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My final job; Can you correct my mistakes?*Christine *
Topic Started: Nov 29 2003, 02:49 PM (111 Views)
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Dear reader,

It has recently been brought to my attention many problems.
I want for sensibilise you, talk about all unimaginable cruelties. The most horrible is experimentation: Did you know that products of your house are tested on animals? dogs, cats, rabbits, and other rodents are among the animals used to test cosmetics and household products. This is calling vivisection. For exemple, the draize test consist on the injection of detergent or product into a rabbit's eye to determine tolerance.
This is particulary painful and cruel... And this poor rabbit can be "used" more and more for all sorts of experimentation, in all his body.
Animals suffer a lot and euthanasia isn't used, so they suffer until death comes!
Did you know that go to circus, it's make die and tortue lot of wild animals?
Elephants in captivity have got disease of cardiac muscle and died.
Circus can be a good thing for some wild animals but for, it must good life's conditions. A tiger, who waited "babies" has been forced to jump in a fire's circle... that has finished with death of one of her three puppies.
Can you be happy when you know that pets are tortured?
Animals are transporting in horrible conditions, locking up, without light and food, during a long time!

How would you feel about similar treatment for an human?
I talk to you that animals were humans and that is because animals are creaturs of God, with a heart, a spirit. It'strue, they can't speak but they are alive, they give birth, they love, they play, they know the pain, they die, ...
And like us, they have rights that all must respect.
But some people, who make me ashamed to be a human, don't respect this rights and life animals are being mistreated so, now, they need your help more than ever.

Please, together, joing forces for save tthose rights and lifes.

I thank you for your attentive. I hope humans will be good and respect animals


THE END :yayaya:





I hope you like it and there arent to much mistakes!!
Thank you for your help and your ideas
I love you :shykiss:
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OH WOW ! ! That is really great work I can tell you are really smart in school. ~when you want to be~
I didn't have to correct much.only a couple of things .
I hope it was the right meaning.





Dear reader,

It has recently been brought to my attention many problems.
I want to sensibly talk to you about all unimaginable cruelties.

The most horrible is experimentation: Did you know that products of your house are tested on animals? Dogs, cats, rabbits, and other rodents are among the animals used to test cosmetics and household products. This is called vivisection. For example, the 'Draize test' consists of the injection of detergent or product into a rabbit's eye to determine tolerance.
This is particularly painful and cruel... And this poor rabbit can be "used" more and more for all sorts of experimentation, in all his body.
Animals suffer a lot and euthanasia isn't used, so they suffer until death comes!

Did you know that the circus you go to: It's where they kill and torture lot of wild animals? Elephants in captivity have got disease of cardiac muscle and died.
Circus can be a good thing for some wild animals, but for some, it must change the conditions. A tiger, who waited "babies" has been forced to jump in a fire's circle ... that has finished with death of one of her three cubs.
Can you be happy when you know that pets are tortured?

Animals that are transported..suffer horrible conditions, locked up, without light and food, during a long time! How would you feel about similar treatment for a human?

I talk to you as though animals were humans, and that is because animals are creatures of God, with a heart, a spirit. It's true, they can't speak but they are alive, they give birth, they love, they play, they know the pain, they die, ...
And like us, they have rights that all must respect.
But some people, who make me ashamed to be a human, don't respect these rights and live animals are being mistreated so, now, they need your help more than ever.

Please, together, joining forces will save those rights and lives.
I thank you for your attention. I hope humans will be good and respect animals.

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:cry: Christine :cry:
THANK YOU
It's becuz you have help that my work can be good (It hink it's not soo good, I'm not smart!)
Thx too to David and Seoul survivor, I have taken a lil your ideas :yayaya:

:shykiss: *big hugs Christine*
*big hugs Seoul and David*
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hehe NP Emilie :love:
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Christine's final edition looks pretty good.

Best luck with the assignment!!

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You know....
I LOVE YOU :love:
YOU'RE MY FRIEND AND I'M HAPPY
How can I thank you???
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It really IS a good paper, Emile..

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yes hehe better then i could do :cry:
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Is it a paper for school? Or what? I'm slow ^^;; Sorry ahaha.... but wow it's really good... persuasive....! Nice job ^^
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THANK YOU :cry: :yayaya:
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that really is a good paper, Emilie.

good luck! i hope you do well!
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that really is a good paper, Emilie.

good luck! i hope you do well!

Thanx for your support
I hope too :yayaya:
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Very very good lady Emilie! No doubt you'll get an A+. :)
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Very very good lady Emilie! No doubt you'll get an A+. :)

Muahaha
In France it's 20/20 and not A+
If I have 15/20 I'm happy, and it's Christine who have the best mark, not me :yayaya:

Thanx alot all :shykiss:
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