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| Vic, i challenge you!; To a freestyle battle! It's WAR! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 29 2004, 01:40 AM (625 Views) | |
| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Mar 29 2004, 01:40 AM Post #1 |
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H.O.T's Wu Jiok
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Hey buddy, i told you the war was on! Here, let's proove who shall emerge victorious! lol There's this girl whom Vic love To him she fell from heaven above Though unaware to Vic What fell was quite big God's aim was a little off A little closer, it might've broken his chilito (little...you know lol) Had it hit target, he's pain would've stayed infinito (infinitely) Now i don't mean big as in size Just thank God he wasn't scared for life Wait, wasn't God...? Vic run rapidito! (quickly) I just don't know what drives this man crazy Perhaps' the 70s didn't do much for this baby I can imagine him dancing with his afro Conquering the ladies while dancing tango Most likely that's what has this man all hazy Isn't Vic so nice? He is, he's worth any price Then again, that's not what his wife Say or think twice Before stabbing her husband with a knife Through all in all, Vic, he's my friend A real friend to the end Just you guys wait till we meet Thank him i'll do and greet Beat his A$$ up, i'll keep doing so again and again lol Let's see what you got, boy! |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| Seoul Survivor | Mar 29 2004, 01:56 AM Post #2 |
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Thanks Jay!
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OMG, I have no idea how to reply to that. You want a POETRY WAR??? Isn't that sort of like chucking powder-puffs at each other from ten paces?? Hmmmmmmm...... Edwin, Edwin's not a bad gayo He's just lacking in much sty-o From time to time he's a total pendajo But from his Burger King time, he sniffed too much Mayo, Often times he thinks he hana But me, I thinks, he eat only bananna He never sez "chiliahmnida" Only I hear is "aqui, mia" So our amigo is not a total looser, At least, by now, he's not a boozer Quite often, he sits and watches the bada and waxes poetically, is his usual moda. So what do these awful stanza all have in common? They EACH contain words from THREE languages. #1 Korean--> Gayo is star #2 Korean-->Chilihamnida is excuse me, hana is 1st #3 Korean Bada (pronounced bO-duh) is Sea. Best That, Poetry boy! And remember, we're playing on YOUR TURF. Next war, will be who can fix 50,000watt transmitters faster! //Seoul |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Mar 29 2004, 02:30 AM Post #3 |
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H.O.T's Wu Jiok
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I'll admit, that was slick But i'm sorry, Vic You made my dog sick With that magic stick Vic sure has a Vic dream Ladies, y'all know what i mean Sugar, Vic adores Can't blame him, they're gorgeously four But one day he met up with one Needless to say, he had to run Why? He crossed the line, but Sugar won I think Vic's lucky to inpart knowledge still He so often re-fills Cause he knows if he doesn't he'll get a kick in the reer-end Leaving him screwed up and ill Vic always sounds happy That's because the latin ladies call him papi To be exact, Papi chulo That's only before they see his sexy culo Afterwards is...daddy! HAHA what a good friend he is Me and him on a date, we would kiss Share conversation like a memory bliss At the end of the day, he be mine and i be his LOL |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| Seoul Survivor | Mar 29 2004, 12:19 PM Post #4 |
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Thanks Jay!
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OK, Edwin, I'm no poet, And I know it. You win. //Seoul |
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| SCORE* | Mar 29 2004, 02:33 PM Post #5 |
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iamcool.
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Lmao. A war between you two? Nice. You gave up already, Vic? You have to represent that you're truly EVIL!! lol...But it's all good. Takes a better man to put his foot down. Seriously, I didn't get half the things you guys wrote about. lol... -Mal |
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| daywalker2k2 | Mar 29 2004, 03:52 PM Post #6 |
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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hehe now dont make my free flow side come out.. |
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| OnE LovE OnE LyfE | Mar 29 2004, 06:30 PM Post #7 |
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Missing yoOh <3*
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ooo :woohoo: tas soooooooooooooooo coo! :woohoo: :woohoo: i wanna learn!!!!! |
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missing yoOh <3* i go by__mz.sarah aZnality__KorEan repPin thE 7o3 AIM: MisS Ador4abLe MSN: SweetDreamzz_4u@hotmail.com I Love.. KMR | |
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| Seoul Survivor | Mar 29 2004, 09:39 PM Post #8 |
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Thanks Jay!
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Forgive me guys. I'm just really busy right now, and can't concentrate enough on this to do it right. (We're trying to buy a house, I'm trying to get Radio Korea on the air by April 9th, I have a big radio project that has only a few weeks left, and work has been h3ll. So I'm having trouble concentrating on this sort of fun stuff.) Besides, I'm no poet, not at all. I know, I have been beating up a lot on Edwin, lately. and this is a sort of chicken $#!T way out. I do appologize. Give me a chance to let the dust settle, and then Edwin, we'll have a great time at this!! //Seoul Evil WILL triumph!!! Marbin, what is a "free flow side"?? Have you been staring in porn movies, and not telling us?? |
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| Binh | Mar 29 2004, 09:47 PM Post #9 |
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<('.'<) <('-')> (>',')>
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haha i have not comment to the "free flow side" comment of urs... >.< hope everything work out ^_^ |
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Life Changes... But memories are forever Never forget the things you've experienced; always remember them. Refuse to forget them, and apply the lessons you've learned to your life. Lastly, share them, for they are something no money can buy... Be who you are, and say what you feel, 'cuz those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind. ~ Dr. Seuss Instant Message me on AIM whenever you are bored, I love chatting with people
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| Seoul Survivor | Mar 29 2004, 10:57 PM Post #10 |
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Thanks Jay!
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Thanks Binh, Zall good! //Seoul Good Sucks, GO EVIL!! |
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| OnE LovE OnE LyfE | Mar 29 2004, 11:08 PM Post #11 |
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Missing yoOh <3*
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aww hope everyting works out too =) good luck :love: |
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missing yoOh <3* i go by__mz.sarah aZnality__KorEan repPin thE 7o3 AIM: MisS Ador4abLe MSN: SweetDreamzz_4u@hotmail.com I Love.. KMR | |
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| Seoul Survivor | Mar 29 2004, 11:59 PM Post #12 |
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Thanks Jay!
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Thanks, Sarah, very much!! //Seoul |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Mar 30 2004, 04:45 AM Post #13 |
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H.O.T's Wu Jiok
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That's ok Vic, take your time and come back were you're 100% ready, otherwise, it wouldn't be fair.
:) Besides, i got a new victim... muahahahahaha! lol What's that, Marbin? Please boy, you got no skillz! Oh, well, want to proove to me that you do? Then show me! Marbin, the latin lover Or should i say Marbin Glover? Yeah, his name rhymes with green goo Oh, wait that was Flubber...not you HAHA wasn't that funny? What you gonnna do honey? Nah, don't get it mixed Instead, get it fixed Cause you sure can't outdo me I'm the masta MC Labeled the mighty E-D! So, please, Marbin, save it for another show You aint got flow Your just one of the few Who thinks he's hot and new Therefore, don't mess with my YG family crew Okay okay, i'll be fair The spotlight i'll share Marbin, let's see what you got Doubtful is going to be hot Shine it won't not Cause flow you don't have a lot Most likely your rhymes are just goign to rot Before they reach outer space So, untill your ready, don't show your face Just prepare and calculate Cordinate Or it won't be great LOL!!!!! Lady Sarah, you want to learn? Cool. It's easy. Just try to think of words that rhyme and put them in a way that make sense, try it. Now, making it funny is very hard, though it seems like is easy for Vic. C'mon, i want to see you do it! :) |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| daywalker2k2 | Mar 30 2004, 06:01 PM Post #14 |
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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oh ok i see how it is edwin..let me brew something up and beat you down..vic a porn movie.. hehe now that is comedy :) |
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| daywalker2k2 | Mar 30 2004, 06:25 PM Post #15 |
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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Here i go Edwin is a latin lover some may call him the next danny glover but wait edwin aint black so i might be blowing his cover you say my name ryhmes with goo i might be going out a with a girl named soo :) is it funny my girlfriend might as well be called a playboy bunny i think edwin has a sister that seems to have a blister or maybe that is edwanda just saying nanda (what in jap) You say i cant out do you and yet i might sue you save it for another show? please edwin i got a car that can tow Some people say you got skills.. who cares i got green bills Now my boy comes from puerto rico so does that mean you have a dog named tiko Some might say not too bad for a first try please people dont make me cry :p Hehe that is all i could come up right of my top of my head ;) |
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| OnE LovE OnE LyfE | Mar 30 2004, 07:55 PM Post #16 |
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Missing yoOh <3*
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lmao tat is soooooo funnie!!! omfg Marbin yoor realli good!! i like it!! |
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missing yoOh <3* i go by__mz.sarah aZnality__KorEan repPin thE 7o3 AIM: MisS Ador4abLe MSN: SweetDreamzz_4u@hotmail.com I Love.. KMR | |
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| Seoul Survivor | Mar 31 2004, 02:01 AM Post #17 |
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Thanks Jay!
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You know something Marbin? THAT was pretty good. I could not have done as well!! Welcome to our group!! Edwin=Edwinda=Edwana. Just like a boil on your butt. IF he had a sister, she committed suicide, YEARS ago. 2 or 3 of Edwin's poems at a young age, would have done her in. //Seoul The EVIL EMPIRE is recharging... |
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| SCORE* | Mar 31 2004, 02:28 AM Post #18 |
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iamcool.
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Not bad, Marbin. Never knew you had it in you. I wonder how you guys read these. Do you read them as poems? Meaning you just read them or do you read them like your rapping? I find them more interesting when you're trying to rap them out. -Mal |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Mar 31 2004, 07:41 AM Post #19 |
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Whoa! Impressed, bro! Gotta give you props! And hope you're aren't followed by cops Cause that miracle you pulled off Will sure be enough To have you praying That you stop playing This aint a kid's game! It's the real thing, what a shame! Such talent unapproved Heck, even Soo would disaproove Also, you sue me? Please, go ahead Marbee This aint something You can just wave a wand and win It's more like a one in a lifetime thing But, don't speak to soon or you'll be wearing the ring No not precious And it aint locious Nor vicious It's actually the ring to your demise What you surrpise? Well Sophie aint Though i'd faint To see you smiling While doing the Marbin Gave thing And, about Soo I got ma baby tame, don't you? I mean, yours As in your shores Ooh, my bad, i meant Shoo You know what, i've been dating someone too Want to know who? I don't know, i don't feel well...*ASHOO!* But, yeah, Marbin, that was really good. But, not good enough, after all, you're dealing with the master here. lol As for your question, lady Twitty, these ones i'd like to read then as raps. Poems are beautiful, freestyle rhymes are silly and funny for me. |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| Angel | Mar 31 2004, 02:37 PM Post #20 |
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C_Beyond ((chunsa oppa))
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U BoyZ GoTs MAdd sKiLls!!! |
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