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[x]Prince of Space
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Topic Started: Wed Jul 19, 2017 3:35 pm (1,415 Views)
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SenMontague
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Wed Jul 19, 2017 3:35 pm
Post #1
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- Posts:
- 58
- Group:
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- Member
- #12,741
- Joined:
- November 15, 2016
- Gender
- Male
- Species
- Tiefling (prev. Human)
- Build
- Runner
- Height
- 5'11"
- Weight
- 156 lbs
- Age
- 20
- Hair
- Black
- Eyes
- Blue, orange/black sclera
- Skin
- Tan
- Name
- Sen Montague
- Alias
- Black Hunter, Smoke Hazard
- Link to Inventory
- http://imythess.com/topic/7003071/1/
- Link to Alt Registry
- http://imythess.com/topic/7009110/1/
- Link to Extended Description
- http://imythess.com/topic/7003074/1/#new
- Link to History
- http://s2.zetaboards.com/Imythess/topic/7022394/1/#new
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Prerequisites Checklist:
- Who am I? Sen Montague
- Is this character active, at least a few weeks old and unlikely to be removed in the near future? Yes, he is!
- Do I have at least 150 gold sitting on this character's account? Yep, once my selling transaction gets filled.
Why should you accept this custom PrC concept? Well, Sen isn't an Imy-original character. He stemmed from a project I'm working on with my girlfriend, and I wanted to give Sen his original abilities to make him feel more whole. Also, explosions. Who doesn't love explosions?
Prince of Space Custom PrC: Sen Montague
You are the destroyer, the honed, curved scythe that cuts away the rot of the world. You will rend those who stand in your way, with the powers of the universe at your disposal.
The following abilities are magical
Prerequisites
- Skil: Knowledge Arcana: Journeyman or above
<This is where your pricing table will go.>
Level One
- Rend: The most basic of the abilities of the Prince of Space. By maintaining physical contact with any object for ten seconds, you can completely erase that object from existence in an explosion of green light. However, this ability initially only works on inanimate objects, such as a golem's body, not spells or living beings. For every level of this class you possess, the object size that you can destroy becomes larger, and you can rend objects more quickly. At Level 3, you can Rend living beings. At Level 5, you can even Rend spells, similar to Counterspell
- Concussive Blast: A short-range explosion of green energy that emerges from your hands, blowing enemies back, causing mild physical damage. You can use this effectively in melee combat, but it only has a range of about five feet, so it cannot be used long range. This ability has a one-post cooldown.
Level Two
- Explosive Weapon: Charge your weapon, or your fists, with destructive energy. Your weapon will appear to have a green aura surrounding it, and when you land a blow, a huge blast of energy will blow both you and your target away, causing moderate physical damage to both of you. This ability can be used as many times as you want, but it deals more and more recoil each time you use it.
Level Three
- Dark Energy Bomb: Summon a large ball of dark energy in your hands, then throw it at your target. It does not deal any damage, but causes the distance between you and your target to increase slowly. Your target will not be able to walk towards you, but will seem to be pushed back by an invisible wall that can potentially crush them against objects. This ability is extremely draining and can only be used once every fight.
Level Four
- Black Hole Bomb: Summon a small, speedy bolt of green energy. Upon contact with your target, the bolt expands quickly outwards and becomes a quasi-black hole, binding your target to place and dealing constant moderate physical damage to them for two posts. You can charge this projectile to make a bigger black hole, but doing so gives you moderate mana fatigue.
- Void Bolt: Fire a fast-moving bolt of green energy from your fingertips. Upon making contact, your target will slowly begin to experience an increasing choking feeling, as if they were in an environment with no air. After two posts, your target will begin to experience severe mental and physical fatigue. After another post, your target will collapse, but after waking up, they will be completely fine.
Level Five
- Spatial Hole: An incredibly useful spell. Create a hole in the fabric of space itself, leading directly to anywhere you desire, even into nothingness. This spell can allow you and anyone else to travel instantly between any two points, even between Planes. You can also use this spell to open a hole directly into the void and push an opponent into it, leaving them trapped in the void forever. You can open this hole anywhere, in the ground, in the air, beneath your feet, any which way you desire. You can also create holes inside or on targets to cause internal or external damage to them, but this requires more mana to do.
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Aeyliea
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Sun Aug 6, 2017 1:34 pm
Post #2
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- #12,020
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- May 26, 2013
- Gender
- Male
- Species
- Human
- Build
- Athletic
- Height
- 5' 3"
- Weight
- 147
- Age
- 37
- Hair
- White
- Eyes
- Blue-grey
- Skin
- Fair
- Link to Inventory
- http://imythess.com/topic/5170110/1/
- Link to Alt Registry
- http://imythess.com/topic/5170155/1/
- Link to Extended Description
- http://imythess.com/topic/5169779/1/#new
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Sorry it took so long to look at this for this first time.
Level one includes an instant kill, which is not acceptable, as does level 3 and 5. Once these are handled, we can resume the review
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SenMontague
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Wed Aug 9, 2017 6:53 pm
Post #3
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- Posts:
- 58
- Group:
- Role-Players
- Member
- #12,741
- Joined:
- November 15, 2016
- Gender
- Male
- Species
- Tiefling (prev. Human)
- Build
- Runner
- Height
- 5'11"
- Weight
- 156 lbs
- Age
- 20
- Hair
- Black
- Eyes
- Blue, orange/black sclera
- Skin
- Tan
- Name
- Sen Montague
- Alias
- Black Hunter, Smoke Hazard
- Link to Inventory
- http://imythess.com/topic/7003071/1/
- Link to Alt Registry
- http://imythess.com/topic/7009110/1/
- Link to Extended Description
- http://imythess.com/topic/7003074/1/#new
- Link to History
- http://s2.zetaboards.com/Imythess/topic/7022394/1/#new
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Here we go! Edited and a totally new PrC!
Prince of Space Custom PrC: Sen Montague
You are the destroyer, the honed, curved scythe that cuts away the rot of the world. You will rend those who stand in your way, with the powers of the universe at your disposal.
The following abilities are magical
Prerequisites Skil: Knowledge Arcana: Journeyman or above
<This is where your pricing table will go.>
Level One
- Concussive Blast: A short-range explosion of black energy that emerges from your hands, blowing enemies back, causing mild physical damage. You can use this effectively in melee combat, but it only has a range of about two meters, so it cannot be used long range. This ability has a one-post cooldown.
Level Two
- Explosive Weapon: Charge your weapon, or your fists, with destructive energy. Your weapon of choice will appear to have a black aura surrounding it, and when you land a blow, a huge blast of energy will blow both you and your target away, causing moderate physical damage to both of you. This ability can be used as many times as you want, but it deals more and more recoil each time you use it.
Level Three
- Dark Energy Bomb: Summon a large ball of dark energy in your hands, then throw it at your target. It does not deal any damage, but creates an invisible barrier between you and your target that lasts for two posts. After this barrier fades, you are inflicted with moderate mana fatigue.
Level Four
- Black Hole Bomb: Summon a small, speedy bolt of black energy. Upon contact with your target, the bolt expands quickly outwards and becomes a quasi-black hole, binding your target to place and dealing constant moderate physical damage to them for two posts. This ability can be used twice before requiring a two post cooldown.
- Void Bolt: Fire a fast-moving bolt of black energy from your fingertips. Upon making contact, your target will slowly begin to experience an increasing choking feeling, as if they were in an environment with no air. After two posts, your target will begin to experience severe mental and physical fatigue. After another post, your target will collapse, but after waking up, they will be completely fine.
Level Five
- Dark Matter Blade: Gather invisible dark matter from your surroundings and forge it into a dark two-handed sword. This weapon remains active for five posts, during which time you cannot use any other spell or weapons (but any enhancing spells that were cast before summoning the spell are allowed). This blade can be used as a normal melee weapon, but pouring mana into the blade will activate a gravity effect that slowly causes opponents within a meter range to be dragged towards the blade. Each strike from the blade deals moderate physical damage. After the weapon is put away, you suffer extreme mana fatigue which dissipates after two posts.
- Atom Grenade: By maintaining contact with any object, you can begin to control the vibration of their atoms in the area you are directly touching. You can choose to slow down their atomic movement or speed it up, thereby either giving the effect of freezing or burning any object without the use of ice or flame. Doing this requires an extensive amount of mana, and if you break contact with the target, the effect is reversed immediately and the affected atoms return to normal. During this time, you are completely vulnerable to attacks from others and must rely on others to defend you, as you cannot use other spells or weapons during this time at all. After using this ability, it requires three posts of cool-down to be used again.
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Leyanni[Adm]
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Sat Sep 2, 2017 7:58 pm
Post #4
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- Half-Elven
- Height
- 5'7"
- Age
- 28
- Hair
- Black
- Eyes
- Yellow
- Skin
- Dark Brown
- Name
- Leyanni Kah
- Link to Inventory
- http://imythess.com/topic/890145/1/
- Link to Alt Registry
- http://imythess.com/topic/5094692/1/
- Link to Extended Description
- http://imythess.com/topic/889883/1/
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Black hole bomb - "binding" meaning are they drawn in and it is difficult to escape or are they fixed in place.
Void bolt - automatic unconsciousness isn't exactly fun to deal with. This needs to be toned down.
Atomic grenade - Atoms are a bit...out of reach, I guess? I dunno, slightly too modern. This needs to explain how it affects items/objects vs non-player characters vs player characters.
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Seele
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Sat Oct 7, 2017 8:58 pm
Post #5
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- Posts:
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- Group:
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- #1,002
- Joined:
- July 31, 2004
- Gender
- Male
- Species
- Elf
- Height
- 6'6"
- Weight
- 180 lbs.
- Build
- Slender
- Age
- 204 (appears 26)
- Hair
- Straw Blonde
- Eyes
- Green
- Skin
- Pale
- Name
- Seele
- Link to Inventory
- http://imythess.com/topic/873485/1/#y908447
- Link to Alt Registry
- http://imythess.com/topic/5119462/1/#new
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This hasn't been looked at in a month. Sen, are you still interested in this cPrC? If not I'm going to mark it inactive in a week (on 10/14).
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Snellopy[Adm]
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Wed Nov 8, 2017 2:12 am
Post #6
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Shop Ninja
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- Dwarf
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- Stocky
- Height
- 4ft 2inches
- Age
- 342
- Hair
- Red of beard and hair
- Eyes
- Green
- Name
- Snellopy Stonewill
- Link to Inventory
- http://imythess.com/topic/5189982/1/
- Link to Alt Registry
- http://imythess.com/topic/5189021/1/#new
- Link to Extended Description
- http://imythess.com/topic/5189984/1/
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No response since Seele poked you mate, so I have cancelled this Custom PrC request. You are welcome to try again, mate.
Edited by Snellopy, Wed Nov 8, 2017 2:15 am.
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