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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 27 2003, 03:06 PM (87 Views) | |
| Yoo | Nov 27 2003, 03:06 PM Post #1 |
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Votre pire cauchemar
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It's really important for me, and I hope you want help me I have a letter to read in english and this is the subject "Imagine you're an animal rights activist and you have decided to publish a letter in a newspaper. You want to protest against hunting, experimentation on animals, and the shipments of live animals" So I read a letter, who start by "dear reader", and the text will do 200 words Can you say to me all your ideas, can you do this job who is easy for you but hard for me becuz I'm bad in english Please help me, write all you want here Thank you very much it's for monday please help me, stupid french gurl :cry: |
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| AMR | Nov 27 2003, 04:59 PM Post #2 |
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Dear Reader I'd just like to inform you that Life animals are being mistreated and they need your help more than ever. Well idk thats a start like it or no? :oops: |
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| Seoul Survivor | Nov 27 2003, 08:53 PM Post #3 |
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Thanks Jay!
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"Dear Fellow Animal Lover, It has recently been brought to my attention, many problems, that I was not aware of, prior to this. Did you know that $$$$s are being used, in a torturous manner, for the betterment of cologne manufacturers?? And that *****s are being placed in crates, only slightly larger than an outhouse for a shipment of ### days? How would you feel about similar treatment for you or members of YOUR FAMILY..." How's that sounding? Of course fill in the marks with real animals.... Best Luck! |
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| Yoo | Nov 28 2003, 02:12 AM Post #4 |
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Thank you guys, I know how I star my letter now :shykiss: *hugs* |
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| christine | Nov 28 2003, 10:32 AM Post #5 |
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Yoo, You aren't stupid. If you were, you wouldn't be in school? ...something like that LOL If you like this letter, or If you want more help , I am glad to help. I can change the words you have difficulty with. This is fun for me because I like to help people with language because Im going to be an ESl teacher OKIES? ____________________________________________________________________ Dear reader, I am a student of English. and i was assigned to write an essay about the inhumane treatnment of animals. In my search for materials on this topic I have been shocked to find that there are some people that are committing, and getting away with so many atrocities. They take the defenseless animal, and perform unimaginable cruelties. Commercial hunting tactics...corporate experimentation tactics.. and the commercial production and sales machine.... Also they use devices on them that look like Medevil times. Imagine the fear in the poor little heart of an animal when he sees a chainsaw coming at him? it must lose control of its bodiliy functions, and smell really...really bad.. and the sound of it's scream is said to be very horrific. that is not a great way for a little animal to be treated. I sincerely believe that these people make me ashamed to be a human. Why can't other humans wake up and disallow this ..? Why do they let it go on? with out even a few minutes at least? without seeking each other out and joing forces and stopping it. I AM not really an "animal rights activist,"....But someone who was finding out facts...Just writing this paper and saying what I think Thank you for reading. |
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| Yoo | Nov 28 2003, 03:00 PM Post #6 |
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:cry: Christine, you...you...you're so nice :cry: OMG your help is so important and you're letter is so good!! You can understand so good the animals, with your help and help of David and Seoul survivor, I hope I can do a good job Can I take few of your ideas? and one part of your letter Christine? When I have finished this letter I post and you can correct my error? Thank you very much, you're so nice and :shykiss: yay* all red and hugs all of you* |
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| christine | Nov 28 2003, 03:39 PM Post #7 |
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Yoo Yay .. im glad you like my letter and glad to help out . Let us all see what you finally come up with when you get it together. |
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| Yoo | Nov 28 2003, 03:50 PM Post #8 |
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I'm happy to see that ther are pple who are not egoist in this world I thank you, I do my job and post him Are you OK for correct my errors (grammatical and others)? |
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| christine | Nov 28 2003, 04:00 PM Post #9 |
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I can help with corectiing errors, too. Bang Away! (Start Writing! ) lol |
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| Yoo | Nov 28 2003, 04:12 PM Post #10 |
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Yeah I start :yayaya: |
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| Yo-Tai-Keizuke | Dec 3 2003, 02:31 PM Post #11 |
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H.O.T's Wu Jiok
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Lady Emilie, sorry i wasn't here to help you with your situation. Though i see help from others was always near you. :) |
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| Yoo | Dec 6 2003, 11:33 AM Post #12 |
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Oh it's OK your spirit was with me and like that you have help me XD :yayaya: |
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