girl's name fixing to be named shoo so give up the crown or you may frown working at burger king does not make you a king unless you think the toys at buger king are bling bling Hehe now what edwin :) Yeah :) Mal what is vic going to make me??? |
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| xCastleOutsider | Apr 1 2004, 04:59 PM Post #30 |
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Freaky
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oh boy! what's with you two? |
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I'm not coming back. For my own reaons.... I'll protect my friends from a CERTAIN person on the site here. | |
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| SCORE* | Apr 1 2004, 07:31 PM Post #31 |
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iamcool.
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Puahaha. Whoa, Marbin. That was pretty good. I give you props!! Oh, Vic isn't going to do anything only because you're the one who's going to get rid of Edwin's poetry, according to him. =D
It's called insanity. -Mal[/SMALL] |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Apr 1 2004, 08:15 PM Post #32 |
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H.O.T's Wu Jiok
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You know what, Marbin? You're right Your predictions followed me tonight I was just trying to hold SooJin tight When all of a sudden i felt like "this is not alright!" Had to hold SooJin even tighter cause she was scared with fright Little did she now i'd soon put an end to her darkness with my light To think i almost had a fight If i had not listened to my friend, i would've taken a huge bite But, he could never measured up to my height I'm the sun and he's the moon by night Compared in size, i sure am a prettier sight Although is alot safer at night to ride a kite Wait, it sin't...it's quite... Deadly...well...be, it might And, yeah, i be having a blue eye while he be completely white And, lady Madison, it's all in good fun! lol |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| daywalker2k2 | Apr 2 2004, 04:17 PM Post #33 |
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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I told you edwin to watch out seems like you took my advice and you alright but that does not mean i am going to let you out my sight this may be my chance to take flight vic says i am going to take you out..vic you sure you dont want a shoo pic and no it is not safe to fly in a kite unless you know something about tonite so lets get this straight i am the teacher and you are more like a preacher just talking this and that and no you are not that phat ;) who is calling it quits come on edwin trip and fall in the pitts for vic i got my axes but hold up and got to fill out my taxes :) Yeah madison it is all fun..you know run and gun :) |
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| OnE LovE OnE LyfE | Apr 2 2004, 04:23 PM Post #34 |
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Missing yoOh <3*
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.... :woohoo: ..... :woohoo: ..... :woooohoooo: ..... :yayaya: ..... :woooohoooo: .......... YOOH GUYS ARE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!~!!!!!!!!!!~!!!!!!!!!!~ |
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missing yoOh <3* i go by__mz.sarah aZnality__KorEan repPin thE 7o3 AIM: MisS Ador4abLe MSN: SweetDreamzz_4u@hotmail.com I Love.. KMR | |
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| daywalker2k2 | Apr 2 2004, 04:32 PM Post #35 |
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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Thanks sarah i think we do this better when there is a pretty girl like you around us ;) |
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| SCORE* | Apr 2 2004, 06:20 PM Post #36 |
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iamcool.
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^^ PUAHAHAHA. That was funny. hmm...very nice. Although, some parts didn't actually make any sense. -Mal |
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| daywalker2k2 | Apr 2 2004, 06:28 PM Post #37 |
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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sure it did some of it was inside stuff between me and edwin :) |
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| OnE LovE OnE LyfE | Apr 2 2004, 07:14 PM Post #38 |
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Missing yoOh <3*
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awwwiez thanq' =) :love: |
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missing yoOh <3* i go by__mz.sarah aZnality__KorEan repPin thE 7o3 AIM: MisS Ador4abLe MSN: SweetDreamzz_4u@hotmail.com I Love.. KMR | |
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| Seoul Survivor | Apr 2 2004, 10:31 PM Post #39 |
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Thanks Jay!
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Quote Mal= ... Although, some parts didn't actually make any sense. -Mal SOME parts?? Like EVERYTHING from the beginning to their signatures..... WE go from one eruption of Awful poetry to another eruption of awful poetry. IF Robert Frost were to read any of this, he'd shoot himself..... These guys poetry isn't ART work, it's F@RT work..... //Seoul |
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| SCORE* | Apr 3 2004, 01:20 AM Post #40 |
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iamcool.
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^ Puahhaha. I can always count on you for a good laugh, Vic. lol.. -Mal |
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