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| To Soo Jin and lady Sophia; Poem dedications :) | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 10 2003, 06:49 AM (330 Views) | |
| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Dec 10 2003, 06:49 AM Post #1 |
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Yes, I dedicated two poems for Soo Jin and Sophia, one for each and one for both. Since I wrote these poems, I immediately wanted to share it with you guys, though had not done so till now. Reason why is because we all love Revolution and in a sense we’re part of it, so I figured, it be just as fair for you guys to read this. Let’s begin how I got to three poems. It all started one day before going to sleep. I was very tired and I swear, one more blink and I would’ve fell asleep. But, right then the thought of Soo Jin burst into my head and decided to write her a poem out of pure fun. Though, as I was writing hers, I thought, it wouldn’t be fair if Soo Jin got one and lady Sophia didn’t, so I decided to write her one also. And, again, I felt like “Well, what if I dedicate another to both?” and that’s how I ended up with three. I sent the poems the poem to Revolution, but I didn’t say who I was, just that that the poems were written by the e-mailer. I didn’t mention my name in hope that it made the ladies feel more special knowing an unknown stranger wrote these beautiful words. But, the number one reason I did so was the hope that I’d get to see the ladies on the show asking who did. Although, it’s just a dream of mine and I be satisfied completely knowing the ladies loved the poems. Believe it or not, before posting this thread, three hours before, I got dizzy almost to the point where my mom wanted to take me to the hospital… What caused it you ask? Perhaps my monitor, what I ate for dinner, or the thought of Soo Jin? I don’t know, honestly. Though I did thought a lot about her right before I got dizzy. Maybe, thinking about her overwhelmed me because her absence on the show has made her presence constant on my head? Perhaps. Anyway, here are the poems. If Revolution never figured out who was the e-mailer, they’ll know now, hopefully: Poem called: To you (dedicated to Soo Jin Hwang) Often times you look so lovely Near you I wish I be closely For I never wish you be lonely Though wish happiness rains on you forever only I know you have a life you cannot deny Yet each time you greet us with a smile and hard you try But, I want you to know that is not a lie When sometimes your absence can make us shed tears or cry A smile from you One could not forget even if one tried to It’s so beautiful that almost seems not to be true Yet I can tell it is cause that’s what you love to do Tough it can be Though you never let that stop you from doing so continuously Giving us your all entirely Showing us the end result, always so pleasantly Many times you’ve given us a tour guide Telling us rules for us to abide All that time, your cheerful love, you don’t hide It is then where one feels like in heaven as through clouds one glides It’s so great to see so much outer beauty as your inner Sometimes that’s rare to even see it glimmer Thanks, and remember, the grass is always greener When you’re with your family together having dinner In the end you’re just a normal human being And I’m sorry if my words make you look more than you seem Whether overwhelming or to extreme The truth is what I truly mean Poem called: A present (dedicated to Sophia Chong) You posses a special gift With it you make our hearts lift It’s hard to explain it I mean, I’m sure you put a smile on everyone’s face every minute Beautiful, sweet, lovely, and cute Hot and sexy to boot These are the words the make perfect blend Of how God made you which I’m happy to say over and over again I can’t seem to fall asleep Let alone fall into deep When one is witnessing you Believe it or not, is so unbelievably true I don’t know what it is But, I can tell by looking at you like this I mean, my eyes only see What your beauty shows to me A lot of times you’ve looked so adorable And remained so loveable That one tries to keep a steady pose But often tumbles cause one’s looking at such a beautiful rose Your performance is always filled with happiness and energy You show us respect and dignity So glad you were brought for us to see Because you’re a beautiful addition to the Revolution family After having finished one I knew it would’ve been unfair for you to have been left with none Though, you’re just as special and I look forward to you every time you’re on Cause believe this, me you also won Poem called: Both (dedicated to both Soo Jin Hwang and Sophia Chong) Immediate joy is what I feel The feeling is surreal Let me explain, when you’re together I wish the show stayed airing forever Cheerful and fun, two words to describe you both Cause I made an oath To support you till the end Because I consider you both friends The thought of you two I hold precious in my heart A feeling that can’t be broken apart Cause of the constant love you give every time Making the flower in my heart bloom and endlessly shine I actually almost fainted one day Because your beauty shattered my consciousness away Crazy but true It all began with a small glimpse from you two I go outside and I see grass, rocks, and trees I also see animals, rivers, and leafs Would you to believe that none of these Could ever be compared to you? Cause you both are a masterpiece What you give us is what we get And that definitely aint regret The two of you I’ll never forget A memory till my days’ end I’ll protect I hope my words you both treasure Believe me is my pleasure I think you both deserve more than what you receive That I belief What, you guys think i'm crazy? For all i know, i may well be, but just listen to me. :) P.S. If you don't know who Soo Jin and Sophia are and also don't know about Revolution, clikc the following link. I'll give you a brief explenation: Asian music shows on the International Channel |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| Winged VoX | Dec 10 2003, 02:02 PM Post #2 |
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props on the poems, edwin i may have to read them again to fully appreciate them i haven't written a poem in so long and i was madly into them back in middle school i'm sure the laides appreciate your words to them ...though i bet they know it's from you Revolution people leech around in this forum so i'm sure they can pinpoint it's from you maybe they'll respond well in return possibly ... i'll just shut up now |
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| daywalker2k2 | Dec 10 2003, 03:59 PM Post #3 |
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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Nice you do have skills in the peom area, where do you come with this stuff, i know we are like almost the same so i can answer that question my self ;) |
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| AMR | Dec 10 2003, 06:49 PM Post #4 |
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nice hehe I'm gonna move this to the Revolution section so if/ when they come they will see it ^_^ |
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| christine | Dec 11 2003, 07:27 PM Post #5 |
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Edwin... You have been told in march 2003 by revolution representatives tht you are the master at writing talent... so why yu all sad and lonely these days...? You better take care of yourself or I come down there and tweak your cheeks till they bleed. Im a maniac ..but your a worse one Marbin You <<Can Answer the Question Yourself>>? OMG THAT IS THE FUNNIEST THING I EVER READ IN MY WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE ROTFL |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Dec 14 2003, 02:59 AM Post #6 |
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Lady Chris, i'll take that as a compliment. lol As for why i am sad and lonely? Soo Jin hasn't return! :cry: lol Thanks a lot you guys, all your comments mean a lot to me. But, Marbim, you asked how do i come up with this stuff, well here's the answer. I write poems because is fun for me, that's basically my first inspiration, just to do it for fun. I've also written poems because of my love to a certain someone. But, once i make the decision, i just think of that person whom i'm dedicating it to and the words suddenly appear in my head. As you can see, with someone like Soo Jin, it be hard not to say beautiful things about her, the same goes for lady Sophia. :) P.S. Lady Chris, feel free to tweak my cheeks till they bleed, i don't mind! :woohoo: :woooohoooo: :yayaya: lol |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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| daywalker2k2 | Dec 17 2003, 04:55 PM Post #7 |
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Yeah shoo keep on looking good!!!
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oh ok yeah i knew what the response was going to be ;) Kinda weird, i am like but with songs, i come up with a good beat and some words, but then i dont write them down and i forget what i said, maybe i carry a pen and paper everywhere i go. |
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| christine | Jan 7 2004, 01:54 PM Post #8 |
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I just love Edwins poems so much. . . .they are so fresh. hey Edwin, You and Soo-jin should make a cute couple..... ... because she is cute enough for the both of you-NAH !...Just kidding! I think she is so pretty...but so are you too !! hehehee :) |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Jan 23 2004, 02:37 AM Post #9 |
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You should, Marbin. Cause when you feel like you can't give anymore, that's when you gotta keep going, otherwise, the moment slips away forever. Of course i'm cute lady Christine! That's probably the reason why Soo Jin left, maybe she wanted to say something and she couldn't so she quit to prover her love to me?... lol kidding :) And, yeah, we do make a cute couple, a cute couple of friends, lady Christine. :) |
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"though the ocean is big...but it can wave and do a lot of tricks." -Val- Xbox Live Gamertag ![]() ![]() credits: Thanks to Jess (Shouling) Caliente like a volcano But beautifully bright as the sun She's my angel sistah Her name is lady Madison Yo-Tai-Keizuke Ukaji A.K.A (Also Known As) Edwin Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin) Hurry now Don't wait for time to pass you by Find a way to keep the sparks, alive alive Hurry now Don't let that someone pass you by Make the passion esscalate | |
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