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Vic, i challenge you!; To a freestyle battle! It's WAR!
Topic Started: Mar 29 2004, 01:40 AM (627 Views)
Yo-Tai-Keizuke
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Hey buddy, i told you the war was on! Here, let's proove who shall emerge victorious! lol

There's this girl whom Vic love
To him she fell from heaven above
Though unaware to Vic
What fell was quite big
God's aim was a little off

A little closer, it might've broken his chilito (little...you know lol)
Had it hit target, he's pain would've stayed infinito (infinitely)
Now i don't mean big as in size
Just thank God he wasn't scared for life
Wait, wasn't God...? Vic run rapidito! (quickly)

I just don't know what drives this man crazy
Perhaps' the 70s didn't do much for this baby
I can imagine him dancing with his afro
Conquering the ladies while dancing tango
Most likely that's what has this man all hazy

Isn't Vic so nice?
He is, he's worth any price
Then again, that's not what his wife
Say or think twice
Before stabbing her husband with a knife

Through all in all, Vic, he's my friend
A real friend to the end
Just you guys wait till we meet
Thank him i'll do and greet
Beat his A$$ up, i'll keep doing so again and again

lol Let's see what you got, boy!
"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val-

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Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin

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Don't wait for time to pass you by
Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive
Hurry now
Don't let that someone pass you by
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Seoul Survivor
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OMG, I have no idea how to reply to that. You want a POETRY WAR??? Isn't that sort of like chucking powder-puffs at each other from ten paces??

Hmmmmmmm......

Edwin, Edwin's not a bad gayo
He's just lacking in much sty-o
From time to time he's a total pendajo
But from his Burger King time, he sniffed too much Mayo,

Often times he thinks he hana
But me, I thinks, he eat only bananna
He never sez "chiliahmnida"
Only I hear is "aqui, mia"

So our amigo is not a total looser,
At least, by now, he's not a boozer
Quite often, he sits and watches the bada
and waxes poetically, is his usual moda.

So what do these awful stanza all have in common? They EACH contain words from THREE languages.
#1 Korean--> Gayo is star
#2 Korean-->Chilihamnida is excuse me, hana is 1st
#3 Korean Bada (pronounced bO-duh) is Sea.



Best That, Poetry boy! And remember, we're playing on YOUR TURF. Next war, will be who can fix 50,000watt transmitters faster!

//Seoul
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Yo-Tai-Keizuke
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I'll admit, that was slick
But i'm sorry, Vic
You made my dog sick
With that magic stick
Vic sure has a Vic dream
Ladies, y'all know what i mean

Sugar, Vic adores
Can't blame him, they're gorgeously four
But one day he met up with one
Needless to say, he had to run
Why? He crossed the line, but Sugar won

I think Vic's lucky to inpart knowledge still
He so often re-fills
Cause he knows if he doesn't
he'll get a kick in the reer-end
Leaving him screwed up and ill

Vic always sounds happy
That's because the latin ladies call him papi
To be exact, Papi chulo
That's only before they see his sexy culo
Afterwards is...daddy!

HAHA what a good friend he is
Me and him on a date, we would kiss
Share conversation like a memory bliss
At the end of the day, he be mine and i be his

LOL
"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val-

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Caliente like a volcano
But beautifully bright as the sun
She's my angel sistah
Her name is lady Madison


Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin

Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin)

Hurry now
Don't wait for time to pass you by
Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive
Hurry now
Don't let that someone pass you by
Make the passion esscalate
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Seoul Survivor
Thanks Jay!
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OK, Edwin,
I'm no poet,
And I know it.


You win.

//Seoul
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Lmao. A war between you two? Nice. You gave up already, Vic? You have to represent that you're truly EVIL!! lol...But it's all good. Takes a better man to put his foot down.

Seriously, I didn't get half the things you guys wrote about. lol...


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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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hehe now dont make my free flow side come out..
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Seoul Survivor
Thanks Jay!
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Forgive me guys. I'm just really busy right now, and can't concentrate enough on this to do it right. (We're trying to buy a house, I'm trying to get Radio Korea on the air by April 9th, I have a big radio project that has only a few weeks left, and work has been h3ll. So I'm having trouble concentrating on this sort of fun stuff.) Besides, I'm no poet, not at all.
I know, I have been beating up a lot on Edwin, lately. and this is a sort of chicken $#!T way out. I do appologize. Give me a chance to let the dust settle, and then Edwin, we'll have a great time at this!!

//Seoul
Evil WILL triumph!!!
Marbin, what is a "free flow side"?? Have you been staring in porn movies, and not telling us??
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Mar 29 2004, 07:39 PM
//Seoul
Evil WILL triumph!!!
Marbin, what is a "free flow side"?? Have you been staring in porn movies, and not telling us??

haha i have not comment to the "free flow side" comment of urs... >.<


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Thanks Jay!
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Thanks Binh, Zall good!

//Seoul
Good Sucks, GO EVIL!!
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Mar 30 2004, 11:57 AM
Thanks Binh, Zall good!

//Seoul
Good Sucks, GO EVIL!!

aww hope everyting works out too =) good luck :love:

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Thanks Jay!
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Thanks, Sarah, very much!!

//Seoul
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That's ok Vic, take your time and come back were you're 100% ready, otherwise, it wouldn't be fair. :) Besides, i got a new victim... muahahahahaha! lol

What's that, Marbin? Please boy, you got no skillz! Oh, well, want to proove to me that you do? Then show me!

Marbin, the latin lover
Or should i say Marbin Glover?
Yeah, his name rhymes with green goo
Oh, wait that was Flubber...not you
HAHA wasn't that funny?
What you gonnna do honey?
Nah, don't get it mixed
Instead, get it fixed
Cause you sure can't outdo me
I'm the masta MC
Labeled the mighty E-D!
So, please, Marbin, save it for another show
You aint got flow
Your just one of the few
Who thinks he's hot and new
Therefore, don't mess with my YG family crew

Okay okay, i'll be fair
The spotlight i'll share
Marbin, let's see what you got
Doubtful is going to be hot
Shine it won't not
Cause flow you don't have a lot
Most likely your rhymes are just goign to rot
Before they reach outer space
So, untill your ready, don't show your face
Just prepare and calculate
Cordinate
Or it won't be great

LOL!!!!!

Lady Sarah, you want to learn? Cool. It's easy. Just try to think of words that rhyme and put them in a way that make sense, try it. Now, making it funny is very hard, though it seems like is easy for Vic. C'mon, i want to see you do it! :)
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Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin

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Hurry now
Don't wait for time to pass you by
Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive
Hurry now
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oh ok i see how it is edwin..let me brew something up and beat you down..vic a porn movie.. hehe now that is comedy :)
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Here i go

Edwin is a latin lover
some may call him the next danny glover
but wait edwin aint black so i might be blowing his cover
you say my name ryhmes with goo
i might be going out a with a girl named soo :)
is it funny
my girlfriend might as well be called a playboy bunny
i think edwin has a sister
that seems to have a blister
or maybe that is edwanda
just saying nanda (what in jap)
You say i cant out do you
and yet i might sue you
save it for another show?
please edwin i got a car that can tow
Some people say you got skills..
who cares i got green bills
Now my boy comes from puerto rico
so does that mean you have a dog named tiko
Some might say not too bad for a first try
please people dont make me cry :p

Hehe that is all i could come up right of my top of my head ;)





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Mar 31 2004, 07:25 AM

Some people say you got skills..
who cares i got green bills

lmao tat is soooooo funnie!!! omfg Marbin yoor realli good!! i like it!!
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You know something Marbin? THAT was pretty good. I could not have done as well!! Welcome to our group!!

Edwin=Edwinda=Edwana. Just like a boil on your butt.
IF he had a sister, she committed suicide, YEARS ago. 2 or 3 of Edwin's poems at a young age, would have done her in.


//Seoul
The EVIL EMPIRE is recharging...


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Not bad, Marbin. Never knew you had it in you. I wonder how you guys read these. Do you read them as poems? Meaning you just read them or do you read them like your rapping?

I find them more interesting when you're trying to rap them out.


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Whoa!
Impressed, bro!
Gotta give you props!
And hope you're aren't followed by cops
Cause that miracle you pulled off
Will sure be enough
To have you praying
That you stop playing
This aint a kid's game!
It's the real thing, what a shame!
Such talent unapproved
Heck, even Soo would disaproove
Also, you sue me?
Please, go ahead Marbee
This aint something
You can just wave a wand and win
It's more like a one in a lifetime thing
But, don't speak to soon or you'll be wearing the ring
No not precious
And it aint locious
Nor vicious
It's actually the ring to your demise
What you surrpise?
Well Sophie aint
Though i'd faint
To see you smiling
While doing the Marbin Gave thing

And, about Soo
I got ma baby tame, don't you?
I mean, yours
As in your shores
Ooh, my bad, i meant Shoo
You know what, i've been dating someone too
Want to know who?
I don't know, i don't feel well...*ASHOO!*

But, yeah, Marbin, that was really good. But, not good enough, after all, you're dealing with the master here. lol

As for your question, lady Twitty, these ones i'd like to read then as raps. Poems are beautiful, freestyle rhymes are silly and funny for me.
"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val-

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Caliente like a volcano
But beautifully bright as the sun
She's my angel sistah
Her name is lady Madison


Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin

Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin)

Hurry now
Don't wait for time to pass you by
Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive
Hurry now
Don't let that someone pass you by
Make the passion esscalate
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