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To Soo Jin and lady Sophia; Poem dedications :)
Topic Started: Dec 10 2003, 06:49 AM (330 Views)
Yo-Tai-Keizuke
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Yes, I dedicated two poems for Soo Jin and Sophia, one for each and one for both. Since I wrote these poems, I immediately wanted to share it with you guys, though had not done so till now. Reason why is because we all love Revolution and in a sense we’re part of it, so I figured, it be just as fair for you guys to read this.

Let’s begin how I got to three poems. It all started one day before going to sleep. I was very tired and I swear, one more blink and I would’ve fell asleep. But, right then the thought of Soo Jin burst into my head and decided to write her a poem out of pure fun. Though, as I was writing hers, I thought, it wouldn’t be fair if Soo Jin got one and lady Sophia didn’t, so I decided to write her one also. And, again, I felt like “Well, what if I dedicate another to both?” and that’s how I ended up with three.

I sent the poems the poem to Revolution, but I didn’t say who I was, just that that the poems were written by the e-mailer. I didn’t mention my name in hope that it made the ladies feel more special knowing an unknown stranger wrote these beautiful words. But, the number one reason I did so was the hope that I’d get to see the ladies on the show asking who did. Although, it’s just a dream of mine and I be satisfied completely knowing the ladies loved the poems.

Believe it or not, before posting this thread, three hours before, I got dizzy almost to the point where my mom wanted to take me to the hospital… What caused it you ask? Perhaps my monitor, what I ate for dinner, or the thought of Soo Jin? I don’t know, honestly. Though I did thought a lot about her right before I got dizzy. Maybe, thinking about her overwhelmed me because her absence on the show has made her presence constant on my head? Perhaps.

Anyway, here are the poems. If Revolution never figured out who was the e-mailer, they’ll know now, hopefully:

Poem called: To you (dedicated to Soo Jin Hwang)

Often times you look so lovely
Near you I wish I be closely
For I never wish you be lonely
Though wish happiness rains on you forever only

I know you have a life you cannot deny
Yet each time you greet us with a smile and hard you try
But, I want you to know that is not a lie
When sometimes your absence can make us shed tears or cry

A smile from you
One could not forget even if one tried to
It’s so beautiful that almost seems not to be true
Yet I can tell it is cause that’s what you love to do

Tough it can be
Though you never let that stop you from doing so continuously
Giving us your all entirely
Showing us the end result, always so pleasantly

Many times you’ve given us a tour guide
Telling us rules for us to abide
All that time, your cheerful love, you don’t hide
It is then where one feels like in heaven as through clouds one glides

It’s so great to see so much outer beauty as your inner
Sometimes that’s rare to even see it glimmer
Thanks, and remember, the grass is always greener
When you’re with your family together having dinner

In the end you’re just a normal human being
And I’m sorry if my words make you look more than you seem
Whether overwhelming or to extreme
The truth is what I truly mean

Poem called: A present (dedicated to Sophia Chong)

You posses a special gift
With it you make our hearts lift
It’s hard to explain it
I mean, I’m sure you put a smile on everyone’s face every minute

Beautiful, sweet, lovely, and cute
Hot and sexy to boot
These are the words the make perfect blend
Of how God made you which I’m happy to say over and over again

I can’t seem to fall asleep
Let alone fall into deep
When one is witnessing you
Believe it or not, is so unbelievably true

I don’t know what it is
But, I can tell by looking at you like this
I mean, my eyes only see
What your beauty shows to me

A lot of times you’ve looked so adorable
And remained so loveable
That one tries to keep a steady pose
But often tumbles cause one’s looking at such a beautiful rose

Your performance is always filled with happiness and energy
You show us respect and dignity
So glad you were brought for us to see
Because you’re a beautiful addition to the Revolution family

After having finished one
I knew it would’ve been unfair for you to have been left with none
Though, you’re just as special and I look forward to you every time you’re on
Cause believe this, me you also won

Poem called: Both (dedicated to both Soo Jin Hwang and Sophia Chong)

Immediate joy is what I feel
The feeling is surreal
Let me explain, when you’re together
I wish the show stayed airing forever

Cheerful and fun, two words to describe you both
Cause I made an oath
To support you till the end
Because I consider you both friends

The thought of you two I hold precious in my heart
A feeling that can’t be broken apart
Cause of the constant love you give every time
Making the flower in my heart bloom and endlessly shine

I actually almost fainted one day
Because your beauty shattered my consciousness away
Crazy but true
It all began with a small glimpse from you two

I go outside and I see grass, rocks, and trees
I also see animals, rivers, and leafs
Would you to believe that none of these
Could ever be compared to you? Cause you both are a masterpiece

What you give us is what we get
And that definitely aint regret
The two of you I’ll never forget
A memory till my days’ end I’ll protect

I hope my words you both treasure
Believe me is my pleasure
I think you both deserve more than what you receive
That I belief

What, you guys think i'm crazy? For all i know, i may well be, but just listen to me. :)

P.S. If you don't know who Soo Jin and Sophia are and also don't know about Revolution, clikc the following link. I'll give you a brief explenation:

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props on the poems, edwin
i may have to read them again to fully appreciate them
i haven't written a poem in so long and i was madly into them back in middle school
i'm sure the laides appreciate your words to them

...though i bet they know it's from you
Revolution people leech around in this forum
so i'm sure they can pinpoint it's from you

maybe they'll respond well in return
possibly
...
i'll just shut up now
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Nice you do have skills in the peom area, where do you come with this stuff, i know we are like almost the same so i can answer that question my self ;)
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nice hehe I'm gonna move this to the Revolution section so if/ when they come they will see it ^_^
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Edwin... You have been told in march 2003 by revolution representatives tht you are the master at writing talent...
so why yu all sad and lonely these days...?
You better take care of yourself or I come down there and tweak your cheeks till they bleed.

Im a maniac ..but your a worse one

Marbin You <<Can Answer the Question Yourself>>?
OMG THAT IS THE FUNNIEST THING I EVER READ IN MY WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE
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christine
Dec 11 2003, 03:27 PM
Im a maniac ..but your a worse one

Lady Chris, i'll take that as a compliment. lol As for why i am sad and lonely? Soo Jin hasn't return! :cry: lol

Thanks a lot you guys, all your comments mean a lot to me.

But, Marbim, you asked how do i come up with this stuff, well here's the answer. I write poems because is fun for me, that's basically my first inspiration, just to do it for fun. I've also written poems because of my love to a certain someone. But, once i make the decision, i just think of that person whom i'm dedicating it to and the words suddenly appear in my head. As you can see, with someone like Soo Jin, it be hard not to say beautiful things about her, the same goes for lady Sophia. :)

P.S. Lady Chris, feel free to tweak my cheeks till they bleed, i don't mind! :woohoo: :woooohoooo: :yayaya: lol
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oh ok yeah i knew what the response was going to be ;) Kinda weird, i am like but with songs, i come up with a good beat and some words, but then i dont write them down and i forget what i said, maybe i carry a pen and paper everywhere i go.
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I just love Edwins poems so much. . . .they are so fresh.

hey Edwin, You and Soo-jin should make a cute couple.....



... because she is cute enough for the both of you-NAH !...Just kidding!

I think she is so pretty...but so are you too !!

hehehee :)


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You should, Marbin. Cause when you feel like you can't give anymore, that's when you gotta keep going, otherwise, the moment slips away forever.

Of course i'm cute lady Christine! That's probably the reason why Soo Jin left, maybe she wanted to say something and she couldn't so she quit to prover her love to me?... lol kidding :)

And, yeah, we do make a cute couple, a cute couple of friends, lady Christine. :)
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Express Love: (Kuai Ti Ai Qin)

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