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My books!; Hey I'm working on a new book!
Topic Started: Nov 27 2005, 02:59 PM (471 Views)
tipluvscali
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Hola! I'm writing a new book that hopefully I'll finish. (I've started like 15 and haven't passed page 100 yet!!) But anyway, It's awesome, It's about this girl who goes to school (HIlmar) but then she falls asleep during second period on the first day. She has this dream where she has 15 tests, and she can only fail 5 of them. So far she's failed two and passed two. I'm on like chapter 7 out of at least 18. The last chapter (or chapter 18) the test is to save the world, and she fails, but then right before the world is gonna blow up, she wakes up.
It's gonna be good, if you have any idea for some tests these are the ones that I already have, so they can give you an idea of what I'm looking for.
(CH. 4) Remembering about a note (fail)
(CH. 5) Keeping her closests friends (fail)
(CH. 6) Surviving her thoughts (pass)
(i need one for the next chapter, I would like it to be create ______)
(Ch 10) Prevent mereor from demolishing school (fail)
(CH. 15) Bring friends back together to be able to eventually save world (Pass)
(Ch. 18) Save the world (Fail)
As you can see I have a few more spots to fill up so again if you have any ideas just post them here, they would be a major help even if I don't use them they could get me thinking about other things!
Gracias (I'm not sure if that's how you spell it but I think that I'm close)
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Oh my my! This one sounds... ahh.. quite interesting! ... Yet, so did Blackmail... somewhat... until I started reading it.. *rememebers* ... page 2 billion, 9 million, 842.... .... ... still... shopping... for .... clothes... ahhh!!! It was about CAMP! ... *sighs* :( ....

Oh! Right!
Well, hey, why are you giving away the ending? That ... well, blanky: RUINS the point of even READING the book! .... Understand?
Yeppers... I'd considser not saying much more of the last 3/4 of the book... so we don't all get tired about it even before we get the end. ... :P

Also, a hint... Stick to English... So that all users can understand you, and two: so you won't be saying bad words in other lanugauges because of not knowing how to spell words....... ....
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Well I wanted them to get an idea of what it was going to be like, and there's a lot of things that I didn't put in there. And I never got passed like page 50 with Blackmail, and they were not shopping forever, close but if I pulled out a copy of it you would find that that did not happen.

And I think that my spelling of Spanish is very good, considering that I have never taken a class, and those are words that almost everyone knows.
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Okay, yes yes... I suppose getting an idea is good, but to give away the ending? That just breaks it!
Oh whatever, Blackmail had come... and now it's gone... :) Time to forget about it (thankfully? :P)
.. Yes, your spelling could be good, but if it's not English, it probably shouldn't go here.
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good job keep working on it and sometime you may publish it nationwide.
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thank you, but i need ideas! my hope is to finish by Feb. 4 (my birthday) and i'm still on ch. 7, cause i've been really busy.
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um boyfriends, teachers, detentions, p.e, weight, bullies
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thanks for the ideas, :D but over Christmas I changed the book, so it's all new and only adat knows what it's about, I'm not sure if it'll be on Star, but it might be.
Thanks though
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well those topics i gave you are good topics for chapters
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Ah! Tell me about this book! I'm writing a book myself, and would very much enjoy reading yours! What's the new idea you thought up?
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I should think that Tip should keep her new ideas quiet; seeing as how... un-secret her ideas were with the last ... try .... ....
As you for, Cupids, I think you should start your own post talking about your book so we can hear about that too! (Since talking about it here would be going off-topic, which is against the rules).
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Way ahead of you, Adat. All the same, all she needs is a synopsis. No spoilers in a synopsis! Just cliff hangers! ^^ ... now I really want to know what she's writing about... I loathe secrets.
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well, I'm writing about a girl
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*chuckles* Marvelously said, Cupid, just fabulous.
... And Tipster; that is just astounding! I would've never guessed!
[size=1]*to self*... On the billionth page, will she still be shopping?[/size]
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cupidsvictim you are a great writer why don't you give her some cliff hanging tips?
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